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Reserved-Chuckle — The Patient is In
Published: 2012-01-14 23:34:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 21965; Favourites: 338; Downloads: 242
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This is my commission for featuring her OC Sarah, in a straitjacket and tickled silly ^__^! Despite her socked foot moving away, I don't think she hates the treatment all that much
.This is my first commission here. I hope you like it
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For your first full commission to start out with being here. I'm incredibly proud and happy with how it's turned out. The detailing you've put in areas are wonderful. The colours of the character and machine contrasting with the plain background gives it a good depth.
I've always liked your style of not using black outlines, you always add colour to them as well to give it more detail and it's always a great feature to view your art.
Your posing is creative and I know you always want to express yourself in your art and use different poses, though sometimes it may be best to measure up certain things, even sizing them up with your finger and thumb (as I do sometimes) to make sure things are even length, as I think Harp's right leg maybe a little on the long side. It's only a minor detail and nothing to bury yourself under, you've really worked well on this. Your blur of motion along the whirling feathers really give it that feel and effect of it properly whizzing around.
Admittingly, I thought the tape over the open mouth expression looked wonderful when you shown me the outline...now I'm having a slight love/hate relationship with it. It's a brilliant effect, but seems a little odd at the same time. lol
Bring more perspective to your objects (the chair/bed mainly) as the back she's leaning on doesn't actually look properly attached.
My favourite details in this picture would have to be her straying tatty hair, it shows she's been struggling for a while and still tries her best to break lose from the torture. Her adorable left barefoot. I don't know what it is, but I think you draw feet wonderfully! Her toes showa great amount of strain and tensing the way you've displayed them. And of course, you've completely aced the blushing expression along her face. Not only showing embarrassement (maybe) but the pressure and flustered frustration of the whole situation. It's really a wonderful piece for your first.
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That actually sounds very reasonable. I like that.
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Thank you very much 
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I absolutely LOVE the fact I can see the smile through the tape. I love gagged/taped bondage scenarios like this~ but I do miss the smile, the laughter~ the forced response of tickling. <3 You managed to give me both in the same image and that just makes me tingle all over. Thank you for this piece of awesomeness. ^_^
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Oh wow, thank you ^__^! I thought it was a shame not to see her smile, and I couldn't leave out the tape since it was a part of what she wanted in the commission. That's what lead me to come up with the smile showing through 
Also, it's nice to meet you 
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Nice. I like it. What is that thing around her mouth? Duct tape or something?
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Thank you 
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Yeah, it's a little weird but not too bad. Doesn't serve much of a purpose to me.
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I can see what you mean. It was more of an aesthetic choice, really, but still
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Being able to move one of her foot free could either brings to the machine the disadvantage or neutral, depending on how feather ticklish her socked foot is. 
I gotta say though, it's a marvelous work there.
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I think the machine would still have the upper hand in this case
Thank you so much
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^_^ True enough. It would. And no problem. ^^
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Thanks; glad you like it
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Hm, odd one. It looks really great - but the open mouth-bit behind the tape just draaaawsss the eyes and looks weird.
Still, well done for the most part! I'm just being awkward
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I just came up with that so she wouldn't look so frightened and appear to be laughing. Good point though - I can see how it could be weird to some
Thanks for the comment, and thanks for being honest with me
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I dont feel awkward I just *am* awkward!
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If you say so 
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Well, u have so adorable style!
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Wow, thank you so very much
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Thankiez for the appreciaitonness
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haha, looks great! cute setup, and it appears to be quite effective!
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I completely agree that it looks quite effective on her 
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Thanks a lot
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