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RobertLaszloKiss — A robot a day 27
Published: 2010-02-08 00:00:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 820; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 48
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Was thinking about drawing something more dynamic again maybe put in some story telling as well.Pleas I really would like some serious critique from inkers if anyone is seeing this. I try from time to time do do digital inking but I really have no experience so I'd be glad for any tip.
Rough sketch here: [link]
Description:
"Query: Why do we fight the humans wars? Why do we slaughter each other in the name of the humans? Yes they created us, but is anything worth this destruction?
These thoughts rush through the robots mental processors as his arms fail to hold his body up anymore and slowly falls to the ground. He sees as his enemy is closing in, limping from all the battle damage. He tries to get up .... zzzkkkzzz...
Transmission ends here."
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He'll be repaired and enhanced with ribbons
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your robots are cool!
this is really great, nice clean lines would be good for colouring.
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Thank you very much.
Oh please anytime you fell the urge to color any of my drawing just give it a go. I would love to see any of my pieces colored by you
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As far digital inks go I'd say this is pretty solid. The lines are clean and your hatching does a good job of implying different kinds of textures --the sword looks shiney, the horizon looks dark, the robot looks made of battered, rough metal. He even looks a little burnt. Nice.
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Thank you very much sir. I tried my hands with traditional inking but it turned out pretty much a disaster, so I'm glad that at least digitally i made some progress.
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Dynamic, nice. The only tiny small thing I see is the perspective of the sword. Because we can't see the top of the hilt, we should be able to see where the blade meets the bottom of the handle.
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Thanks. Oh yeah i completely forgot to pay attention to that, i alywa rush it when it comes to swords.
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I DON'T KNOW IF I WOULD BE CONSIDERED AN "INKER." BUT MOST ALL OF MY DRAWINGS ARE IN INK. I THINK YOU DID A GREAT JOB HERE. YOU'VE MADE ME VERY SAD FOR THESE ROBOTS. I FEEL BAD FOR THEM.
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Thanks man, i'm really glad you like it.
Aww don't feel sad, robots are made for destruction, comes with the territory.
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I KNOW, BUT THAT ONE LOOKED PARTICULARLY DOWN.
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Whoa, that's so cool. I love the perspective and idea behind it! Nice!
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Thank you very much, i;m glad you like it, always wanted to work with an inclined perspective.
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Thanks man
And thank you for the invite to the RobotSpirit club.
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no problem, and your robots are awesome! 
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Looks great! I like the angle and the pose a lot!
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Thanks man, glad you like it
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Wow! I love the concept of this one. Actually, with the view being through some sort of hi-tech binoculars, I'd love to see what this would look like in color... maybe with a green or orange filter over it.
well done.
-kat
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Thank you very much. I was thinking about coloring it and thought of a red-ish overlay but i'm afraid i'll mess it up, i really have no feel for coloring.
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I didn't used to think I did either, and I'm still not comfortable working with it completely. I was thinking of it being done like how a friend of mine does her webcomics. [link] The two-tone look I think would suit your piece perfectly.
-Kat
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Oh wow that looks awesome. I never thought of using color like that. I'm definitely going to try this coloring style. Thank you very much for the link.
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You're very welcome. 
-kat
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