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Published: 2013-10-21 02:19:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 60958; Favourites: 1426; Downloads: 294
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That fox met a friendly ho-o-o-o-orse, and is communicating by mo-o-o-o-orse. :3...And Pinkie is the friendliest ho-o-o-o-orse around!
The famous song, "The Fox:" www.youtube.com/watch?v=jofNR_β¦
The translation is:
YOU
SHOULD
SERVE
OATMEAL
FOR
FOOD
AT
YOUR
NEXT
PARTY
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Comments: 484
Very very awesome! I never expected that to happen! Coloring is right on and style is fantastic! Wait do I seriously need to write one hundred words for this?! You kidding me DeviantART?! Oh well! Gosh that fox is sooooo adorable! I wonder how in in the world of Equestria would it be brave enough to go up to Pinkie Pie and just start talking to her with morse code! Maybe it was from Fluttershy's cottage... Hmmmm, that'll always be a mystery... Wait did I just say a quote from the song? Huh, never expected that.. Have a nice day! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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((The other two critiques weren't very... without trying to be rude, good. So I'll try to have a go at it)).
Vision: Basic and not very detailed, I LOVE IT. Really shows Pinkie Pie's silly little moments when the colors aren't to dim, flashy or overly detailed. Very nice to look at, although the background colors are a bit dull.
Originality: It's about one of the most popular pink pony on the internet and reusing the old "oatmeal are you crazy?" joke. Not to mention the "What Does The Fox Say" joke isn't original as well. Does that ruin the picture though? Of course not! Not very original but still cute and amusing. The Morse Code was an interesting addition to the popular memes as well (I couldn't help but smile when it turned out the Fox's name was Oatmeal).
Technique: Just like the colors, the lines are very basic, but that doesn't ruin the picture of course. Your style is absolutely adorable as well. And when an adorable pink pony, a simple little fox and your cute little artistic technique is all put together, it creates a wonderful little comic!
And finally
Impact: (I'll try not to repeat myself)
It's rather relaxing to see a picture on Deviantart of Pinkie Pie not some murderous psycho or some sexy partying pony meant for male eye-appeal. You portray her character rather well and her bubbly little personality throughout the entire comic could put any grouch into a good mood. The scenario is nothing with much drama or action, just Pinkie Pie doing something silly with a little fox that is part of a meme. Wonderful drawing and hope to see more.
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-=Vision=-
Interesting, I can see this going somewhere (if you wanted to that is).
-=Originality=-
I get the feeling that this was done before somewhere, but I think it was with Twilight or something, meh
-=Technique=-
I'm no artist or anything, but the lines seem a little messy, maybe if it was show accurate it would be a bit better?
-=Impact=-
An actual show reference was a nice touch as well as ACTUAL MORSE CODE, you will not believe how many pieces make just random letters out of dots and dashes and make a translation.
Overall a good piece. 8/10, Would read again
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Amazing Job!
Though a couple of adjustment can be made here or there the over all Impact was funny, if you get the reference of the song of course, so I'd give it four stars.
The Vision is very nice, the expressions fix nicely to what the fox is saying (once you read the translation in the description) and Pinkies personality. Though, It took me a bit to notice that the fox was pressing something in the first place so I was a bit confusing for the reader them self when looked at first glance.
The Originality of the comic is questionable. The Same and the whole reference is taken from the song of course and the use of Canon Characters from MLP and the mimicking of a already existing style. Sorry if I sound harsh. I haven't taken a look at the rest of you're gallery but judging by your art skills I'm pretty sure you have you're own art style ^7^
The Technique was not of you're own style in the first place so that takes a bit off but other than It's done very well!
Again amazing job, and you're comic is very amusing!
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I love this very much! It's quite creative I should say.
I only put out the half star because it's from the video and the communicating by morse to the horse, but I love that you made it into this! Your drawing style is also neat, that's great. I'm also glad you left a translation in the description. I really never would have thought of this, it's just so imaginative. I also love how it seems simpler than what Pinkie Pie would look like (That's probably just me being weird, it looks different).
Bravo from me to you, and keep doing what you're doing!
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You're going to get so much butthurt. XD
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fite me irl
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swing first nigga swing first
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meet me at mcdonalds n we'll settle this
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no we're goin to wendy's
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fine but im not paying for the food
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you can fookin pay for a doller burgerΒ
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i can
but im not going to
you are
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lick the gravy out from my asshole nigga
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i aint gon toss your salad biatch
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aint no body got time fo dat
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What's your problem?
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can this critique please get flagged for abuse?
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I don't think so...
But you could check to make sure.
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I have aids
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help my aids go away
my butt hurts
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-=Vision=-
you want show accuracy from the start right?Well if yes i'll give yea a half for vision.
The quality is almost like the show exept for some things.Likre the way the neck and the head is connected with the head.The neck i a bit fat.
-=Originality=-
One star take it or leave it.The song is overated and i don't get the song at all.
I really hate the song and i also found the same joke on face book (in a different form) so originality will be one star.
-=Technique=-
I know you don't cheat (copy the eye and flip it,copy the character for the next frame,ect) but please try doing complete digital but thats your style so don't change it i-i-if you want that is.
-=Impact=-
i don't know what impact is but i'll just give it a random number
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Critiques aren't supposed to be baised, but this clearly was.
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You don't seem to understand what."vision" is either.
None the comments you make.provide any constructive criticism. It was purely opinion-based.rather than.based on the merits or techniques this comic.portrays.
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Take it from me:Β Just because you have access to the "critique" feature, doesn't mean you have to use it.Β
More over, if you don't understand HOW to use the critique feature (as you basically admit to when you say you don't know what "Impact" is), then you SHOULDN'T be using it.Β
Next time, try just leaving a comment:Β You can still give constructive criticism, but you won't be abusing a feature simply because you don't understand one or two things, and won't get strange looks from people, either.Β
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im new to this shit dont jugde me
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Not trying to judge so much as correct.Β It seemed like you were using the "Critique" feature just because it was there, even though you weren't/aren't yet qualified to make use of it.Β I've had the same urge.Β But I've come to realize (partially AFTER seeing your comment) that it's better to leave a comment unless you're REALLY qualified to try to make an "objective" statement in much the same fashion that a college professor would.Β
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I applaud this comment. I don't know the plz icon for it, so have a cute Dashie one.
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You don't mean OctaviaClapPLZ , do you?Β
At any rate, thank you!Β
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I have the plz database bookmarked on my laptop. Sadly, I'm away from home.and on an out-dated samsung galaxy s. Lol
But I should have remembered that fluttershy one. Oh well. Anyway. You're welcome.
I.do.know.this one off the top of my head:
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Where as I'm AMAZED I remembered the Octavia one :-p.Β
Ahh well.Β
.Β
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Let me google that for you.
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If you don't know what Impact is, don't critique!
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Wow..! How did you come up with this?! Very funny e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Next time, just leave a comment...
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As others have said, critiques are for in-depth, constructive criticism.Β
If you simply wanna gush that you love the work, without really having detailed thoughts as to WHY you love the work, it really SHOULD go in the comments section.Β The fact that you were misusing the critique feature should have been obvious when you had to spam "pony" over and over again to fill up your limit.Β The comments section has no minimum word count.Β
Similarly, there's a reason there are different categories for the stars:Β They're ALSO supposed to be based off of in depth thought, not simply "I LOVE THIS!"Β
If you simply want to give the work an "thumbs up" type mark, I recommend you settle for simply "favoriting" it.Β
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This is not a critique...
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Critiques are meant to be thoughtful and give the artist a means to improve, this is neither of those things.
Keep brain farts to the comments section plz.
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This is an amazing comic! But it needs a bit of touch with like more jokes, you get me?? You really need to work on the joke a bit more and make it funnier, BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN THAT THE DRAWING ISN'T NICE YOU KNOW! It's so perfect! i mean you're talented and all but you just need a bit of a touch on the Jokes or on what the comic is about, I like it but...you know...e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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it's critique why the hell are you putting 'don't get mad at me' ?? be constructive, point out its flaws . that's the reason they asked for it in the first place. don't just kiss up to the author , otherwise there's no point giving critique in the first place.
plus , even though the joke lacks impact its not exactly hard to understand. just needs a bit more to it i guess
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Yeah, well i meant "don't get mad at me" that I actually didn't like his point of drawing it (the joke)....you might not get where i'm going ....
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yeah i know what you mean but the whole point of critique is to show what could be improved in the work, and if the author gets mad at you for stating your opinion (as long as its constructive, and not just flaming) then they should either disable the critique feature or learn to take it better.
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