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Description Here is the end page I wanted to dedicate this two strips to my comic artist idol Jeff Smith, author of Bone. Thanks to him and Wendy Pini (Elfquest) I decided to become a comic drawer!
There is a similar scene in Bone, somewhere at half of the comics. And I love what's called "slow sequences", a techique that Jeff uses very much. It's the best hilarious method I know!

I hope to manage to ink this sketch someday in the future -__-'

Elisa Maza © Greg Weisman
Fiore and Eva © me

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Comments: 30

Moonstone27 [2012-07-18 02:10:52 +0000 UTC]

At least Eva saved her

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kissy-moonlight [2010-06-24 00:57:05 +0000 UTC]

LOL The ending was great!

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Anthrokid [2010-01-28 05:10:03 +0000 UTC]

good going Eva!

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DoodleBug13 [2009-09-27 12:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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1dan [2009-09-05 03:40:57 +0000 UTC]

I love the comic series Bone! It's just cartoony yet it has an epic plot at the same time. The funny thing about Fiore is that not only is he cold blooded, but he also thinks slower than others which makes him a bit of a comic relief character as well.

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KatyGraham [2008-02-12 17:34:56 +0000 UTC]

these two pages are funny!

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Moonstone27 [2007-07-13 13:55:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome & hilarous!

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LexiPlexi [2007-06-22 08:55:31 +0000 UTC]

lol Awesome!

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SLRisme [2007-06-07 07:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Very nice job on this, I couldn't stop laughing at the first comic because Fiore only pulled out a smoke and didn't even care! But, the second one was just as wonderful! Great job!

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K9-The-First [2007-06-05 22:06:29 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* I hope you do more comics in the future. If only to contnue this scenerio(sp?).

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Whimsy-Floof [2007-01-26 06:01:37 +0000 UTC]

lmao, Fiore's frickin awesome.
I love the look on Elisa's face just dangling in Eva's hand there. I'm guessing the brackets are because they're speaking Italian?

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ryoko25 [2007-01-20 19:38:30 +0000 UTC]

ok, don't hurt me, but who is fiore?

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ritam In reply to ryoko25 [2007-01-20 23:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Just one my fan character

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ryoko25 In reply to ritam [2007-01-21 00:23:17 +0000 UTC]

okay, thank you.

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stargazer03 [2005-03-07 21:45:15 +0000 UTC]

this is too much *giggles*

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animeangie [2005-02-27 21:17:03 +0000 UTC]

:giggles: I absolutly love this comic strip.I keep comming back to it. *holds up a sign that says "Fiore's "* Sorry. Anyways,good job!

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DancingDragon [2005-02-06 23:10:28 +0000 UTC]

*Runs around giggling.* Keep up the good humor, Rita!

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raptorwolfchick [2004-07-02 02:32:04 +0000 UTC]

omg, both of these strips was just too much for me!! *rubs her aching ribs and tries to stop giggling* you should SO do more of these, if ya ever find time. I know yer probably really really really REAAALLLLY Busy

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VickyGeez [2004-06-26 09:12:44 +0000 UTC]

LOL ahh this is great I couldn't stop laughing when I saw this. Good job it's funnt

-Vicky Geez

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kozispoon [2004-06-16 18:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Eva is too cool She seems to me like she's the bad ass in the relationship that calls the shots
I love the look on Elisa's face and the way Eva is holding her. It all turned out really great. Its a shame you didnt put this up as a deviation, it looks wonderful as is

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Imako-the-Demon-Wolf [2004-06-11 20:40:33 +0000 UTC]

I...can't...breath...laughing....won't.. .stop...*faint*

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Tsuka-sama [2004-05-28 21:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Poor Elisa...not^^

Luv it^^

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EvilSandwich [2004-05-27 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]

I can only imagine what is going through Elisa's mind right now.

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Rocki-chan [2004-05-27 14:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Yay! page 2! all the way! I Fiore!!!

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briannacherrygarcia [2004-05-27 07:58:22 +0000 UTC]

Eva saves the day!!! No thanks to her lazy-ass brother...

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kitty-chan [2004-05-26 05:45:31 +0000 UTC]

HAHA! I just love how he takes his sweet time..takin out his cig, lighting it and such

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darkelf19 [2004-05-25 20:44:15 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* great. simply great. I like the slow sequence too - *and thanks to you know I know what it's actually called!* funny.

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morpheu5 [2004-05-25 18:23:16 +0000 UTC]

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Semplicemente stupenda

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merrypaws [2004-05-25 17:34:31 +0000 UTC]

I remember that part of Bone! I still laugh my head off every time I read it.
Big congrats for managing to keep the character so constant over the whole page!

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ritam In reply to merrypaws [2004-05-25 17:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, It's the one with Lucius falls from the rooftop of the house because of Smiley!! WOAH! I finally found another Bone's fan!!! DDDD

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