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Published: 2013-09-10 01:03:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1842; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 4
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This wong was something I wanted to do for a while out of two things-1. A follow up of sorts to fav.me/d6bj5xg , and a moment of my OCs, Derrick and Scythe Mana doing a little sparring of their own.
2. Attempting something of a close up shot. Once the first objective hit my mind, this followed right after.
While the two brothers are going at it, we see working the heavy bag, and doing a little observation.... since he's looking to fight Derrick in the future..
This one took a while to set up, but it was worth the experimentation, I'd say.
Derrick and Scythe Mana belong to me,
belongs to himself
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*I weave aroud the uppercut and hook* Good- don't let the pain rule your actions. *I throw a left jab at Betrand's head, then a right cross at his body*
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Bertrand: Oui *He weaved. As soon Raven threw the right cross, Bertrand stepped forward into a crouch and fired a left right hook to the sides* Yah! Yah!
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Ugh.. *As the hooks connect, I throw a quick left uppercut to Betrand's body, and a right hook to his head*
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Bertrand: Egh! *The uppercut connected, sending his feet a few centimeters off the canvas. Then, a painful hook twisted his head. He gritted his teeth, trying to absorb the pain. He retaliated with an overhead right* Eyaah!
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*The right catches me on the cheek, jerking my my head to the right, a bit* .ugh... * I give Betrand a grin* Nice right.... *I throw a right hook at Betrand's head, a left hook to his body, and a right uppercut to the head* but don't stop!
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Bertrand: *Received the punches, nearly knocking his orientation.* Pfff. Ugh. Ah! *He stumbled backwards and tucked in his gloves tightly.* O-oui! *He charged forward, peppering Raven's body with stiff jabs before throwing a right uppercut to the abs*
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*I position my arms to guarding my midsection. I feel Betrand's jabs pounding on my arms . Upon seeing a break in the jabs, I begin to throw a left cross to Betrand' s face, but a sudden collision in my abs disrupts the motion. Betrand's uppercut connects the for of the blow, added to my attempted cross causes me to bend forward a bit* Oh...! *pan*.....Pretty good, did you start learning about counter punching?
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Bertrand: Oui, I learned it from the Internet and also from Nadia-nee.
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I see... I'm guessing Nadia's a counter puncher, huh?
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Bertrand: And a good one too. Too bad she always lose to Isabelle in spars.
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Hmm.. How do you think Scythe would do if he was to spar with her?
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Bertrand: I don't know. Maybe he could face her quick punches.
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Me: Well, he could stand to practice against countnerpunchers... Do you think she'd like the idea of sparring with him?
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Bertrand: She doesn't mind. Well, this spar was tough. I had a great time. *Drops his gloves and smiles*
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(I might think about doing something about. XD )
Me: Done, already?
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Bertrand: Mm *Nods* I feel pain on my body, cheeks and chin by your punches. They are strong!
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Well, power is something I need to work on, but you did pretty good. Size isn't always everything: you managed to turn some of my strength against me.. you little rascal. *grins*
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Bertrand: Ehehe...Well, I don't let my size be my obstacle. If I'm good and quick enough, I can outsmart Isabelle one day.
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*smiles* Very good. Even Little Mac surprised a lot of people when when he took on the WVBA Circuits- he became the world champion. As for you, that's a good mindset to have, even if Isabelle is pretty cold... one day, she'll see you in a better light.
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Bertrand: Oui, she will respect me. Raven-nii, thanks for the spar. (Alright, gotta go. This is the first time doing this RP through comments 
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Me: You're welcome, Bertrand-kun... *suddenly remembers* That reminds me-those two should still be at it upstairs... unless they knocked each other out..
(Ok. See you later.)
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And somewhere off screen, Ace is snoozing.
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XD Ace has been working hard?
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She's been around Griff too long and that's exhausted her, aside from long adventures. xD
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So I see. Hopefully the noise won't disturb her...
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You won't wake her up unless Derrick manages to knock Scythe out of the ring and have him fall right on top of her.
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Scythe: Hey, don't go giving him ideas, now...
Derrick: Time to demonstrate a little Fight AND Flight.. *pounds gloves together with a gleam in his eye*
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Scythe: Uh oh.. *raises his guard as Derrick rushes him into the ropes, throwing hooks at him
Derrick: *thinking* Let's see how long you can keep up under this pressure..
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Ace: *Snore* Mmmm...Griff pass me the danishes...Yumm...
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Me: Danishes? She must be hungry...
Scythe: * is now backed into the ropes, Derricks fists pounding at his guard* Weird time to dream about food..
Derrick: I got some punch with your name on it.!
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Ace: *Drooled a bit while snoring, her hat fallen over her closed eyes.*
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Me: * moves closer to Ace Um,... he says he won't do it: says he's not your servant.
Derrick: *continues throwing hooks* You can't keep this up forever*
Scythe: *still blocking* Neither can... * sees a gap in Derrick's offense* you..!
Derrick: Why the pause? *Throws a sudden right cross at Scythe's head*
Scythe: ?? *sees the cross closing in, narrowly ducking it.. tightening his right glove, he twists his upper body, springing upwards with his knees to throw a good uppercut into Derrick's chin*
BOOM!
Derrick: Uh... ! (his head is rocked back as he feels himself stumble back a couple steps, but stops himself from tripping) ... You little...
Scythe: *moves towards the center, with a sly grin on his face* Hope your hungry- that was just the appetizer *pounds gloves together..
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Ace: Mmmm...? Caramel Corn...Yummy..
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Me: *thinking* Whoa... she's got food on the brain.. *speaking* I don't know if have some on hand, but I can check..?
Derrick: ~scythe : Eyes' bigger than your stomach, don't you think?
Scythe: I'll give you 1-2 combo- for takeout! * starts by throwing jabs and straights at Derrick's head, but Derrick deftly weaves around the offensive*
Derrick: If this is fast food, I want my money back- you're hitting nothing but hot air!
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Ace: *Ends up chewing on her hat in her sleep* Nom nom nom..
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Me: Whoa, Ace, that's not caramel corn you're eating.. *carefully reaches for the hat to remove it from Ace's mouth*
Scythe: ~derrick : Here's something fresh off the grill- a club-your-face sandwich! *throws an right uppercut to Derrick's ribs*
Derrick: *parries the blow with his left arm* Sorry, but I'm hungry for something uplifting.. *gives Scythe a good right uppercut to his chin*
BOOM!
Scythe: Ugh..! *reels back a few steps from the blow*
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Ace: Nnn....*Slowly opens her eyes just as Raven reaches for it.* Huh..? Raven..? *Doesn't seem to realize she's chewing on the hat.*
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Me: *sees Ace's eyes openeing* Um, Ace... I don't think you want to eat that.. *refers to her hat*
Derrick: What's the matter, bro? Did I take the wind out of your sails *throw a few hooks at Scythe's head and body*
Scythe: * blocks some of the hooks ,but a few do connect with his face and body.* Keep talking, blowhard... *starts throwing a few jabs at Derrick's face and body* I'm not done yet..
Derrick: igh... uh * blocks and weaves most of the jabs, but some do connect with his face and gut*
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Ace: Oh...Huh? ..Oh! *She quickly takes her hat away and puts it back on her head.* Whoops.....What exactly happened?
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Me: Let me see... you fell asleep, dreaming about food, sweets in particular, then you started chewing on your hat like it was a big marshmallow or something...
*KRACK!* *Derrick lands and good right hook that puts Scythe in a corner*
Me: Oh yes, Derrick and Scythe are still sparring..
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Ace: Oh...AH! Well I hope I didn't speak too much.... *She finally looks over at the ring.* Oh! Who's winning so far?
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Me: Looks like Derrick is..
Scythe: * grits his teeth as Derrick continues throwing punches at his guard, most being stopped, but a few are now connecting with his face and midesction* Gh... ugh... oof..
Derrick: Is that it? You're more like a punching bag, right now.
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Ace: Oohh...Come on, Scythe! Don't give up! *She cheered, waving a single arm up in the air.*
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Derrick: *continues throwing hooks* Just give up, make it easier for yourself .
Scythe: *continues blocking* Never... * watches Derrick's offense for a bit, then finds an opening, he dodges a right hook and counters right cross into Derrick's face*
Derrick: Ugh.. *head snaps back a bit, he tries to continue his offense, but Scythe is now throwing jabs and straights at him*
Scythe: Time I repaid you the favor..
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Me: Yep. And odds are Scythe will add more to it, before long..
Derrick: *continues shifting defense, but still feels a few of Scythe's punches connecting with his face and sides* Ugh... ooh... little punk...
Scythe: Can't take it, can you?
Derrick: Don't get too cocky, or payback will hurt..
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Ace: C'mon, don't give up, Scythe!
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Derrick: *begins weaving and dodging more of Scythe's punches... as he finds an opening in latter's offense, Derrick throws a good cross into Scythe's face*
Scythe: Ugh! * his face crinigng in pain, he throws a wild left hook at Derrick's head.*
Derrick: Ig... *the hook catches him in the face* ... You're getting a short nap..
Scythe: Bring it!
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