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RavenDrakil — Reindal can't stand still p4
Published: 2009-06-11 15:23:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 4425; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 69
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And here is the last page, at the moment Reindal's powers have a weakness ( but she is working to get rid of it now ), she needs to say the magical words to use it ( the "strange" writing in the second page ), I think the second row of pannels is great, how Kate promises not to laugh and then she just explodes seeing the outfit in place.
I love the Gibbets crazyness too,specially in the last pannel where two are thinking in join the fun where the third prefers to bother the cat like he did here [link] , I hope I made them as Kate thought they are.
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No special idea after this page, just an open ending for the comic, it seems that in the end Reindal "games" will have consequences, hehe.
Raven,Reindal ©
Kate,The Gibbets ©
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Comments: 40
Very likable idea, good plot and funny art. I especially like little buggers that tied Reindal, but are otherwise useless... bugging the cat etc.
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Thanks a lot! Glad you find it funny that was the idea behind it.
Oh, but the Gibbets aren't useless, I think they crazy mind can be useful.
The one bugging the cat comes from the previous comic Kate did about them.
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I know... still they are useless when compared with mine Inspiration Muse... A Ballet Dancing Swordsman. He can sure dance... but don't ask him for good synonym.
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A ballet dancing swordsman? This sounds like he will give you good ideas.
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You would think so... but I laugh to hard to hear anything
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Oh and Raven thank you so so much for this. I really owe you big time for this wonderful gift. IT's so lovely. I'm so happy. X3 I will be doing a lot for you. >=3 You're inspiring me so much, I'm sure the gibbets won't like that. Hahaha! XD
Thank you very much my friend. Your skills and at for comics are one of the best. =3 *captures in a hug* X3 Mmmmmmm.
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You are very wellcome!! You don't have to worry, when I have an idea that I like I want to put them in paper, the best is that you really like it.
I'm looking forward to see what you have in mind, but I'm making the Gibbets angry!? This can't be good, hahaha.
No problem Kate! Thanks a lot for the kind words! *hugs back*
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Is Raven angry in the second panel? X3 Or am I having a small poke at her misfortune? X3
I'm sorry, but if I really did see you in an outfit like that, you've read me like a book.....I would laugh...so hard. XD And I wouldn't be able to stop for a while. XD I apologise for laughing Raven...but it's just too funny. Both our expressions in the fifth panel are just wonderful. They are definitely a favourite for me. X3
Some sweet vengeance is in store and I can't wait. *rubs hands together* Reindal you're gonna get it baaaaad. >=3
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Angry? ... *puts his hand on the whip* of cooourse not Kate.
Oh as a side note, I think it should be "his" misfortune, haha.
I don't know why but I was sure you would do that. and it was perfect for these pannels too, in the fifth one the expresions are just great. Glad you like them.
Yep, Reindal is going to get some vengeance and I think she deserves it.
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*looks at his skirt and grins* No, I think I meant she. *snickers and runs away* HAHAHA! XD
Hahaha, I just love the look of fury on your face. XD
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*Puts an evil smile* Ooooook... *Use his whip as a lasso and traps Kate pinning her arms to her body* Don't run away already. We are going to have a little talk.
Now you said "I meant a she", the funny is that a very good friend of mine and my mother say that I am very womanish for a man, hahaha, maybe that's the reason I have this crazy mind.
This face was incredible, when I got it drawn I thought, it's just like I imagined.
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Your welcome.. Keep up the great work!
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Looks like Reindal's gonna get a whole heap of payback. Serves her right, and quite a fitting punishment for such if I do say so myself.
The comic was a great trip overall. A hilarious yet somewhat embarrassing one, but nonetheless a good trip with a worthwhile ending. Fantastic job, overall!
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Haha, yes she she is. I suppose it's fair enough, right?
I'm happy you find it hilarious it was the idea behind the comic. Haha, and it sure was embarassing but you know? even I don't know why I think that this outfit doesn't looks bad on Raven, I have an idea and I like to hear some opinions maybe you can give your opinion about it: I'm thinking on keeping this outfit for Raven, something like if he wears it his evil side comes out or something like that, just a crazy thought but, what do you think?
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I admit, I've heard of crazier ideas before, so I really don't see a problem with such an idea.
Besides, it's not like he's gonna be wearing that suit a lot anyway............right?
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Glad to hear that, it's just something that came to my mind, and he is not going to wear it a lot, don't worry. You'll see him in his normal clothes a lot.
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Guukan: *drops from the vent* Perhaps I may be of assistance. You all seem upset. You all want vengeance on Reindal. Well, this would make your wrath all the more effective. *pulls out a bottle of pale pink, opaque liquid* It's a special contact potion that's supposed to soften skin. It does that, indeed, but it has a side effect that I have no intention of fixing... It boosts the user's ticklishness threefold.
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It boost users ticklishness too!? I don't know if it's a great idea, I'm a bit exposed in that outfit.
Oh wait! maybe I can ask Kate to use it on Reindal.
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Guukan: *smiles* You got the idea now. Just rub it into her skin like ointment and presto!
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Guukan, you have some interesting inventions, even he is not here don't let the Doc to know about them or he'll try to recruit you, and this can be dangerous.
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Guukan: Let him try and recruit me! He'd only get my polite refusal. I've gotten out of some nasty scrapes set up by my own Doc, Van Tessel, you know. Even so, I'll try to avoid pointing my abilities out to him... I have enough psycho sadists after my fluffy tail without adding your '
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I see, well then, if you have this affair in control there is no need to worry about it.
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Guukan: Yeah. Anyhoo... interested in the potion? Take it. Free. No strings attached. Have fun. Knock yourself out... Well, no, knock Reindal out.
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Thanks for the potion Guukan, I'll make a good use of it.
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Guukan: Good to hear. Let me know if you run out... I wrote down the recipe, and I have a good amount stockpiled. No shelf life, you know. It's got shelf immortality.
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Hehe, don't worry I'll tell you, specially if you don't have problem with the amount of sources.
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Guukan: No prob at all!
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...and sure enough, I was right! Nice comic, Raven.
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Yep she got a bit in problems in the end.
Thanks a lot!
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This was easily the funniest page. Kate and Raven's expression are top notch! Him mentioning the outfit came with a whip was golden as well, fits perfectly! A shame the comic had to end here, but it was good while it lasted! I bet Reindal will reget wearing such a revealing outfit now 
I must also say that it's pretty interesting that despite being black and white, you still color their eyes. Gives a bit more life to it, I'd say.
Also worth mentioning that I still love the knotted gags you draw~ I really need to practice them some more.
Overall, very interesting and funny comic! I'm sure others will like it as well, even if it is quite different. Well done, RavenDrakil! I'm extremely happy and flattered to have been a sort of inspiration for this comic 
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Haha, this one was perfect like you said. The expresions took some work but when I saw them finished I just thought "that's great, just as I wanted".
That whip line come up directly too, it's part of this change of mood in Raven.
I loved the combination of all B&W with the eyes in colour, I think they are a part of the char itself, don't know why.
And thanks about the knotted gags, you know what I recomend, practise makes it perfect.
I'm really glad you like it and it seems that people like it too, I was worried specially for the Raven in domme outfit part, I thought that people wouldn't like it.
Talking about that, I have an idea I'd like to hear some opinions: even I don't know why I like how Raven looks in that outfit, I am thinking on keep this outfit for him, something like if he wears his evil side comes out or something like that. Just a crazy thought but, what do you think?
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I think that you could definitely work the outfit in one way or another; and I think that you should if you like it so much! No reason not to draw what you like after all
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You got the idea perfectly, something that could lead to punctual moments as something unexpected, here has been funny afterall so it could be a good idea to keep it. I think that I'll work on it, Raven's "domme side" will appear again.
Thanks for giving the opinion, I know it is a very crazy idea so I really appreciate you've told me your thought.
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