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Description             Application Form for The Battle Frontier OI Contest

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*EDIT* -this is long overdue but I've left the competition, it was awesome while it lasted but real life got in the way.
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Name: Lucien Ocean ♂
Age:18
Hometown:Blackthorn City, Johto
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Lucien Ocean bio:

  Born on the city of Blackthorn. He lost his parents since very young leaving him and his older sister orphan, Due to his parents being team Rocket members the rest of the family had cut any ties with them; Lucien and his sister had no where to go and so the local orphanage took them in.
  His sister being a bit older decided to take responsibility, she tried to do find a job but had no success in the end she also joined team Rocket only due to the ties that her parents had with them; she hoped to be able to make enough money so she could give Lucien a normal life; she didn't come back, after a long time he received a letter from T.R. informing him of his sister death; now he was truly alone, that had a massive impact on his personality going from a smiling and optimist to serious and quiet;
  A year later Team Aqua raided the city and decided to take in Lucien as they saw potential on him. He then spent most of his childhood with them and he became a high ranking T. Aqua member, then at this point he decided to partially detach from them and only do high rank jobs for them.
  This was his chance to explore more of the world and develop his skills; During his journey he was contacted by Team Rocket, they were interested in employing him as they heard very good things about him and the fact that his parents were with T.R. allowed him direct access to them; T.R. was aware that he was still with T.A. and so they made a special contract where Lucien was only to be part of the Special T.R. unit that deals with capturing Legendaries; pay was high and so Lucien accepted.
  Lucien is now part of both Team Aqua and Team Rocket, he has a lot of free time as legendaries and high class events don't occur very often.
  On his way to Isshu, a region that he never had set foot before, he came across the Ohana Islands, at first he was just going to do a quick stop to rest before he continued on his way, but after hearing about the Contest he decide to join it, he wanted to insure that his pokemon were completely ready to take on the Isshu trainers...

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Pokemon (in the order which Lucien met first)

Froslips/froslass ♀:

  froslass was met on the orphanage, it was the first pokemon Lucien interacted with, she also was an orphan, they got along very well and once Lucien sister left with T.R. she decided to take the role of protecting Lucien and take the role of a sister; once Lucien joined T.A. he took her with him with T.A consent as they though that the connection they had would benefit his training.
  As time went on Froslips started to be more of a mother than a sister to Lucien but she understands that he is the one in charge.
  She enjoys spending time with Lucien, she is pretty calm and non-violent though she can turn very aggressive when Lucien is in danger, she is very optimistic and does her best to make Lucien happy.

Spring/lopunny ♀:

  Spring was also met on the orphanage while she was still a buneary but Lucien barely interacted with her, she was pretty distant from any humans; Before Lucien's sister left she took Spring with her intending to keep her as just a pet.
  Years later when Lucien received the letter from T.R. about his sister death they also sent the buneary together with it, back to the orphanage;
  Lucien also took her with him when he joined T.A. a few months later when Spring and Lucien bonded a bit more and grew used to each other she took the decision to become a fighting pokemon. After a few fights she got ready to evolve, and so she did, she wanted to grow stronger to protect Lucien.
  Her personality is very similar to Lucien's sister, she acts quite confident and acts like she is tough as rock, she tends to act sensual around Lucien as a way to tease and play around; but inside she is very fragile, some nights she completely breaks down in tears because she truly misses Lucien's sister company, she only shows her tears to Lucien, he hugs her and tries his best to comfort her because he feels the same way as her.

Fall/empoleon ♂:

  Fall was given to him by team Aqua, a pokemon they though fit to represent them, he was a newly born Piplup; Lucien decided to name him Fall because his sister name her buneary Spring.
  Fall is the most calm of them all and stands tall and intimidating, he completely obeys any of Lucien's commands without hesitation and is willing to die to protect Lucien.
  His bond with Lucien isn't as strong as he hoped to be, being his "official" starter pokemon and all, he knows that he is more close to Froslips and Spring, he respects that and so he stands back when froslips and Spring are around.
  He is not very good at comforting Lucien and so he decided to become Strong, very wise and knowledgeable so he can be usefull to Lucien in other ways.

Sol/absol ♀:

  Absol was met during one of Lucien's travels; she showed up in the village where he was stopping by, she was acting very loudly trying to get all the villagers attention but they acted very aggressively towards her and ignored her, She noticed that Lucien didn't push her away and so she tried to get him to follow her, and so he did.
  She led him to a mountain where two Aggrons were battling each other, small earthquakes started occurring due to the battle and thats when Lucien realized that she was trying to stop an Earthquake from happening that would destroy the village; but the battle was too far in and its was too late to stop it and so what she had predicted happened and most of the village ended up in ruins.
  She was fed up with the villagers ignoring her warnings and so she gave up on them and decided to join Lucien due to him being the only human that ever listened to her.
  Sol is very gentle and caring, she makes Lucien's travels easier as she can predict bad natural catastrophes and she looks up to him a lot!

Agrot/aggron ♂:

  Agrot was one of the Aggrons that were dueling on the mountain where Sol took Lucien. He was the Aggron that won that battle but once he realized the damage he had caused to the village he felt very guilty, but he was impressed with the fact that Lucien was there to help prevent the catastrophe and so he decided to join him as he saw Lucien fit to be his master.
  He is quite aggressive and and gets furious easily, he is the pokemon with the lowest sense of humor of them all; he tends to be overprotective of Lucien.

Light/luxray ♂:

  The newest member; he was found injured by Lucien, he took him to the poke center and healed him, unfortunately the rest of Light's luxray pack had left him behind and with nowhere to go Lucien took him in.
  He is very unpredictable and his emotions run wild; sometimes he is happy and some other times he is mad; he loves playing around and playing tricks on his fellow pokemon companions but he ends up being scolded by Sol who is the only one that Light truly respects and obeys, he is like a son to her.

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trivia

-Spring and Froslips get along extremely well, like sisters.
-Agrot hates Light and vice versa, but they can work as a team when in battle.
-Froslips leaned the move destiny bond without Lucien's consent, she will use it as an ultimate sacrifice to protect Lucien.
-Lucien's surname Ocean was given to him by Team Aqua due to him not knowing his real surname.
-Lucien truly hates team magma.
-Fall carries Lucien in his shoulders when "surfing", Lucien can easily hang on by grabbing his horns.
-Lucien's sister was called Marie.
-Light is the youngest of them all.
-Lucien is afraid of highs, reason why he doesn't use fly to go around.
-Lucien is an excellent swimmer.
-Spring braided her "hair" and has a blue hair highlight going down her left ear's braid.
-Light also has a hair highlight but its juts a yellow stroke going over his left eye all the way back.
-Light doesn't like his hair up because it looks a bit childish to him and so he strokes it down to look older and mature, but the hair tends to lift up when he uses a highly powered lightning attack.
-Light wears the choice scarf wrapped around his lower back.
-Sol's berry is tucked away in her neck fur.
-Sol means Sun in my language!

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arr i hate when i do this, i get carried away when writing stories... and i probably shouldn't have been listening to depressing songs when i was creating the character...

i apologize for any typos, spelling errors, or bad grammar, English is not my mother language

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Characters/story © ME
Application form/contest © #Battle-Frontier
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Comments: 97

Rawrkeeper In reply to ??? [2011-04-11 17:13:43 +0000 UTC]

oh god you read the description?! sorry for it being so long! but i really appreciate that you took your time to read it! thank you
haha im sure that Lucien is pleased by your comment!

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Twila101 [2011-03-24 19:13:46 +0000 UTC]

...I can date him plz? xD He's so hott!!!!!

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Twila101 [2011-03-24 23:49:02 +0000 UTC]

haha date him? well, even getting him to speak to you is hard, if you want to date him then you need to be ready to do a lot just to get his trust! lol

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Twila101 In reply to Rawrkeeper [2011-03-25 09:33:26 +0000 UTC]

I am uber willing! xD I bet he has a nice personality deep down

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NekoHimi [2011-03-01 10:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Another rocket yes.

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Henekeshi [2011-02-05 04:17:41 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely LOVE the way you draw Froslass and Lopunny, they look so utterly cute, and the way you draw your Pokemon as a whole feels really tribal and unique. <3

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Hyuugo [2011-01-24 01:17:35 +0000 UTC]

That is absolutely awesome . *eyes fall from sockets*
I especially love froslass and lopunny
*fav

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Hyuugo [2011-01-24 16:44:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much! they are my two of my fav pokemon

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Hyuugo In reply to Rawrkeeper [2011-01-25 21:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh you are welcomee ! : D

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LoveOverdose [2011-01-07 06:14:15 +0000 UTC]

R-really cute. And the pokemon all look badass!

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ChessLeChat [2011-01-07 05:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Oho~ What a gorgeous character! <33

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VinzentVoight [2011-01-05 22:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, this is friggin' awesome. Best fan-made Team Rocket member I've ever seen. D: And I love how you drew the Pokémon, very nice shading!

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Rawrkeeper In reply to VinzentVoight [2011-01-05 22:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Best fan made team rocket?! wow im flattered
thank you very much

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VinzentVoight In reply to Rawrkeeper [2011-01-05 23:35:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. xD

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StringlessKite [2011-01-05 20:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, Ascot is not very experienced in interpersonal relationships, neither does she understand the concepts of manipulation or abuse. The fact that she's a T.R. relative is also unknown to her but a high-ranked Rocket would have no problems figuring that out. She might prove useful but remember not to underestimate her intuition.

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Rawrkeeper In reply to StringlessKite [2011-01-05 22:06:45 +0000 UTC]

hehe, then this dance would be very interesting indeed.
I must mention that your formal dress is also very well done, in case that in the future there is a formal dance party:
Lucien: May I have this dance?...

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StringlessKite In reply to Rawrkeeper [2011-01-05 23:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I love drawing gowns but the one on the application form is just a rough sketch really. Expect the real thing to have more details, patterns, laces... I really hope we will have a chance to meet on a formal party:
Ascot: Yes~ *spontaneous, beautiful smile*

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StringlessKite [2011-01-05 10:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Hah Lucien's awesome! And that formal outfit is amazing too, I'm sure my char wouldn't mind a dance with him ;3

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Rawrkeeper In reply to StringlessKite [2011-01-05 15:42:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much,
Due to his serious and manipulative personality, unfortunately, any signs of him smiling and enjoying the dance would most probably be just an act, he either intends to use you in the future or just needs to dance with somebody to keep appearances (he is ranked high on team rocket) BUT

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Rawrkeeper [2011-01-05 15:45:42 +0000 UTC]

lol browser glitched continuing...
BUT the fact that you are related to T.R. might save you from his manipulative personality.

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cryptomatic [2011-01-01 08:16:10 +0000 UTC]

nice job love your pokemon designs

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BlackWolfWings [2010-12-31 07:30:07 +0000 UTC]

included your trainer! hope you dont mind
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Rawrkeeper In reply to BlackWolfWings [2010-12-31 11:08:36 +0000 UTC]

no no, i dont mind at all! he looks awesome in your art style.

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BlackWolfWings In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-31 11:51:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks! although, you deff. kick my ass at drawing pokemon
like, without hesitation XD

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Kaliblu [2010-12-30 15:08:24 +0000 UTC]

Leya: Team aqua?? OwO

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Kaliblu [2010-12-30 15:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Lucien: (with a serious face) Do I know you?

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Kaliblu In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-30 17:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Leya: Well, I don't know, but I saw you in our base... I'm Leya, glad to see comrades here ^^

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Kaliblu [2010-12-30 17:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Lucien: ... *walks away*

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Kaliblu In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-30 18:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Leya: ....nice guy.... HEY, WAIT! *follows he*

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Kaliblu [2010-12-30 18:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Lucien: gosh you are annoying... what do you want?

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Kaliblu In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-30 18:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Leya: *takes a notebook and a pen* autograph? 8D

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Kaliblu [2010-12-30 18:35:38 +0000 UTC]

Lucien: (looks at her with a surprised face) What?! *recomposes himself after realizing that he has broken away from his serious character* i don't have time to play silly games, what do you really want?

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Kaliblu In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-30 18:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Leya: I really want an autoraph, you're a great aqua member, and I want to be like you someday 83

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Kaliblu [2010-12-30 18:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Lucien: *stops* *looks at her face and realizes that she is serious* *grabs her notebooks and quickly signs it*... here... happy now?

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Kaliblu In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-30 18:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Leya: Yayy, yus, thank you a lot!! ^^ Good luck!! Team Aqua forever!!

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Kaliblu [2010-12-30 19:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Lucien: *blushes upon seeing her so happy* ...she is actually quite cute...wait what am i thinking!... *turns around and walks away without saying a word*

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Kaliblu In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-30 19:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Leya: Bye!! ^u^

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LOSTinsideaQUESTion [2010-12-30 07:22:30 +0000 UTC]

your pokemon desings are so unique and give them all their own characer<3

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Rawrkeeper In reply to LOSTinsideaQUESTion [2010-12-30 15:45:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much! its was hard to decide on poses since you only have a small space to fit the pokemon lol

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ShineTheFairy [2010-12-25 03:28:11 +0000 UTC]

I really like the way you designed the Pokemon. Very cool. And a member of two teams? (by contract at least) first time I've seen such a case, but it's nevertheless an interesting twist. Looks like he's had it pretty rough though with so much death in the immediate family.

Hehe, I know what you mean about getting carried away with writing stories, but as a writer myself, I simply can't help it! I was going to include the origin of my own Trainer OC in his profile...but... I made it into a novel... lol. XD

Anyway, great characters you have setup here. Looking forward to the action.

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Spiralchasm [2010-12-24 17:44:31 +0000 UTC]

I simply love this character! Great work! :'D
His Pokémon are also simply badass

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Spiralchasm [2010-12-24 17:53:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!

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Zephyra-of-Breeze [2010-12-18 17:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Aw, he's epic!
Good to meet another Team Rocket teammate ;3

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Zephyra-of-Breeze [2010-12-18 17:34:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
we are slowly infiltrating the contest... i think no one has realized yet! lol

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Zephyra-of-Breeze In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-18 17:50:05 +0000 UTC]

that's because our disguises are fool-proof >->

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TommaCaralha [2010-12-18 10:45:51 +0000 UTC]

my god *.*
Está mesmo muito fixe !
Esse Lucian é mesmo hot
Adoro que tenhas dado o nome Sol , demonstra que nunca te esqueces de Portugal

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Rawrkeeper In reply to TommaCaralha [2010-12-18 16:14:14 +0000 UTC]

ha, ill answer u in english i dont want to disrespect everyone else here
thank you, when i was creating lucien i wanted him to be attractive so it would fit with his manipulative part of his personality.
if you look closely to Lucien's outfit you will notice that Sol is not the only hint to our country. look at his shoulders

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TommaCaralha In reply to Rawrkeeper [2010-12-19 00:46:58 +0000 UTC]

it's ok ... i don't coment in english before because as you shoud know , my english is not very good ...
i didn't see at first that in his outfit , but now i saw . you're amazing , u never forgot us , that means to me , a LOT

Btw , how is going the draw ? i'm with greats expectatives ^^

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Ravenmadisonhell [2010-12-18 07:28:41 +0000 UTC]

i like him! he is hot x3

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Rawrkeeper In reply to Ravenmadisonhell [2010-12-18 16:08:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome i was aiming for that! thank you!

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