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RedPear — Moon and Stars
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Published: 2016-05-15 02:58:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 11982; Favourites: 388; Downloads: 201
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stupid title ever. lol couldn't think of better words. any suggestions?
well, I decided to draw this piece just because I want to draw a curly blonde long hair as much as possible but nahhh this is a bit too much! lol I think I will tired of painting hair for a long while.
I had abandoned this piece for almost a year and this is my third attempt to finish it. I am so glad that I can do it this time. XD
PS.1 This is the flattest chest character that I have ever drawn. : P
PS.2 I am planning to open a commission soon. : )
Critiques and comments are more than welcome!
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So, I'm shit at critiques, but I will do my best to give you a good critique so that
maybe I could help a bit:
I love the detail of the hair. It has good flow to it, and is well highlighted. I feel as if you could add a bit more dimension to it, especially at and past the apex of the head. It feels a little flat, sort off like her skull pools out from the top. Probably just needs added shadow as well as some strands of hair that suddenly end as they go over the slope of her skull. However that would also depend on how much hair she has and how thick/full her hair is as well. And I feel like her bangs/the strands of hair framing her face, some would droop straight down to the side and onto the ground, they seem a little too fixed.
Overall, the shading is outstanding however there are a few blips that I am not sure were intentional or not. For one, her left upper arm (or is it the right? well the one on the left when you look at it) seems like you had shaded but coloured over it on another layer the base skin tone for that section. It's right next to her dress. And the elbow on the right seems a little angular in the very corner.
And just one last little thing that throws me off a little. Past the two index fingers, there seems to be another finger, but I feel as though there shouldn't be...
The detail and blurring effects are outstanding. I love the way you blended the different tones of her skin, eyes, and hair. The dress is gorgeous. Way better than anything I could do XD
So yeah, my art skills are far less than yours but I am good at noticing little things and if my hand did what I wanted it to I know I could do much better so take my tips as you would like. Thank you for the amazing art work!
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oiiii~ i am so sorry for a late reply. I have had a problem accessing the notification page lately.
About her hair at the apex of her head, I do noticed it that it feel flat while I am drawing but I couldn't make it look good enough so I let it go. lol
and the elbow, it looked okay before I had cropped it. but when you mentioned about it, I too feel that the angular looks weird. ;___;
about the fingers, the 'another finger' that you mentioned is actually the right hand's (from the viewer)index finger. but I think it's because of my poor drawing hand skill that made it look weird. (drawing just a simple pose hand is already hard for me and in this pose.. lol that's a bit challenging) TwT
Thank you so soooo much for taking your time to write the critiques. I do see my mistakes now and will use this to improve my next piece. XD
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Haha, it's no problem I've been pretty busy myself. But I'm very glad that I have been able to help you 
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Wow! This is absolutely amazing! She is so beautiful.
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i love her innocent face and beautiful long hair.
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