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Published: 2004-04-16 18:22:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 448; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 44
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The blurry memories that you feed,They don’t do much for me.
And of every little thing I need,
Memories are the least of these.
Pictures taken with the shutter left open
Ink mistaken for something more important
And I’m off to find sweet distraction,
Something random to fill the cracks in.
And if I stare to thunder to hear the lightning,
You’re one step closer to beneath my skin.
Pictures taken to stop hummingbird wings
Ink carved in that defines the being
On the other side someday,
This mind won’t be divided.
This is where thoughts can’t stay,
So I deserve to be reminded…
That the blurry memories we all feed
Are everything to me.
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Comments: 17
ASleepingPoppy [2006-02-28 20:28:50 +0000 UTC]
wow first i have to say , your SO popular lol, secondly i will say that i like this.. "ink mistaken for something important" oh yea.. heh... anyway back to what i was saying... i'm not going to force my opinion of it onto you so i won't go into a long story just now, but its still good all the same.
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reddust In reply to ASleepingPoppy [2006-03-07 12:46:48 +0000 UTC]
what opinion aren't you going to force? i don't quite understand...
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steph9668 [2005-07-22 20:06:48 +0000 UTC]
Very lyrical...it's beautful. Ever write any music for it?
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xJojox [2005-03-30 18:23:05 +0000 UTC]
Cool, just not sure what the "stare to thunder" bit means??
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reddust In reply to xJojox [2005-03-30 19:25:19 +0000 UTC]
its meant to kind of contradict itself.
you can't stare at thunder or hear the lightning.
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GNUBoarder [2004-11-21 18:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Good flow, nice imagery, good use of symbolism. Overall a good piece.
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CornMuffin [2004-04-27 18:10:36 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful .......
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When I said "we" you know I meant "me"
And when I said "sweet" I meant "dirty"
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countrygirl [2004-04-19 13:18:36 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderfully beautiful!! You are very talented.
P.S. Notice i still comment on your stuff
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doornumber13 [2004-04-16 23:32:10 +0000 UTC]
lovely.. it all flows so nicely.. this would make a great song.
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