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Published: 2013-04-04 10:34:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 4578; Favourites: 113; Downloads: 51
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i of you,such a beautiful mess, intertwined and overrun.
your arms, copper lips, citrus,
a lovin' with a twist.
my summer away at space pirate camp,
i took to howling with you the first thunder of june;
flesh, storms,
the hunt for human brains,
Maybe Zombies Just Want To Hug?
- 6 lies to tell yourself if shipwrecked.
i can't explain the feelings i get.
wakewalking,
blue dream before i sleep:
the soul cupping rice (glass figurines, lamp light eyes).
my fear is milk two sugars.
drink drink drink
beneath it all,
floral growth, silver spoons,
featherweight
fox teeth,
losing my spine, strange preoccupations with skin,
idle...
maps.
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it's a little quirky. i understand if it comes out confusing - although at the time i did hook it together with some sense of chaotic purpose... meh.
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Ahh...I see. That makes sense. ^^
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I just wanted let you know this has been featured in Awesome Art.I
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Amazing piece
A late congrats on the DD, well deserved!
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I've heard that "such a beautiful mess, intertwined, and overrun" in Sara Bareilles' song "The Light" too...
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oh well, if you insist
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Congratulations on the Daily Deviation! You earned it!
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I adore this! The phrases aren't coherent together, but they still set a mood and somehow create a picture in one's mind to make sense of it! It's incredible; I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for being an inspiration!
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Beautiful. I'd say chaotic in the most glorious sort of way.
It's truly a wonder when it's read out loud - the words flow just so from your lips, you know?
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that's apt, it was a puzzle to put together
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Congrats on the Daily Deviations!
keep up the spectacular work
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....well then.
this was such a fun-to-write, but random poem... i feel like im cheating people now..
wah
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don't worry im confused to (i was probably was on drugs)
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losing my spine, strange preoccupations with skin,
idle...
maps.
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you have a very good taste in poetry. i've been reading through your favorites like reading through a book. i think after im done, i can go to sleep.
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Hi! I've made a found poem using your title! By the way, the zombie bits are AWESOME.
~You can take a look at my poem here, where I've included a link to your poem as credit: [link] 
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oh. nice
the 'Salt' title was actually borrowed from riparii [link] .
no words in this piece are my own. did not even alter any for coherence or create my own title - only the meaning derived through form is mine 
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Yeah, we're title poem buddies! 
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oh this is beautiful ^^
honored my work is a part of it, thank you.
by the way...my username is spelled with a zero :/ no worries though - it's easy to overlook
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ahh, mussst fixxxx.... *runs away (to fix)
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This piece has been featured in my journal: [link] ♥
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