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Published: 2013-05-24 05:09:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 151113; Favourites: 3746; Downloads: 914
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Well, here it is! My longest comic yet!Took me about five days to draw (because of Futurama and Skyrim)... I hope it was worth it!
It must've taken poor Twilight LOT of power to keep herself from strangling RD within an inch of her life. XD
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Oh my gosh this is funny! I've never seen something like this before! I love how you made them look so freakishly adorable! They all look so cute with the Apple cider mustaches. And rarity is so jealous of all their mustaches because she's drinking from a straw! Or she's "thinking you guys are idiots." And only pinkie pie could have a real mustache come from the cider. The technique is awesome! I wish I could draw this good. Over all I would give it a 4 1/2 or a 5. See y'all later!
The goddess of the sea, Calypso399
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Look, I'm not good at critiques, but lets get started.
You got very right Rainbow Dash and Twilight person's. Rainbow Dash forever trys to be awesome and I like this. Now in this comic, Rainbow Dash trys to make Twilight belive she is awesome, and this makes me laught a lot. Twilight, as a friend, always try to help her friends, doens't matter the situation. But this time, her compassion for Rainbow Dash makes her get "trolled". And the last three panels, show's her reaction after this. The black line, even is not like the original, makes it cool of the same way, in fact, I prefer this black line. About the horn effect in Twilight, you need to improve on it. Put some bright effects to make Twilight more "real". Resuming: nice comic, perfect drawings.
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WOW. This comic... Is just... AWESOME!!!!! XD I think that you draw each character really well, getting every facial expression just right! I first found out about this comic when somepony made a dub of it and after I'd seen it, I just wanted to read it/listen to it, again. I bet, even if you erased all of the text, that it would still give me an idea of what is going on. Basically because with each scene, comes an effect or a well drawn, new expression which shows either pony's true feelings.
I love the comedy and impact in this comic and I really hope that you continue to make amazing ones like this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
The story in this one gave me an idea for a future chapter in one of my MLP Fanfics (Except it'll be a bit different) And of course, I'd give the credit to you and link back to this. But anyway, yes, this is defiantly one of my favourite pony comics and it will be for quite a while ;D
I hope you continue on making these e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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nitpick:
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definite+ly
i used to have issues with that word as well
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pleasemakemoreomg te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te he te hre te he te he te he that was hard to read huh? well that was the point. any how i liked the picture over all its pretty great and rain bows position in the 4th to last pannel is very well done and twilights face omg twilights face.
final verdict this is pretty amazing so good job pal!make many many more.
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As a reader/viewer, I can honestly say I felt a slight sense of perplexity when I read the beginning, not expecting Rainbow to act like that.
Pros;
The artwork itself is spot-on.
You made the ponies exactly how they are inside the show, and the comic strip itself was well-spaced.
The expressions are what struck me as one of the best aspects of the comic.
Let me put it this way - If I were to see the drawings without words, I would definitely be able to tell what was going on.
Along with that, the personalities were perfect.
Cons;
I must say truthfully, I cannot find fault with this.
I've searched it thoroughly, and my final decision;
This is a very well made, hilarious comic.
Well done!
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This is just amazing! When I started looking at it I was thinking all about what was wrong! And yes, Rainbow Dash is too awesome! The drawing style is awesome and I love the background on the biggest panel. I also really like the way you drew Twilight's wings. Rainbow Dash's fake of being hurt and dying was really good, too! The transition between panels work together really well. The expressions work well with what's happening and in overall, I think you did an awesome job on this mini-comic and it really makes me want to see more of these!
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Nice job on this comic! You got Rainbow Dash's personality totally correct. Arrogant, Cocky, and proud. Twilight's expression in the last panel is great too, just like her personality. XD
I can't say much else⦠but this comic is just AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!
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So is standard for me, I'm going to start off my saying that while my rating in terms of stars try to be fair, know it's rather incongruent with art. I think trying to put a numerical rating on something is superfluous, but since I have too, I did my best to give an accurate rating. Now, onto the critique!
First things that hits me is where I'm sure the idea was heavily inspired from the episode "Ripped Pants" from the show Spongebob Squarepants. However, this comic does a great job of making the joke fit without seeming like it's ripping everything off from that episode.
The first things it gets right is pacing. That sudden rush before it suddenly dies down leave the reader somewhat on edge. It helps draw the feeling out, making it feel stronger and stronger before suddenly get cut short in a swift and strong manner. That sudden change of mood allows a quick 180 so fast you can't help but laugh at it.
The last 3 panels help drive home the joke. Some of us have that friend who has faked something serious for a laugh, so having Twilight's reaction lets the reader relate on the other side. The last 3 panels are also very well paces. We have the frame where Twilight realizes what happens. The next one, you can see her annoyances, with the well place juxtaposition of Rainbow Dash in her still ecstatic face creating a sense of 'conflict' that you can't help but chuckle at.
So, what is my final verdict? Well, the images are well drawn, the joke is well paced and draws from a source without ripping it off outright. All in all, I give it high regards. Good job.
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I have to say, I am laughing so hard right now. You've captured Rainbow Dash's personality perfectly. She's cocky, arrogant, and can be a pain to be around. Twilight's being herself, a great friend. This does a brilliant job at reminding us of Rainbow Dash's ever-growing need for attention. It also shows Twilight's amazing amount of willpower. After a stunt like that, most ponies would have either given RD a nice blow to the stomach or walked away. This comic is brilliantly made, but I can't quite say it's the most original. It has the overall feeling of the "Ripped Pants" SpongeBob episode, where SpongeBob pretends to drown in order to get attention. I love this comic. I hope to see more of your work soon.
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This is 20% cooler than any comic I read! XD
May I please use this piece for a comic dub on YouTube?
If not, I completely understand as you have all rights to your own art.
Keep up the amazing work!
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When I saw the 13th panel (zoomed in so I didn't really see it coming) I burst out laughing xDDDDDDD
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I love this so much. Rainbow Dash in a nutshell
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I honestly agree with Twilight. Completely.Β
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This is serious problem, so we need desintegration ray to end your hurt.
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HELP ME!!!!!!
I'M TOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I got the awesome doctor they are 20% cooler than normal ones.
(Disclaimer: We do not know their abilities in medical training. Don't Sue the awesome hospital because we are just too awesome.)
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Twilight had tears in her eyes and was freaking out! That's a mean prank RD
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Wait 1 week and youll probably change your mind
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omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol rainbow come now srsly
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Hahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha ten hours later hahahahahahahhahahahaΒ
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you cant cure me... im.......too.........AWASOME!
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Rainbow Dash just pranked Twilight for no reason. XD
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is really a serious problem XDΒ
Twilight-No no no no no no no no non o no no no no no!
Rainbow-T-Twilight? Β Β closer... Β Β Β Β ..plz
Twilight-I'm here Rainbow Dash. T-Talk to me...I steall cure you!
Rainbow-No Twi... You can't cure me... Β You see the-- Β ..trust this.. Β I'm too....
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Twilight-Yeah that really IS a serius problem.
I can't stop laught!!! XD
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