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So... Lately I worked a lot about my female stormtrooper, Tora Ge'per. Have some sketches!Let me introduce Jax Kimbly as well. Initially he mocked Tora for being a girl (perhaps that middle picture shows their first meeting), he seems like a sexist idiot but eventually will become Tora's friend and will truly acknowledge her (though won't stop teasing her).
At the top there are pictures about her being a teen (during the Clone Wars) she was a tipical teen, a bit rebellious at least in fashion, trying to look older, and impress especially because traveling with her merchant parents all the time all of her relationships were on the holonet, and most of the time she met her friends only once or twice in real life. But then their ship was attacked, Tora's parents died, while she got shot in the head, it wasn't a serious injury but left an ugly scar. So later she had her asymmetrical haircut to hide the scar full of bad memories.
Then there's a simple sketch of Tora in her training outfit.
And some stuff about her with agent Kallus... I'm absolutely not sure what to do with these two, but I definitely enjoy having my little scenes with them hehe. Tora has a crush on Niklos btw, SlingBlade87 's clone (now stormtrooper) commander but he dumped and even transfered her from his squad thinking it wouldn't work between them because of his advanced aging. Then she ended up working under Kallus' command who got interest in her. He even took her to the annual Imperial Ball.
Heeh and thanks to SlingBlade87 we already have a writing of her! And what a piece!Β SW: A Night to RememberTora looked at herself in the mirror as she finished applying her make up. The dress that Special Agent Kallus had bought her was beautiful, a slender emerald green evening gown that hugged her body and tied behind her neck. It exposed a tastefully aluring amount of her torso but compared to her armor she felt utterly naked. She looked at herself in the mirror again, trying to recognize the red headed woman gazing back at her with those nervous green eyes. How had she gotten roped into this?
She hugged her arms, remembering the last mission she'd been on. The pleas of the people she and her squad had eliminated. The Special Agent had commended her efficiency in dispatching her opponents. It hadn't been hard. Most of them hadn't even tried to run, just begged and pleaded to be spared. She hadn't spared a one of them, and Kallus had been impressed. She shivered as she remembered the way he had spoken to her, touched her, applauding her prowess. That was when he had mentioned the celebrat
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GalaxyPawPrints [2017-02-08 00:39:39 +0000 UTC]
This is just so perfect! Honestly, I have never seen such a wonderfully developed and designed Star Wars character.
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tl34 [2017-01-19 14:39:56 +0000 UTC]
This is nice, not all Imperials are bad there just people
I have one of those Emperor Anakin Skywalker au story plan, and I have Kallus to be part of the Rogue Shadow team with Starkiller and Juno, and well you gave me an idea another member with this
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rayn44 In reply to tl34 [2017-01-19 21:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Another member? You mean for creating a new character or using my Tora?Β
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tl34 In reply to rayn44 [2017-01-20 00:37:44 +0000 UTC]
probably basing on your Tora
But it's a plan in the making, different world
Emperor Skywalker's elite Spec Ops team (sort of basing them on The Old Republic MMO Sith Warrior and Inquisitor teams) composed of the best Imperial Knight, an Elite Pilot, an ISB agent, an Elite Trooper/Commando, a Holo Droid, and a Trandoshan. Rivaling the teams of Commander Solo and of Master Dume
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rayn44 In reply to tl34 [2017-01-20 03:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Well you either use her after asking for permission or make an own different character, I definitely wouldn't like to see a copy character 'based on her'...Β
So this is the battle of beasts?Β
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tl34 In reply to rayn44 [2017-01-20 09:25:37 +0000 UTC]
It's still a concept, have not begin writing yet, and I will ask permission and acknowledge the source and maybe tweek a bit. Still a creative dream
and what do you mean of "battle of beasts"?
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Maya998 [2016-02-12 17:01:36 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely done character and yes while body types do vary someone whose gone through military grade fitness isn't going to have gravitywells in all likelyhood. I'll be poking about here more to see what else you come up with in the future.
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MonsterH21SW [2016-01-27 01:07:53 +0000 UTC]
I love her old Clone Wars design! Especially her hair!!!!
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randomeye713 [2015-12-25 07:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Interesting character, she's colorful for a stormtrooper, which i guess they all are under the helmet.
Thought: Tora would be in her 60's or 70's by the time the First Order forms.Β
Would she be running an independent mercenary company or be an elderly drill sergeant for the first order?Β
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Art-N-FilmSam [2015-12-16 00:46:27 +0000 UTC]
Any specific legion she in, can't be 501st though- all clones of Jango Fett, specifically requested by Lord Vader
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SlingBlade87 In reply to Art-N-FilmSam [2015-12-17 15:00:10 +0000 UTC]
She starts out in the 309th Legion but is transferred out of that unit before Yavin. Where she goes after that not entirely sure.
But it certainly would be possible for her to be 501st post-Yavin (unlikely) since by that point the clones were starting to get pretty old and Vader had begun picking the best troopers from other legions based on skill rather than genes to replace them.
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Art-N-FilmSam In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-18 03:34:18 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see
Never knew that Vader started accepting non-clones
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SlingBlade87 In reply to Art-N-FilmSam [2015-12-18 04:26:56 +0000 UTC]
Only after Yavin as the clones were all getting into their sixties by then.
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Alpha-12 [2015-12-15 21:38:52 +0000 UTC]
What rank is Tora by the time Kallus takes her to the Ball? Granted, regulations on fraternization between officers and enlisted might not exist in the Empire. God knows they allow for facial hair and longer haircuts (amongst the males).
Good work.
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SlingBlade87 In reply to Alpha-12 [2015-12-17 08:28:10 +0000 UTC]
Kinda depends on which storyline.Β
In this one she's a bit older than in the other piece with her at the party.
Also Kallus isn't military technically. He's part of that weird in between civilian and military that the Empire has.Β
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Alpha-12 In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-17 19:50:17 +0000 UTC]
So at least a Captain?
I know Kallus is part of the ISB, but it still seems like something that would at least be frowned upon. Though Tora apparently was one of the first female enlisted Stromtroopers, so she could've ended up being trained as an officer (I.e. Sent to an OCS) if her superiors found her competent enough.
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SlingBlade87 In reply to Alpha-12 [2015-12-17 20:04:52 +0000 UTC]
Being military I fully understand but honestly we've seen in Star Wars that sorta thing does happen so it either isn't as stigmatized as it is for us or it is outright ignored.
You have to take into account the fact that for all the tech, it very much is based on classical medieval fantasy so many of the cues in their societies are taken from that.
We haven't fully developed Tora's story just yet.
Just that she joined right after the Clone Wars and was one of the first female troopers in the Stormtrooper Corps.
She actually falls in love with her first clone commanding officer. However he has her transfered after realizing it.
What she ends up doing after that we don't know really but it is possible that she was picked up for officer candidacy.
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Alpha-12 In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-21 00:44:45 +0000 UTC]
Point. One guy actually pointed out Ahsoka was basically Anakin's squire (I.e. A young aide to a knight, from what I understand). And considering the clones as well, the Republic wasn't a paragorn of virtue. Thank you for your service.
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Megatronsenpie7 [2015-12-14 17:25:15 +0000 UTC]
She pretty! And agent calice isn't that bad, he is just following protocal and following orders.
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Studlyfudd13 In reply to Megatronsenpie7 [2015-12-15 11:10:09 +0000 UTC]
And being a bit of a dick But that's why we love the guy lol XD
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Megatronsenpie7 In reply to Studlyfudd13 [2015-12-15 15:14:57 +0000 UTC]
yeah. thats true
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SlingBlade87 [2015-12-14 06:41:26 +0000 UTC]
You know for a character that was created essentially a token, Tora's certainly evolving into a very fun character!
I really love her images, that one where she's injured by the blaster strike is just heartrending and she's incredibly beautiful in her green dress.
She and Jax are quite awesome, guess he must be from a later squad since she lost her first one under Niklos!
Really, Tora is developing into a real charming and sympathetic character.
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rayn44 In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-14 19:57:26 +0000 UTC]
Well, yeah originally I just wanted to have a female stormtrooper, and not an over sexualized pinup one, but then she got more and more personality and history. I must admit I got quite fond of her.Β
Just imagine, she just lost her parents and everything! She was a quite normal teen, had no difficulties in her life so far... and suddenly everything is gone!
*chuckle* Yeah... Kallus has a good taste to choose her such a dress right?Β
Uhh yeah, I forgot she lost her first squad! But then she also gets transfered... Hmm this is actually a little problem for me. I'll tell you my thougths about this in chat another time. Maybe you would have some ideas. But yeah, I quite like Jax, he's such an idiot! I can't wait to draw my next idea about him hehe.Β
I'm sorry to pester you with her all the time, but I enjoy developing her story right now. I hope you don't mind it!
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SlingBlade87 In reply to rayn44 [2015-12-20 12:51:27 +0000 UTC]
She's really developed quite nicely honestly, she's getting increasingly fleshed out the more we work with her.
I know, she loses everything all at once and it just breaks my heart. I want to wrap her up and comfort her so much!
But yes, Kallus really knows a beautiful woman when he sees one hehe.
I think we can sort somethings out with her if we write with her a bit and further develop her honestly. We'll get her sorted and squared away. Jax seems like a fun character to counterpoint Tora who is a bit more serious and has a lot more to prove.
Honestly it isn't a pester, I'm really liking her character so by all means share!
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rayn44 In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-20 16:07:32 +0000 UTC]
Yeah and I still have lots of ideas (even if most of them are only silly comic ideas)...
Yeah, the poor girl... I'm still wondering about what exactly happened to her after that... And how she ultimately ended up being a stormtrooper cadet. What brought her to go there...
*snort* Or he's just a pervert? No, but I imagine they worked together for some time now before he asked her to the ball, so he had time to take notice of her and get interested in her.Β
Yeah I know, there are details yet what we don't know but with time they'll be surely solved.
Yeah no kidding, Jax will get Tora in trouble regularly! Which is all the worst considering how much Tora wants to prove herself hehe.
I just feel like it is a bother that I concentrate on her right now. ^^""""" Β
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SlingBlade87 In reply to rayn44 [2015-12-20 20:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Well we all look forwards to silly ideas I'm sure, they're so much fun and you do them so well!
*chuckle* I have some ideas....
*laugh* I never thought of Kallus being 'just a pervert' honestly...I think he just might be a little too...aggressive in his pursuits!
I don't think it's a bother at all, her and all her surrounding lore is quite fun if you ask me.
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rayn44 In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-20 23:56:07 +0000 UTC]
*snort* But yeah, honestly I'm laughing on all of them, so maybe others also will enjoy them heeh. One of them I already started some days ago but didn't manage to finish it yet.Β
Oh? Ideas?? You never share!
I know, he's not pervert, I was just joking! *snort* "pursuit"? Omg... this suddenly sounds so... I don't know... xD Like he's a hunter... And not only for rebels...
I really hope so, I'm afraid I annoy you with her...Β
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SlingBlade87 In reply to rayn44 [2015-12-21 11:07:59 +0000 UTC]
I think people have enjoyed them a good deal honestly given their reactions to her.
No, I really don't heheh.
What, you think he isn't as ardent and purposeful a person when it comes to a love interest?
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rayn44 In reply to SlingBlade87 [2015-12-23 17:29:13 +0000 UTC]
Maybe? But I hope they'll enjoy the other mischief I'll come up with as well hehe.Β
And why not? I want ideas to be shared!Β
Oh my god... You know I didn't think about that... But I like it hehe.
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SlingBlade87 In reply to rayn44 [2015-12-23 20:08:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure they will hoenstly.
Spoilers?
It makes sense though doesn't it?
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Centauri-Works [2015-12-13 20:09:17 +0000 UTC]
Who wouldn't want to go out with Kallus ?
A tall blond ISB agent with golden eyes
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rayn44 In reply to Centauri-Works [2015-12-20 15:51:47 +0000 UTC]
*laugh* Well, I definitely wouldn't want to go out with him, I just love to gaze at him... xDΒ
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Centauri-Works In reply to rayn44 [2015-12-23 15:03:08 +0000 UTC]
Gaze , date , why not both ?
Same with General Hux , i'm glad they casted a handsome guy to portray the main Imperial our new heroes have to face
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Yelloha [2015-12-13 18:28:23 +0000 UTC]
I reckon Tora and Jax should end up together, they're so cute! You should develop this into a graphic novel!
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rayn44 In reply to Yelloha [2015-12-20 15:50:31 +0000 UTC]
I didn't plan to make them a couple honestly, they're simply squadmates and friends. Tora already has a love interest anyway. And sorry but I would never be able to make a graphic novel... ^^""" Though yeah it would be amazing!
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CaptainKat2121 [2015-12-13 16:58:04 +0000 UTC]
I just realized, is that above her ear a scar? I think it is....
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rayn44 In reply to CaptainKat2121 [2015-12-20 15:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Yep it is, she got hit by a blaster bolt when her parents died during the Clone Wars.Β
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rayn44 In reply to El-Niphrendil [2015-12-20 15:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Hehe kΓΆszi, igyekszem! ^^
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JoeBlue [2015-12-12 23:46:46 +0000 UTC]
she's interesting to see. seeing an empire view from a trooper, outside of the Hand of Judgement
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rayn44 In reply to JoeBlue [2015-12-20 15:46:26 +0000 UTC]
Indeed! I'm always ready to see things from the view of the "bad guys".Β
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