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Description I'm Sonic The Hedgehog!
Sonic Adventure 2


Finally! The first chapter of Survivor: In The Land of Chunks it's here!

I'm really sorry for being such a lazy fella and being so late with this but, I guess it's better late than never right?

Prologue: [link]

Next: Not ready yet.

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Keep on creating! Adios!
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Comments: 41

rainbowkitty777 [2013-01-18 05:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Red this before bed LIKE A BOSS!

Anyway, this is very well written. All the characters are very well written and planned out, and actually follow. The way you do the creepy atmosphere is also very well done. Makes me actually tense up.

I'm also reminded of the book The Way We Fall and a point in Pokemon Platinum, where you have to find Cresslia because a boy is stuck asleep in a nightmare. When you find Creesslia, it flees and starts roaming the region, and it drops the Dream Scale, which you use to pull the boy awake.

I DON'T HAVE ANY MORE WORDS FOR THIS, THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING.

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to rainbowkitty777 [2013-01-19 13:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh geez! Thanks a bunch! I'm so glad you like it! I will do my best with the second chapter!

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ChaosComposer [2013-01-15 23:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Very smart move on your part- not getting directly into Minecraft right away, and taking some time to set the stage. It has a very creepy feel, and you write the characters very naturally (You don't make them act differently than they normally would, something that makes me mad in other fanfictions) and your writing skills are very impressive. It leaves me hanging for more! Definitely worth the wait!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to ChaosComposer [2013-01-17 18:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it!!

Did I really nailed the personallity of the characters?! That's awesome! I thought I wouldn't!!

Expect more soon ad I promise to not make the wait too long! XD

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ChaosComposer In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-17 23:27:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

Take your time! That's what made this installment so good- it didn't feel rushed at all!
Keep up the excellent work!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to ChaosComposer [2013-01-19 13:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Okay, thanks a lot! And I will! Just for you my awesome watchers! x3

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Ahokana [2013-01-15 17:08:50 +0000 UTC]

As soon as I saw you had come to this continuation, I knew that it'd be awesome! Waiting wasn't fulfilled... 'cause that filled it over! Worth the wait! It's how you write the story makes it feel so real, I'd be a involved. Feels like, when I wake up in the night, I can see the purple eyes straight in front of me! I look forward to a continue!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Ahokana [2013-01-15 17:38:40 +0000 UTC]

My my thanks a lot!
Next chapter hopefully will be even better!
I'm glad you like it ^^

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Ahokana In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 17:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Hah you're more than welcome!
That's what I like to hear!
Of course I like ^^

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321PieTime [2013-01-15 04:14:15 +0000 UTC]

So detailed T~T

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to 321PieTime [2013-01-15 04:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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321PieTime In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 04:42:36 +0000 UTC]

anytime!

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Blazerona [2013-01-15 03:56:20 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. Seriously, I knew it was going to to be astounding when it came out. The story is flowing together nicely and I like how you caught my attention with the first few sentences. The conflict is un-weaving very nicely and I'm excited to see what's going to happen next. Very nicely done my friend. If I had I third arm, I'd give you three thumbs up. But since I don't, you get two.

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Blazerona [2013-01-15 04:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I'm so glad you like it! Really! I thought this chapter was going to be crappy! Thanks a bunch!

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YoFreshBean [2013-01-15 03:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Creepy~~!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to YoFreshBean [2013-01-15 03:26:00 +0000 UTC]

Did you liked it? ^^

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YoFreshBean In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 03:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Its great ^^

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to YoFreshBean [2013-01-15 03:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you so much ^^
Comments like this inspire me to work even faster!

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YoFreshBean In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 05:54:11 +0000 UTC]

8D Can't wait for more!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to YoFreshBean [2013-01-15 15:17:09 +0000 UTC]

And you will see more!

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YoFreshBean In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 22:11:14 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!

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SONICANDDANNYRULE [2013-01-15 01:58:50 +0000 UTC]

This looks ummm how to say this ....... EPIC! NICE WORK

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to SONICANDDANNYRULE [2013-01-15 02:03:17 +0000 UTC]

WHAT?! Really? You like this?

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SONICANDDANNYRULE In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 02:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Totally I mean look at my gallery and favorites . I know I draw very bad but at least I tried

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to SONICANDDANNYRULE [2013-01-15 02:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Well, the only way to get better is by practicing! And of course, watching tutorials to help you out!

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SONICANDDANNYRULE In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 03:03:30 +0000 UTC]

I've been doing that I did it with Metal Sonic and Sonic the hedgehog.

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to SONICANDDANNYRULE [2013-01-15 03:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Well taht's the stuff! Keep it up and you'll be even better than myself!

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SONICANDDANNYRULE In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 03:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to SONICANDDANNYRULE [2013-01-15 03:26:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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SONICANDDANNYRULE In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 03:37:18 +0000 UTC]

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Bria248 [2013-01-15 00:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice cover!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Bria248 [2013-01-15 00:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Heh, don't you remember it's the cover I made like weeks ago? XD
Keep reading! xD

And thanks ^^

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Bria248 In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 00:19:31 +0000 UTC]

Yea I remember and ur welcome!!!!

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Bria248 [2013-01-15 00:22:31 +0000 UTC]

So!
What do you think of the chapter? ^^

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Bria248 In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 01:26:45 +0000 UTC]

I think it's very interesting. Especially the way u r building up the plot for the story. It draws my attention making me want to know more about it.

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Bria248 [2013-01-15 01:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh really? I don't know... Which part do you think I should work more?

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Bria248 In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 01:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm.... I think the story so far is good to me but its only chapter 1 so the story will progress.

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Bria248 [2013-01-15 01:48:17 +0000 UTC]

But for example at the end or at the beggining, do you think I sould really work out better the suspence or just leave it that way? I don't know...

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Bria248 In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 01:50:21 +0000 UTC]

The suspense is good, it makes people want to know what happens next so ur pretty great! ^^

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ReshiDaVanci In reply to Bria248 [2013-01-15 01:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank for your opinion ^^
It means a lot.

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Bria248 In reply to ReshiDaVanci [2013-01-15 01:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Ur welcome and glad to help

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