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Published: 2005-02-07 04:39:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 944; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 69
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OMG and update??!Yes i'm still here, I'm not dead yet....and DAMN do i have a shitload of drawings to complete...
anywho
Bio for "my" character for an original RPG that me and are doing... Will probably see more characters from this series later on
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YAY!!! Me likey the symbols!! I remember you showing them to me in class and then today, again! rofl!
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WAHH!! I don't know what runes means!
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runes....one of the earliest form of written "magic"
or so thats what i've heard/read
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Pinkie thing is Possible
I am working on Character Descriptions Lea!!!
And as far as GMing the RP I do have the entire story, and Backstory to most of the characters....generally...in my head at the moment including origins of the 3 Major Race Types...
After all...this entire RP is based off of one of my dreams after all....
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I like it, the desing is excellent...would like to see her on action!
Also is good to see something yours after a while....
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Thanks, after the crash World of warcraft kinda took over my life, (its E-crack i swear!) I didnt stop drawing though, I've still got like...20 floppies of Scaned pics so, when i get in the mood i'm sure my art output is gonna explode ^^
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neat idea for an rpg character. is she gonna run around bare or will she wear something eventually? i like the simple coloring, lol.. i always seem to over shade my pics.. anyways, nice job.
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Thanks,
And no, she doesnt Run around nekkid
Another character (which i will draw once Thomas gets me a friggin descrip of him) Gives her his shirt and then later gets her some clothes that fit (he's a big boy so his shirt is more like..a dress..)
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Well....
I can't really critique your art as it's highly superior to my own. I could critique your bio but I dun think you want that.
Good work.
One possible critique though. Unless her fingers are ball and socket jointed the pinkie on her left hand (closest to us perspective wise) must be in some HELLACIOUS pain.
myeah that's it.
^_^;
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And the pinky thing is actually possible from a certain angle, I've checked ^^
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Thanks for the critique ^^
and Its ok, You can make comments on the Bio too, Although for some of it you would have to know the whole backstory to the RPG (which i dont feel like explaining at the moment) to fully understand.
and yeh...my spelling sucks so if there are any errors on it PLEASE let me know. I'll go and change it so I dont look like a complete moron ^^*
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Ah well then that's otay by me...
The only thing I noticed about the bio is that unless you are one of the GM's (quite possible if you're putting an RP toghether with another fellow...or it's just a two person RP.) Is that she seems a bit overpowered. Y've got undescribed amounts of hidden weaponry built in and two nuclear particle (If that's not the real name sorry. When I went to comment I lost the description...) cannons built into her wrists. Seems like the lass could take on an army, no help necissary...
But the picture IS badass...I can't help but think about how cool she'd look when all her runes are glowing! O.o
Oh and I find it interesting that both her and your RE character depend on a guy to give them their first outfits...
XD
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Hrm....Yeah they kind of Do dont they... Heh...Well, Technically Kat (my RE char for those of you who dont know) Doesnt get her [b]first[/b] outfit from Joe, but i wont get into that.
It was my original Idea that she did walk around as she is in the picture (she's a cyborg, but fully robotic from i think the neck down.) Sort of like in the Animatrix...the robots there were human-esque (or however you spell it) but didn't wear any clothes.
I Guess what i'm trying to say is you dont really SEE anything (sorry all you pervs out there XD) so clothes wouldn't really be necessary.
But then again who wouldn't feel a bit weird with a naked robot chick walking around with them? So she gets a shirt (and probably later a full outfit)
And yes, Its a 2 person RP and I am sort of a GM, ( is the main one running the RP)
But I assure you she isnt one of those types of "GOD Characters" that little 13yr old junior high kids like to make up and use to try to run other people's RPGs in an AOL chat room. ^^*
So far the only weaponry that she has been known to have are as mentioned the 2 Lazer cannons in her wrists (I was thinking that they could shift between different particle compositions: IE proton, electron, neutron..but that would be a bit complicated so its just "Lazer" for now) That can shift Intensity.
And a large Sheilding Generator in her chest that can be set to diffrent sheild types.
I was also thinking of small Boosters in her back that could boost her movement speed and maybe give temporary flight...but i havent thought much into that.
But Since she's a new prototype of a Combat unit, she is sort of supposed to be little overpowered. So yeah, She can take on a good heap of guys without relative difficulty but i doubt she'd be able to take on an entire army by herself.
I'll have to draw a picture with her runes glowing though :3 maybe i can make a promo poster or something
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Well then it's all good isn't it? And yeah I noticed from the pic that there wasn't anything to see...not that I was looking....O.o
Anywho yeah a picture of her with her runes glowing would rock quite hard.
XD
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Of course not!
*shifty eyes*
man I need to find a cool person to set up two person RPs with...
nnnnnnnuuuuuuuuubody loves me. ;_;
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Its not that nobody loves you, Its just cool RP buddies are few and far...VERY far between.
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