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Update of fav.me/d6tsusa________
*As he opened the doors and stepped inside, Edgar felt the airs of work and and familiarity greet his senses. Though it had been considerable time since he came to this gym, he still remembered the smell of leather, sweat, and air* As he mused over past memories, something caught his attention: it was someone jumping rope in one of the open areas of the room. A new face, Edgar thought, but as he approached, he saw that this trainee looked a bit older than himself, but the strange thing was the gold-looking laurel crown nestled in his hair, and what looked to be a pair of white wings.*
A few minutes later, the winged trainee stopped to catch his breath, when he saw that he was not alone.
Pit: Oh, can I help you?
Edgar: Maybe .. *ahem*
Pit: Um, why are you looking at ... oh.. it must be these.. *Pit gestures to his wings*
Edgar: Oh, forgive me for that. It's been so long... I did used to train here.
Pit: THe name's Pit.
Edgar: Edgar Voldge, at your service.
Pit: Hm... used to train here? I as wondering if there were any other regulars here.
Edgar: Far as I know, there was only one- he had spiky hair, a mark on his left cheek, wore a grey and white headband.
Pit: You must mean Scythe, then?
Edgar: Yes... *looks around,* He isn't here, is he?
Pit: Nope, he went out for roadwork, a while ago.
Edgar: Oh, good. I was hoping to get a little warmed up before he came back.
Pit: Warmed up, huh? *an idea comes to him* I could help you with that, if you want?
Edgar: In what way?
Pit: *points to the ring behind him* Sparring, of course. You feel like going a few rounds?
Edgar: *thinks for a bit* Yes, that sounds like a good idea, let me go change for a bit.. *heads off to the locker room*
Pit: *thinking* This could be fun, I can see how fare I've come... though I don't know about him...
A short while later, Edgar emerges from teh locker room, changed in to a pair of white trunks with blakc stripe trim. A pair of orange gloves under one arm. Pit was waiting in the ring, , his own red and gold gloves on.*
Edgar: It's been a while since I've done this, I hope I'm not too rusty..
Pit: DOn't worry about it, I'll put you thorugh your paces... but I hope you odn't go down so easily *thinking* Heh, I might knock him down a couple of times- have some fun with him..
Edgar: *thinking* He seems confident... too much, it seems... *puts own his own gloves* *speaking* Okay, I'm ready when you are..
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I ended up adding some minor details, mostly with Pit- a little more hair. It took a bit of work to colro this, but for some reason, writing in the descriptoin is taking longer than usual- almost to a crawl.. ><
Despite that, however, the first round is ready to begin, but how will it go: Will Pit have an eas, or does Edgar have something up his sleeve?
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Pit belongs to Nintendo,
Edgar Voldge belongs to me?
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Comments: 56
ravenf6 In reply to CosmikArts [2013-11-13 21:20:55 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Thanks for the support. He's going to be finished when I'm done with him.
Edgar: Um, Pit, it's not a good idea to boast...
Pit: You're just jealous because I have someone supporting me for a change.
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AzaSket [2013-11-13 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]
Now that it's fully colored, expect more damaging things the two can do to each other ^^
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ravenf6 In reply to AzaSket [2013-11-13 03:48:06 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Oh yeah, he's going to be finished when I'm done with him!
Edgar: A little too soon to make those calls, don't you think?
Pit: Maybe, but I'll still going to give you a few lessons.
Edgar: Good grief...
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SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 02:55:11 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I'm digging your black tank top, Pit. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 03:07:58 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Well, I had one under my toga, so why not? Hm, that gives me an idea...
Edgar: I just wonder how you sleep- i bet tossing and turning is a pain with those wings..
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 03:33:45 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Oh, something like a full shot, nothing too much.
Edgar: Laying it on a little thick, aren't we, Pit?
Pit: grrr.....
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 04:01:13 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Of me. What else?
Edgar: Someone's go delusions of grandeur..
PIt: Better than having a chicken's comb for a head!
Edgar: And how is that worse than an angel that can't fly?
Pit: ................
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 04:16:41 +0000 UTC]
I'd suppose you would like a statue of yourself showing off your heavenly might in the meantime, eh Pit?
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 04:33:54 +0000 UTC]
Pit: I'm surprised no one's made one, yet. I did save the world from a mad god, last year.
Edgar: Um, I hate to burst your bubble, Pit, but there's two things about that: One, that was last year. Two , that was after you screamed "I'm finished!" dozens of times over..
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 04:37:26 +0000 UTC]
Well, he did saved our souls from being consumed last year...... And he did say "I'm finished!" a lot. Still, you know the old saying, throw the dog a bone. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 04:44:49 +0000 UTC]
Edgar: Fair enough... though the saying 'whipped dogs bark the loudest' keeps coming back to mind..
Pit: Sounds like you want to start now instead of waiting for the opening bell * begins pounding his gloves together*
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 04:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that is, if the next sketch is drawn out sooner.
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Jenaku [2013-11-13 02:12:17 +0000 UTC]
(Looks even more awesome in color, as usual! Cool lead in with the description and dialogue too!)
Jumpy: Yeah! Go Edgar! Show the angel guy how it's done! He won't be able to fly out of this!
(Okay, pardon the impromptu mini RP dialogue. And I also know that Pit can't fly unless he has help from Palutena! Wonder what she would think of this match? Anyway, kudos to you again!)
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ravenf6 In reply to Jenaku [2013-11-13 03:18:41 +0000 UTC]
Edgar: Hmm?
Pit: Hey, when did I become cannon fodder? One day, I will fly all by myself.
Edgar: this is getting stranger by the minute...
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ravenf6 In reply to SBGF312 [2013-11-13 02:02:15 +0000 UTC]
Edgar: We haven't started, yet.
Pit: I hope it's soon..
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SBGF312 In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 02:08:36 +0000 UTC]
oh.... excuse me... hehehe I always get excited hehe...
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ravenf6 In reply to SBGF312 [2013-11-13 02:55:21 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Well, I can't say I blame you. I was just as excited, last year..
Edgar: Well, can't do much until the next draft is ready..
Pit: And I thought I broke a lot of 4th walls...
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 03:19:54 +0000 UTC]
If Edgar was a knight, he would be dubbed 'Sir Edgar 'Breaks-the-Fourth-Walls-A-Lot''
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 03:37:19 +0000 UTC]
Edgar: What a corny title...
Pit: No arguments there..
Edgar: Well, it's not as bad as. What did they call you? Pit-stain?
Pit: Pitoo......
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 04:17:14 +0000 UTC]
Looks like someone's due for a very quick and painful sparring session after this one. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 04:31:14 +0000 UTC]
Pit: You better believe it. This redhead will make a good warm up for that!
Edgar:: For an angel, you sure are hotheaded...
Pit: It'll be your turn to say "I'm finished!" soon...
Edgar: This angel is crazy!
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-13 04:34:56 +0000 UTC]
To Edgar: The things that he puts up with almost every day, I don't blame him for it.
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-13 04:39:35 +0000 UTC]
Edgar: Maybe, but one would think for an angel of his age, he'd learn how to take things more in stride..
Pit: What was that??
Edgar: See what I mean?
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-14 01:07:45 +0000 UTC]
Now don't go beating each other just yet before the first part of Round 1 is drawn.
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-14 01:23:21 +0000 UTC]
Edgar: I have no problem with that.
PIt: Come on, come on, let's go, red-head- you and me!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-18 23:49:47 +0000 UTC]
Better save you're energy Pit. Who knows how long it'll take for the next pic to come up?
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-19 00:01:57 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Do you know something I don't?
Edgar: *thinking* Here we go....
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-19 00:04:16 +0000 UTC]
Even if I do know, I wouldn't let it get past my lips. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-19 00:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Oh, don't leave me hanging...
Edgar: *thinking* Poor choice of words...
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-19 00:15:23 +0000 UTC]
No really. I have no idea myself either.
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-19 00:20:27 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Oh , come one. At least tell me this isn't one of those 'Secrets from everybody' deals I keep hearing about from Hyrule...
Edgar: I'd heard comedy was self-deprication, but this takes the cake.
Pit: Cake? when did we get cake?
Edgar: ...
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-19 00:30:20 +0000 UTC]
So until then, I suggest you two play the waiting game until the bell rings in the next sketch. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-19 00:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Oh, that's no fun- I had to play that game for 25 years.. ><
Edgar: What a mess... *begins shadowboxing*
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-19 00:50:51 +0000 UTC]
Look on the bright side. Better a week or two rather than just 25 years to wait for a match to start. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-19 00:55:43 +0000 UTC]
Pit: I guess you're right... *sees Edgar shadowboxing, then decides to do the same* *thinking* No sense in doing nothing.....
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-22 03:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Good news guys! The next sketch is up, so you can finally get to clobbering each other. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-22 03:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Ack! I'm glad for that, but I wish it was done under better circumstances..
Me: What's the matter?
Pit: I'm the one getting clobbered!
Me: This is boxing, Pit: Pain comes with the territory.
Edgar: Well, that's your fault for having a bad defense.
DP: That goes without saying.
Scythe: Yep. You left yourself wide open, Pit. Reminds me of what would say: "Don't like getting hit? Move!"
Pit: Things haven't changed at all.... TT_TT....
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-22 03:21:14 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Nothing starts out the way we wanted. You have to fight to actually EARN anything, you know.
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-22 03:26:02 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Are you saying I haven't earned anything??
Edgar: Well, you ARE the one who was being impatient about starting this fight..
Pit: ....
Me: And you always lept before you looked...
Pit: Rrr...
Scythe: And we always tel. you- Defend before attacking!
Pit: Oh, come one..
D.P: Even after your training, a Pit-Stain is still a Pit-Stain.
Pit: FOr once, I wouldn't mind being turned into an eggplant, right now. Everyone ignores eggplants...
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-22 03:37:05 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry Pit. You'll get your satisfaction soon. Just listen to our advice, you'll go far.... well, far enough anyway. XD
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-22 03:39:35 +0000 UTC]
And I thought the gods in Skyworld teased me....
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-27 15:05:46 +0000 UTC]
It's a dog-eat-dog world, Pit.
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ravenf6 In reply to SuperAbachiBro [2013-11-27 15:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Pit: Oh, don't remind me- I'm still trying to get that dog stint out of my mind....
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SuperAbachiBro In reply to ravenf6 [2013-11-27 15:15:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Right, how thoughtless of me. XD
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