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Published: 2014-02-07 06:35:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 126109; Favourites: 3695; Downloads: 1227
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Moral of the story: don't be a dick.
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So, I've never worked so hard for so long on any piece of art in my entire life. For real. There is nothing I have ever drawn before that's taken more time and effort.
I'm really really happy it's done.
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I FORGOT TO DRAW LUNA'S WINGS IN THE SECOND PANEL. Not fixing it.
Also I legitimately didn't bother to draw Dash's cutie mark in the first panel.
I HAD A LOT OF STUFF TO DRAW OKAY?
Also, a warning to anyone who wants to hit the download button... look at the size of the file and think about it before you do.
Lastly, for Applejack and Rainbow Dash's shocked expressions, I intentionally sorta borrowed bobthedalek 's art style because I really like how he draws pony faces. :3
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It is great! but maybe a bit more detail in character and background, that's it! Besides that it is wonderful! The originality is great, it is funny and nice. But the impact was a little, hmmm, not.... I mean it is good and all but not as much sense... What the characters would do was accurate except i don't think apple jack would tease the princess EVER. But then again this might be a different world... But like i said, i think the last few panels maybe could use a bit more background, but other than that it is good.
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Before I talk about this, I will say that since I am a traditional artist and do more origami than drawing I have no idea what to rate the Technique.
I really enjoy your show-accurate art style and you are very talented at giving these ponies great expressions.
As I was reading my thought was that AppleJack and Rainbow Dash were going to seriously regret what they were saying to Luna. As I kept reading, their reactions and Luna's reaction toward their teasing made this thought become even stronger. The cherry on top was that last line. I can only imagine the rest of the mane six coming in to prevent Luna from killing Rainbow and AppleJack.
If I had to point something out (and this is mostly a nit-pick) is that it isn't very obvious that Rainbow and AJ are being blown back. If that is what you were trying to portray, than I think that you would've benefited from adding more detail on the last five panels such as wind.
All in all, this is a VERY entertaining comic and I can't wait to see more from you.
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Vision: Your vision, in my opinion, was portrayed very well throughout this short comic. I already began to assume the nature of this piece at the second panel. Already knowing the competitive and tomboy-esque nature of both Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack, it was easy for me to gather that the two would attempt to give Luna a hard time simply due to the femininity that princess-ship often presents.
Originality: The idea behind the comic is not particularly an original idea overall. However, I have not yet seen this type of concept within the MLP:FIM fandom, nor have I seen much (if any) interactions between these 3 characters in fanart/fancomics. I enjoyed seeing these characters together.
The art style does not strike as something new to me; however, I have not seen this style used very often. The artist mentioned referencing a particular artist for assistance with a specific expression, which will bring down my originality rating just a tad bit.
Technique: Based on this comic alone, I can easily see that the artist is skilled with executing their ideas. This is something that is very important when creating comics (and all art, honestly). Appearances wise, the linework is a tad wobbly and there is no shading included in the comic. However, I believe this is how their style is meant to be portrayed, and I personally enjoy it.
Impact: Ah, the fun part. This comic really did make me laugh! The character personalities are almost completely spot-on. A bit exaggerated, but it fits! I can see this possibly happening in the actual show, which makes me love it more. I personally do not enjoy fancomics if they do not reflect the characters correctly. I'd like to mention that I very much love the vocabulary that was written for Luna here. It feels awesomely authentic towards her character.
To conclude, I really enjoyed this short comic and can't wait to continue to see more from you!
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This has to be the funniest comic I've seen on deviantART, and, trust me, there are ALOT. Good story line, great effects, this.... I mean..... I have no words to describe it. It's that good(That should tell you something). The best part is, "Hey, Rainbow... I jus' realized sumthin'. >> What's that Applejack? >> I'm afraid to die." You have something going for you. Although, if you REALLY want to get it good, try making your own comics with your own characters. At the least, every character in comcis you've made I've seen are all from the MLP franchise, made by Hasbro.
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I'll lay this down first.
I FUCKING LOVE LUNA.
Vision: if your goal was to see how Luna would handle Twilight's situation, by God did you nail it. It's fun to see how you pushed Luna's buttons to give the readers a thrill.
DAYUM! SHE ANNNNGGGRRRRAAYYY!
Originality- Let's face it. Who HASN'T tried to group Luna with the mane six?
However, this is immediately redeemed due to the iron pony competition.
Technique- Very professional. But those panel outlines- Yeah, those are hard. Hey!
Shit happens.
Impact: The comic finishes with a strong and humorous note that leaves readers laughing. Perfect.
It's great Red. I NEED MOAR LUNA
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First of the bat loved the comic, A+ for originality. And well this comic shows that Applejack and Rainbow Dash at times can be a little.....well bitchy. This comic shows that slice of life that I (and many other people) enjoy about the show. Exactly what you are showing with Luna, the main 6 almost always have tolerance for one another but when other ponyβs DONβT now thatβs a good change of pace.
Over all loved the comic, vary original, and although you could pay more attention to the fine details ill over look that. I and other people would probably agree that his would be one GRATE episode. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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I loved how Luna is in this comic. I also thought that the ending cracked me up and i feel the artist did a nice job on it. I really enjoy the simplicity of how the characters are drawn and the unique Luna pic in the middle. I feel that if i had to choose only one favorite i would pick this one because even after reading it 3 times it still wasn't that boring. It takes a lot of skill to make an epic comic like this and the artist has nailed it! i will make sure i watch them.
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this is a really good piece, once again I must say that as a critic, I can't play favourites, but my favourite pony, Luna is in this comic and you personally are one of my favourite artists, because of the quality that is produced, the impact is has on me is that as a man of class and sophistication myself I too would show up some athletes when it comes to heckling, I love the idea of the princess of the night taking down the iron ponies a peg or two, plus the whole mention of fun is an obscure reference to me. overall this is a great read for someone who wants to be entertained
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I meant to click fair but I hit unfair instead 
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If she's a princess, shouldn't she know a martial art of some kind?
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this reminds me of a fan-comic where Celestia and Luna were in the "sisterhooves social"-and come to think of it, there's an official comic book story like that too!
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This one made me laugh out loud. Great comic
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Why? Would she give me terrible nightmares?
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Would the aggressor get terrible nightmares if so?
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exactly what I thought
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That last part got me. "I'm afraid to die." >w<
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Serve them right for mocking the Princess of the Night. X'DDD
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Yep, DON'T U DARE OFFEND THE PRINCESS OF THE NIGHT!!
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This Line- "or or or or yer mane could get all tangled! Actually can it? I-I'm not really sure..." Made me laugh so much
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She has diety level powers and you make fun of her?
guess Derpy isn't the only dumb one...
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Ah, poor Luna
Always gettin the short end of the horn...
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Β "Vegeta, what was her power level!?"
Β "I-it's... IT'S OVER 9000!!"
Β "Wha-what? Over 9000!!??"
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I love how adorable AJ and Dash have their arms pushed back like that.Β
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YOU KNOW WHO I AM! I AM THE GOD DARN NIGHT! FEAR THE PRINCESS OF NIGHT!
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Rule no. 1 of the royal castle: Never! Ever! PISS OF THE PRINCESS!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh ponies... You keep forgetting that your Princesses are essentially Gods!
Of course, Changelings find ways around godliness, but still.
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