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6th of September 1947After one year as a loyal agent of the SDECE, but only going on missions with my mentor Serge Spilorccio (a.k.a. agent Bayard) to train me, the agency thought that the time as come for me to go on my very first solo mission.
They said that I might begin with a simple one, and that after I accomplished it, I would be chosen for others missions each time more difficult.
Although my mentor thought I might not be ready for this yet, I still accepted my duty since the dirrector Duval simply won't listen to him.
For this mission, I wouldn't even have to leave the French territory, it consisted in dismantling a French Communist activist group that could be a serious threat for the next ellections as the political situation between the western and the soviet block in Europe was already tricky.
To do so, I had to assassinate their leader Jean Goudrot during their monthly reunion in a disused factory in the north of the country that was closed during the 30's after a Marxist revolt.
That sounded easy indeed, then I took the train for the Nord-pas-de Calais region and reached towards that factory.
I can hear about 10 up to 15 voices inside, the meeting has already begun, I shall enter from the roof to pass unnoticed and then shoot Goudrot when he is making his galvanic speach, this strategy is dangerous, but the effect on on the other members would be terrifying, plus the general panic and confusion would let me enough time to leave this place.
After I climbed the whole complex thanks to the outside metallic ladders and brick walls, I cut the glass roof with the circular cutter and a suction cup and use my hooked cable to begin my descent to the factory.
after several minutes of making my way through these rusted workshops, I found the perfect spot to aim at Goudrot : high and discreet.
But as he began to reach the paroxism of his speech full of Marxist nonsense, the mission took an unexpected turn, Goudrot began to say "This is why my friends, I want to make this dream come true for all of us, even for our guest of honor... Monsieur de Rastignac!"
Then I stopped right there, how could he know I was here, I made sure I was as silent as possible, and how did he know my name? Before I could find an answer, about ten of his lackeys run towards my position upstairs and began to try to capture me, and even if fought with all the techniques my mentor taught me, I was not strong enough to take the advantage. Finally, I was hold by most of my opponents and one of them put a tissue full of chlorophorme on my noze to make me fall asleep.
When I woke up in a little room only illuminated by a weak light bulb, I felt I had difficulties to breathe and that I couldn't move an inch, I was totally tied up on a chair with massive hardened steel chains (this means they already knew enough about me to know that I could tear my way out of mere ropes, how did they know that? How did they know I was comming for their leader?) and then I realised that if breathing became so suddently difficult, it was beacause they tightenned my waist and ribs like hell to hinder my breathing, they also want me to be limited in my efforts but why?
Then I saw the biggest threat in this little room : a time bomb was attached on my stomach, it was not ticked yet, but still I had to get out of here.
The metallic door in front of me slides on the right and Goudrot appears in his black felt coat and red scarf while smiling at my pittyfull situation "So monsieur le Duc de Rastignac, do you feel compfortable on this elegant chair? We tried to find one as close as the ones you are used to sit on as a member of the corrupted domminant class!"
he said, then I asked "What does that mean, how do you know me, how did you know I was coming?"
He lauged before he tells me "You are so young and naive, that is so cute. You see the SDECE as any other secret service is infested by moles, and we both know that every mole has a price, you should better checked your colleagues' backgrounds before you trust them... But why am I telling you this? These advices won't serve you anymore now."
He snapped his fingers and then one of his men came in the room and gagged me with a chain in my mouth before he locks it behind my head.
"What a pity that I have to kill a young man as distinguished, competant and accomplished as you, your services would have been very usefull for my ideals, if only you weren't an elite scum!" then pushed the button of the bomb "I originally thought that I would let you live only ten minutes just to let us the time to leave the place, but then I thought that seing your life slowly coming to an end in an hour would be funnier! enjoy your well-deserved death Monsieur le Duc!" he said as he left the room and closed the door.
Goudrot was right, it was the most painfull hour since I was hired by the SDECE, I have been struggling of all my might against my chains, which was impossible because of how tightenned these were, and the more I tried to move the more painfull it was as I was suffocated by these same chains around my lower ribs and waist. I was sweating and grunting for more than 45 minutes, after all this useless struggle I lost my energy and my hope and began to think about Julie, Mother, and my one year old Aurélien. Then I said to myself deep inside "No, you survived to the second world war, the London blitz and the Indochina riots, I can't die like that, not today, I have a mother to care about, a wife to love, and a son to raise! keep fighting!" Then I looked the clock, there was still 10 minutes to do this, "I can do it!" so I began to try to slip my left hand under the chains. After I pulled it out of the bond for a long and painfull time, I finnally mannaged to take out my hand, it was partially excoriated, but free.
I looked the clock again, only two minutes left! There is no time to waste! so I used my nails to take the screws out and oppened the clock box and then pull the orange and white wires out. Then it stopped at only 30 seconds before I got killed. Relieved, but still not free, my new question was "how do I get free now?"
Four hours of trying to get free later, the door openned again to reveal... My mentor! "Thank godness you are alive! I knew you were not ready yet!" he said with a smile. That was a joy that simply couldn't be hidden to see him here! I couldn't say thank you with that chain in my mouth, but my eyes were saying enough.
After he used a crowbar to take off all the locks, I told him the whole story in the car on the way back. It seemed obvious that a traitor in the SDECE was working for Goudrot and tried to eliminate me, but the question was "Who?"
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Comments: 74
RaynalJacquemin In reply to ??? [2018-07-06 13:15:00 +0000 UTC]
He is a tall and slim doberman in a dark grey suit, he has a partly burnt face and is devoted to his apprentice Louis.
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Chronos-X In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2019-03-13 01:20:00 +0000 UTC]
Was there another Agent Bayard before Keri Kaunako came along? If so, what happened to Spilorccio?
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Chronos-X [2019-04-11 22:48:05 +0000 UTC]
Nope, and Spilorccio is still alive
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BlackStarWolf100 In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2018-07-06 14:05:50 +0000 UTC]
Cool. And what animal is he?
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to BlackStarWolf100 [2018-07-08 08:46:44 +0000 UTC]
The answer was in my reply
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BlackStarWolf100 In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2018-07-08 09:19:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah I saw it now.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Dragonskater1963 [2017-03-14 12:56:27 +0000 UTC]
He is Louis, he will find a way out of this!
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Dragonskater1963 [2017-03-15 11:57:32 +0000 UTC]
You really want to see him blow up?
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-07-24 07:01:53 +0000 UTC]
He was born to be so!
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KennySQNg [2017-03-13 06:35:25 +0000 UTC]
Nice one. Any plan to portray your characters in Cold War operations in Vietnam or Algeria?
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to KennySQNg [2017-03-13 10:14:11 +0000 UTC]
I did, in Algeria : fav.me/d9brjwa
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KennySQNg In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-15 07:26:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice! Keep up the good work. Just visited some WW2 Japanese bunkers in Malaysia. The Pacific Theater seemed more brutal than the European Theater
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to KennySQNg [2017-03-15 11:58:11 +0000 UTC]
it depends on which aspects.
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tail-blaze [2017-03-09 22:56:51 +0000 UTC]
so very sexy looking.
his suit looks very smart.
and, his binds sure look very tight and secured.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to tail-blaze [2017-03-10 16:40:08 +0000 UTC]
Of course these are well tighten and secured, Goudrot had to be sure he couldn't escape his death, but a secret agent as talented as Louis will always find a way out, that is why he always wear a fine three-piece suit!
But do you really find it sexy, sexualised or appealling in any way? Because it wasn't my attention... At all
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tail-blaze In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-10 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]
lucky that he did. I wouldn't know what to do.
he looks cool, don't worry though, I don't find it sexually appealing.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to td273b [2017-03-07 11:27:30 +0000 UTC]
Do not worry for him, he will sure find a way to survive! ^^
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JackofAllAss [2017-03-06 23:07:05 +0000 UTC]
I love Louis!
He's one of my favorite characters from anywhere.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to JackofAllAss [2017-03-06 23:18:37 +0000 UTC]
JackofAllAss! I thought you deleted your account and that you were gone forever! ^^
And thank you I really appreciate your compliment!
What do you fondamentally appreciate with him, is there any little flaws you dislike about him? Just in the way to improve him! ^^
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Auralphawolf [2017-03-06 21:33:17 +0000 UTC]
I knew he'd be able to slip out in that slick looking suit of his. Or maybe he could've cut his way out, since it's so sharp...I'll show myself out now.
No but seriously, the attention to detail is astounding in both the image and the story to go with it!
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Auralphawolf [2017-03-06 21:55:44 +0000 UTC]
I had a little time understanding what you wanted to mean by that, but quickly understood that it was actually well-thought puns! ^^
But for what would you show yourself?
And thanks for that compliment! At the same time, what can't Louis do when he's wearing such a nice suit?
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Auralphawolf In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-06 22:28:15 +0000 UTC]
Heheh, yeah, I was originally just going to leave it at "slick" but I know a lot of people don't use that synonym for dapper much, so I added the "sharp" in.
I would show myself to the shame corner for making puns of course.
And you're very welcome! I really admire how nicely you make natural folds in clothing without it looking wrinkly. In fact if no one minded the bomb, he'd look formal evening ready!
Well he can't look any better ^^ so that's one thing, but there's little else he couldn't do.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Auralphawolf [2017-03-06 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]
Well, even if they don't mind the bomb, and even if he is classy, he still has all this chains bondage.
And of course he can look better, have seen him in a white tie tuxedo? Here he is just wearing a simple three-piece suit and tie, the kind of outfit that he wears on a regular basis as a "casual" outfit since he often wears much more formal suits like black/white tie tuxedos, morning coats or Royal Duke uniform for special occasions such as sunday, dinner, birthday, wedding or simply hanging out with Julie in Paris by night and so on...
(PS : what is the "little esle he couldn't do"? I am genuinely curious^^)
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Auralphawolf In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-06 23:25:36 +0000 UTC]
(That would be a typo ^^U It was supposed to be "little else he couldn't do")
He'd be the perfect evening guest, stylish, well postured, and quiet, heheh!
Well you've got me there. Nothing beats white tie. He and my dewott character Cornelius would get along swimmingly. He never dresses down either.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Auralphawolf [2017-03-06 23:33:23 +0000 UTC]
Yes, what's the "little else he couldn't do? I would like to know that! ^^
Well it is true that in this situation (minus the bomb of course) he would be a really appreciated guest in mostly girls evenings as they might do whatever they want to him! ^^
Louis and Cornelius would enjoy to spend countless days sharing each other's company while constantly wearing a white tie tuxedo all the time
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Auralphawolf In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-07 00:03:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh I'm not sure. I was just using it as a figure of speech. Next to the impossible, I'm sure he's got the skills to do most anything he wants.
Ladies do love a sharp dressed man, and without the bomb, who knows? Maybe he'd like to share the evening with the ladies as he is too F3.
Oh most definitely. Cornelius is a little foppish, so he's big into the fine attire. He'd definitely enjoy spending the days with someone just as much into formalwear.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Auralphawolf [2017-03-07 11:19:41 +0000 UTC]
Well girls might enjoy him even more if he is chained up and can't say a word! ^^ Just imagine them having an elegant gentleman bond and gagged on a nice chair at their whole mercy! what kind of girl could resist to that?
But I am not sure that Louis would truly enjoy being their Ken doll for a whole night! LOL
But what does F3 means?
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fox-mccloud In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-07 14:46:17 +0000 UTC]
Could be worse... Louis could be their Barbie doll. Granted, he would make a very cute Barbie doll, being a charming raccoon.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to fox-mccloud [2017-03-07 17:52:05 +0000 UTC]
A barbie doll wearing a suit? Nah he can only be a Ken doll when chained like that! ^^
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fox-mccloud In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-07 22:22:23 +0000 UTC]
They could always make him wear a pretty dress as a Barbie doll.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to fox-mccloud [2017-03-07 22:30:28 +0000 UTC]
He would never let something like this happen, this would be a dishonor!
^^
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fox-mccloud In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-07 22:35:29 +0000 UTC]
Heh, while he might look incredibly cute, it would be too undignified for his status as a charming, charismatic raccoon ex-soldier who suffered enough during the War. He's got a lovely red panda girl to love and is fortunate to have that prestige of being part of the French Academy in his youth, too. Much love and respect to our dear Louis de Rastignac.
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to fox-mccloud [2017-03-07 23:21:40 +0000 UTC]
He still has a lot to suffer throughout the cold war as it is the golden age of espionnage! He still has a lot of ennemies to knock out with class!
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Auralphawolf In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-07 13:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Haha! Yeah I'll bet he'd be quite the center of attention, and I bet he'd get used to it if the ladies made it worth his while.
F3 is an emote for a sly smirk, like this
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Auralphawolf [2017-03-07 17:56:23 +0000 UTC]
Still he will feel bad and sorry for Julie.
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Auralphawolf In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-08 13:23:43 +0000 UTC]
Maybe she's in on it
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RaynalJacquemin In reply to Auralphawolf [2017-03-08 16:13:57 +0000 UTC]
To share her man with other girls? Nah, she is way to possessive and jealous to let another lady to touch him.
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Auralphawolf In reply to RaynalJacquemin [2017-03-08 17:55:43 +0000 UTC]
I'd bet he'd appreciate that in this situation. She's probably get him out of it
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Cambion-Hunter [2017-03-06 16:33:31 +0000 UTC]
That was a trying situation for Louis. I knew he would not give up though. ^^
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