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Hellsing and the hellsing Characters Β© Koutha Hirano
The Art and Story Β© Me
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Yet another awesome page. I wonder what Seras has in mind. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you! I'll do my best
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LoL 
Schro: Seras, you was a police girl, right?
Seras: Yes. Why?
Schro: So, that's makes this a COP a feel?
Seras: -_- nope...
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(Falls over laughing)
Did think of that - at least he now has an excuse!
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is he suprised because he just killed schrodinger and now he doesnt have a scratch on him
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Well, he don't see something like this everyday.
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Oh my god, does that guy have the marker on his shirt?
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have marker on shirt? marker? Sorry daysand, I don't understand this one
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The marker from Dead Space, sorry, I'm just a fan of that game and it looks like the red thing on the guy's shirt is similar to the marker.
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I'm glad you like it 
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ohh, i am patient. and i got people wanting to read more of that new story of mine as well, so i know the feeling! just keep up the good work!
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Are you feel well ?
Don't you mean "Do you feel well" ?
Another great page
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Thank you very much! About the grammatical mistake:
SchrΓΆdinger is german, he wanted to ask "Are you feeling well?"
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Ohhh
German: very difficult language
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Thank you for your help
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I understood that
How do you come up with the script btw ?
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You ask, how I came up with the story and the characters?
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Yup ?
I'm sure you have a technique/method when writing.
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Thank you for you patience. I try to tell a bit more.
So after I had Fatum's character I started to create his crew. When I created the team I based everything on this system:
Fatum is the leader, he has confidants, "the knights".
-First: Each of his confidants has his own reason why he follows Fatum. I have a small story of every member who joined Fatum. Some of them were former enemies who started to respect Fatum's power, others were attracted by his morals. Because of this there are smaller dislikes, like in every team in reality (Jerald <-> Rozen).
Here an example for a Character base:
The first Knight - Attracted by Fatum, want to see him succeed, but also want a part of the glory. (First I wanted Katlyn for this role but then I replaced her with Branagar)
-Second: Every knight has his own servant called "vanguard" or "avanguard". Vanguards can be friends or servants.
When I finished the characters started to sketch up the mainline of the story, how Fatum is gonna reach his goals. After that I created phases of the storie:
-Fatum recruit the Doctor in the Millennium base (later changed to recruit Eris)
-One of his knights try to take Seras (changed to a vanguard)
-Seras and SchrΓΆdinger beat the "messenger" (later changed a bit on this too)
-Fatum, the first knight and his vanguard attacks Hellsing (changed the vanguard to Gloria)
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This parts are the chapters (there is nearly 30 so far) When I start to draw a chapter I make a page count. I imagine how I should draw them, work out the details of the chapter, If I want to change anything I can do it here, and start.
I hope I could help you
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Just one
Is Fatum an ancient vampire like Alucard ?
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I do not know if Alucard/Dracula can be called as an ancient vampire since compared to other vampire myths like Vampire Lilith, Dracula's exist is not that long at all. (nearly 535 years) However I can tell that Fatum isn't much older than he looks like, he isn't like Alucard. I will tell about his life in the comic.
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That a very complicated question, please let me collect my thoughts.
Well... If you saw my "The Return of Schrodinger" comic you can see, it was not my plan to create this fancomic. But when peoples asked me to continue it, I was thinking "Hell... why not?". The basic idea came absolutely randnom. I grew up on Animes and everytime when an enemy got defeated an even stronger came to take his place as the main villain.
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Fatum's character is the antithesis of Alucard's, since that seemed to be the most strongest opponent. Not really scary, have a big mouth, talk to much, don't take fights seriously. But also he has morals which Alucard lacks. Alucard is a true monster, without the ability to have any human emotions, more like an animal lead by instincts. When I had the character of Fatum I also had his goals led by his morals.
I feel a bit tired maybe we continue it later
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I just read it
Loved your description of Fatum
Get some rest please
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