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I think both of them are somewhat lacking in the maturity department. If Serence really has a problem with it why doesn't he talk to Ayonah instead of wasting time arguing with Kade and raising his own blood pressure levels?
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Because Serence is trying to handle things himself. He thinks he is supposed to do that.
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Kings are so uptight sometimes, always trying to rule everything.
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Going back and re-reading all the old pages, I love this comic~
(tiny spellcheck, hope you don't mind... "You are just afraid you'd *lose*!!" instead of loose)
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Oh right! I fixed that and never uploaded the fixed version here! I'll get that tonight if I remember.. THANK YOU!!
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If you see anything else , let me know ! I greatly appreciate it!
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lol we need Molly Weasly to make these boys behave
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I think the lower right word balloon set reads just fine. The whole panel has this zig-zag, up-and-down interplay about it, and the rhythm of the word balloon placement looks and reads clearly to me. Then again, I read a heck of a lot of comics and I'm used to creative arrangements. I think the only thing that would make it clearer is to move the final "are too!" farther down by just a tiny bit - an eighth of an inch would probably do it.
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Ok, I moved the word balloons down a teeny bit. You are right, I think that is better.
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Yes! It does work better. Such a tiny nudge...
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i think the words read fine. lol. typical brothers.
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Are they relatives? They sound very much like two brothers.
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Ah, i see.
King is the elder one?
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Yes,King Serence is several years older. I haven't figured out how much older, but maybe six or seven years.I have trouble drawing him consistently, so he that looks like he is in his mid-thirties, he keeps getting younger looking!
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Kings are sly people, what can i say)
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Read fine . . . this whole scene makes me giggle
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I read them in proper order without a problem, though it might not hurt to move the lowest two a little further down to give some more spacing between them.
Are these two brothers? They certainly act like it.
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