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Published: 2012-11-03 04:09:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1127; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 18
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update of [link] :___
Raven: Noa, what do you think you're doing with that shot?
Scythe: *rubs left cheek* Easy, Raven. No need to get excited over it.
Raven: And why's that? If you're focusing on defense, that means no throwing punches like that, is it not?
Scythe: Yes, under normal circumstances. But there's a meaning with this- He's warmed up and ready to continue this fight proper, isn't that right, Noa?
Noa: That's right.
Scythe: If anyone's at fault, it's me fore letting my guard down.
Raven: .... I see. Well, there's one minute left in this round, so from this point on, I'll let you two treat this as if it were a real match. Have it it.
*Noa leads off by continuing his offensive, throwing a number of punches at Scythe*
Scythe: *Thinking* Gotta be careful, that one hurt a little. *weaves back, avoiding an uppercut from Noa* My turn!
*Scythe throws a hard left cross into Noa's midsection*
BOOF!!!
Scythe:..... ??? *To his surprise, Scythe's fist did'nt sink it, it was stopped right at Noa's ribs.* *Thinking* What in..? I knew Noa was strong, but this- it feels like I'm punching a boulder!
*Noa looks down at Scythe's glove stopped upon impact, though the blow was stopped, he could feel some of teh impact penetrate into his midsection*
Noa: *thinking* Ugh.... I could swear that punch was stopped, but it still managed to sting me, I can't Scythe know that....*
*both fighters are stunned by their dual surprise, but before either of them could react...
DING!
Raven: 1st rounds over.
*Scythe and Noa head back to thier respective corners...*
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When it to doing this update, I address the aformentioned issue of Scythe's missing shirt, but I also added a little more to it, more specifically a bit more to Noa's hair and left glove in the 3rd panel- Those were cut off in the original lines.
By the time I noticed those oversights, I had to alter them with my tablet. At the same time, I messed up Scythe's turnks in the 4th panel- I accidently gave him his red/grey colors the first time around, I erased and put in the proper blue/yellow colors, but it looked real grainy, so I used Paint to remedy that.
Other than those bits, it was business as usual. I don't know when I'll do the next page, but I'm thinking to color that with my tablet, when the time comes for it.
Noa belongs to , Scythe Mana belongs to me, and I belong to myself