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Renleixue — Paper Mario: WaE Chapter 1

Published: 2013-04-07 07:30:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 7019; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description Hey guys, its me, Renleixue, and WHOA two uploads in one day, WTF, at this rate, I'll be done with the entire story before I even get a chance to come up with an idea for the ending. XD Anyways, let us see the start to our hero's journey, with Chapter One!!!

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"The Flora Valley Factory was abandoned only recently, due to the anti-pollution law Daisy set up for her kingdom. What was once this land's finest steel foundry has been reduced to nothing more than a tourists' attraction." Trus T. recited from his encyclopedic memory, as he and Mario calmly strolled through the flower-filled hillsides of Flora Valley. "They say the factory smokestacks used to release more smoke than a b-" Trus T's voice was overpowered by a sudden, ground-shaking earthquake.

"W-whHAwHAaaAAat's GggOGoinNnG oOOoONonnNn?!?!?" Trus T's voice shook, and Mario looked ahead to the old factory, seeing tufts of smoke peer through the smokestacks, followed by the sporadic flickering of lights, and the sound of engines running. The sky grew gray with smog, and when the ground stopped shaking, everything within the factory was fully operational once more. The heroes' jaws dropped in unison.

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As they approached the front gate, an electrical field was activated, sending them reeling back in fear of electrocution. Mario growled in frustration.

"Oh no, Mario, how are we going to get in, now? We need to hurry, I have a feeling whoever switched back on the lights has hold of the Warrior Star!!!" Mario looked around frantically, seeing a sewer drain entrance by the side wall of the facility. Without hesitation, the plumber dashed towards it, Trus T. trying to keep up behind him.

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Sewage water flowed up to the team's ankles, the smell of garbage was everywhere. But still, Mario and Trus T. persevered onwards, finding a light at the end of a tunnel just up ahead.

"Oh, sweet relief!!! We're inside of the factory, Mario!!! Just a few more steps, then we can get revenge on whoever did this to us!"

They reached the end of the tunnel, and stepped out, into an overwhelming setting. Machines hummed, pistons pumped,lights flashed, gears turned, it seemed as though the entire factory was somehow alive. The duo made their way through the factory grounds (fighting koopas, goombas, thwomps, and whomps along the way) until they came across a room with a set of cages, lined up in a row. Inside of each were a bunch of skeletons, paired with cobwebs. It seemed to be the only lifeless corner in the entire factory.

"Its actually kind of depressing, these were slaves held to work here, they must have been left behind, and slowly starved to death. Doesn't look like there are any left." Trus T shrugged. "Well, let's go." The two turned around, but before they could begin walking away, they heard an echoing "ARF!!!" From the end of the room. They ran back, peering into the cell, and were greeted by a lone chain chomp, happily bouncing about within his cell. Mario scratched his head, confused.

"He must've been left here back when the factory closed down. Strange how he survived this long, but hey, I won't be questioning good things, now." Trus T inspected the cage lock, and the chain chomp stuck out its tongue and began panting. "Mario, hit it with your hammer, its so rusty, it wouldn't surprise me if the thing fell right off." Mario nodded, and swung his mallet down, onto the cell lock, causing it to break in half, but before he could open the door, the chain chomp pushed it open forcefully and jumped onto Mario, knocking him over, and began yapping playfully.

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CHOMPER JOINED YOUR PARTY!!!
CHOMPER'S ABILITIES: A PRIMER.
PRESS X IN FRONT OF ANY CRACKED SURFACE TO THROW CHOMPER INTO IT AND BREAK IT.
HOLD X TO GRAB CHOMPER BY THE TAIL AND SWING HIM AROUND OVER YOUR HEAD, THEN RELEASE TO THROW.
IN BATTLE, HE CAN BITE INTO ENEMIES, OR SCARE THEM AWAY WITH HIS ROAR.
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Chomper sniffed out the path to the Foreman's Office at the top floor of the factory, Mario and Trus T following closely behind.

Upon arrival, the foreman of the factory revealed himself as Nahs T., a dark toad with a suit and cane.

"So, you want my precious Warrior Star, eh? After all the trouble I've gone through to get my factory back up and running? With its power, I have no need for workers, my machines work 400% better than they ever have, before!" He snapped his fingers, as a giant, mechanical tank rolled out of a large, steel garage to the side of the office. "I'm sure you can guess that I won't be giving it up too easily, not without a fight!"

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After the fight, the tank explodes, and sends Nahs T. flying out the window, off into the distance.

From the carnage, a glimmer of light appeared, and burst into the form of a blue stone star.

"The Warrior Star!!!" Trus T. fixed his glasses, amazed at the sight. Chomper bounced over to the star, picking it up in his mouth, and tossed it at Mario, with a happy, "ARF!!!"


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YOU GOT A WARRIOR STAR!!!

END OF CHAPTER!!!
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The scene shifts to Princess Daisy, who, again, attempts to sneak away from her captives. She accidentally finds herself in Tatanga's private chambers, and looks through his desk, finding papers on a Warrior Star, located to the far west, in the old town of Gritty Gorge. She gets caught, and is sent back to her room, but not before transmitting the message through her broach.

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The scene shifts again to Luigi, who is being visited by an old woman who requests the princess' approval to hold her grandson's birthday at the castle. (You get to walk around, talk to guests, and end up screwing things up.)

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If you read all the way through that, bravo, you're amazing. I'll get around to Chapter 2 soon, I promise, till then, though, enjoy.

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The World at End concept belongs to me, , but all characters related to the Super Mario series belong to Nintendo.
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Comments: 16

Kermitthefrog223456 [2015-04-04 13:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Who would have thought that a Toad could turn evil?

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SMDKFan [2013-04-07 15:47:29 +0000 UTC]

I wonder when Luigi's gonna join mario on the adventure.

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Renleixue In reply to SMDKFan [2013-04-07 17:36:48 +0000 UTC]

You'll see!!! XD

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SMDKFan In reply to Renleixue [2013-04-07 18:13:04 +0000 UTC]

ok.

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PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 14:15:43 +0000 UTC]

As always, I really liked this chapter.I especially like the boss, he kinda reminds me of General Guy from the first Paper Mario.Great job!

By the way, is Chomper supposed to be a reference to the supposed Chain Chomp partner that was going to appear in PM: Sticker Star?

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 17:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha, I based him a little off of General Guy, yes, I was originally gonna give him a mecha suit, but then I realized, HOW THE FUCK IS THAT GONNA FIT ON STAGE?!? xDDD So I gave him his own steel tank instead.

And you hit it RIGHT on the head, Chomper's based on the Sticker Star partner. I got SOOOO pissed when they took him out of the game, so you know what? FINE, Nintendo, I'll just put him in MINE. XD

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-04-07 17:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha, I knew it!
But seriously, great chapter!I have a feling the next ones will be even better.

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 17:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I've started working on Chapter 2 already, the background is, like, ticking me off, I can't seem to get it right...

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-04-07 17:42:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem!I'm sure you'll get it right.The background in this chapter looks pretty nice!

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 17:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, thanks, really, I can't thank you enough, you're so nice, you're like the only person on here who actually cares about my work. Just seeing your comments is enough to get me into gear to work more.

I guess I SOMETIMES wish there was a way to get more people to look at my art, but in reality, you know, just the small things like your comments make me feel happy, it makes me feel more appreciative of the ones I DO get when I don't get too many.

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-04-07 17:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Aw, no problem!Don't be sad, really.You could submit your art to the Paper Mario Club and people would take a look at it.You could also show this to The-Goomba, since he likes looking at Paper Mario ideas just as much as I do.

To be honest, I sometimes feel this way when my work doesn't get much recognition.But when some of my friends comment on it, I tend to cheer up!So really, don't be sad, I'm sure that there'll be some more people who will like your idea.

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 18:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Wait, I can submit my own art? e_O WTF? I thought I just had to, like, wait for someone to find it and upload it themselves!!! XDDD OH MY GOD I'M SUCH A FUCKING DEEEEEEEEEEEERPPPPPP. I think I'mma go do that, nghhh, I'm scared, though, what if they don't like it? >_<

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-04-07 18:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Of course they will.Your art's freaking amazing, ma'am!Be courageous!

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 18:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwww, alright, I submitted what I have so far, I'm SUUUUUUPER nervous, now! XDD

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PolishedBrain In reply to Renleixue [2013-04-07 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Okay!Don't be nervous, though.

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Renleixue In reply to PolishedBrain [2013-04-07 19:09:12 +0000 UTC]

I'll try not to be!!! DX

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