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Published: 2017-08-22 19:33:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 997; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 1
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She's still a work in progress character, she's not even close to being finished. My characters are strictly for fun and my own entertainment <3
My OC Evelynn has a ref sheet now. I still need to add a few things to it but I thought it was good enough to post for now. Nothing major changed about her I just refined some details and added a couple small things (the frills and pleating on the skirt and the apron strings) and reworked some of her shade colors so they weren't so dull looking.
I also plan to post her bio here if I ever get around to finishing it, also I referenced the pose from a stock image by
Here's a bit of her bio, it's not finished but I wanted to put something here.
Real Name: Evelynn
Nicknames:
Age:
Gender: Female
Sexual orientation: Heterosexual
Relationship Status: Married
Place of Origin: Unknown: Was forced to leave at a young age for her safety due to reasons that were not explained to her.
Species: Slender Being
Personality: Motherly, kind and protective of her loved ones. Always willing to listen to others and help them. Although this kindness doesn't really extend to humans due to altercations in the past with them.
Date Of Birth:
Height: Varies, can change her height but usually stays around 9 foot 3 inches
Weight:
Skin Color: Grey
Eye Color: Purple (Only when very angry otherwise she has no visible eyes)
Hair Color: Black
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Fears:
History:
Place of Residence: Her and her husbands home in Black Forest, Germany
Powers/Abilities: Teleportation,
Weapons: Natural weaponry, such as her claws and tendrils.
Method of Killing:
Reason to Kill: Either for food or defense
Notes:
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Comments: 8
I just want to give a little critique. !!! I AM NOT TRYING TO BE RUDE !!! - Ok so... First of all the slender-being is kind of over-used. Second of all the choker isn't needed. To a lot of people a choker might be considered "cringy" or "edgy" but in my opinion it isn't, I'm just saying what a lot of people think. Obviously you do need a bio but I already read the desc and I guess you will be doing that soon. Try and find a "Creepypasta bio ref sheet" it will be a good starter but I am not saying you have too. If you are still reading I am still trying to not be rude just trying to help. Some things I like about this OC is the name. It is quite a lovely name. Not to mention your drawing style is awesome. The color choices are not too bright or too bland, I rather like them but then again everything I said is my opinion and a few things (mostly in the beginning) are a lot of peoples such as when I said the choker and the slender-being. I hope she turns into a great character. Good luck! ~Blue
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Since by some slenderbeings are considered as a new species (like me), saying that they are overused is like saying that the human species is overused in making OCs. So your first point is a preference you have.
You can not like them as a species, but that's just a subjective thing.
The choker is not "cringy" or "edgy", both this terms were born on the internet and are usually used in an incorrect, overused way. Bloodborne would be considered edgy just because it is a dark series and it's not an appropriate description. Many people use choker just because they are pretty or give a sophisticated look.
You don't need to use a template to do a good creepypasta ref.
This what I think of the critique you made, it's a very subjective one.
I mean well and I am sure you meant it too. This is my personal view on the matter.
Lux
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That comment is about 6 months old... not to be rude or anything but my views have changed.
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I didn't notice, my bad!
Can we laugh at my own failure?
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Here's my critique on your critique;
Slender-beings are definitely not overused- not as much as "killer" personas. I don't think there should be a complaint about the choker. Who cares what people think, people suck ass. Note that this individual says their character is still in construction, so she may evolve to be even better than this -- you have to start somewhere. Maybe this is the artist's request to give it , but honestly why do people give critiques when most of the time no one asked for them? But whatever, this isn't my sidexD
I do understand being original, but as they grow they might move on from the slender-beings, to me it is like a blank slate.
I used to have one of my characters as a slender-being but then i turned her into a demon because it sounded better fitting to her story (she was a demon who was born from her mother (her mother was a wrath demon who was killed by another demon and lucifer exiled them from hell,)
Rayne might not have a bio for her yet, or maybe she does. But what I'm trying to get at is- as people give their characters a story line--- their look begins to evolve.. so I think that Evelynn (if continued working on her) won't always be like this.
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