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Here it is! The comic cover for my Fan characters. I had stared at the sketch for 2 days, without motivation to work on it .This part of their story is after the death of Xon, and when Crome is more right in the head...not that he would ever be right in the head.
Here is the summary:
The psychotic Irken criminal Crome is once again captured. This time however, instead of a normal prison he is sent to a special prison-like facility located on planet Irk. He is fitted with a collar that was meant to explode, and decapitate the wearer. That is if a prisoner were to escape the prison boundaries. Crome is thrown in the same cell of a ferocious Irken hating Vortian of the name Rayne, just for the guards amusement.
However instead the two eventually agree, to escape together. With Rayne reprogramming the collars to explode if they were to walk away from each other, within 20ft of distance instead of being restricted to the facility. They escape into space by tricking the guards, and stealing a ship. Now with guards, and bounty hunters hot in pursuit.
While on the run they travel the dangers of space, and planet to planet. Trying somehow to find a way to remove the collars without triggering the explosive devices, and finally free themselves.
The Collars were first introduced in a 1994 movie called DeadLocked: 2, and reappeared in Ratchet: Deadlocked/Gladiator.
After that I have never seen the Deadlocked collars used again. There was a certain steampunk collar in the movie wild wild west that had a blade home in towards the wearer, and did require a type of co-operation, but after that I don't believe they were mentioned again after Ratchet: Deadlocked.
So now I'm going to use them in my comic.
Pages will be made so much slower than splatter arena. They also should look much better as well.
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Comments: 54
RoboticMasterMind In reply to ??? [2012-04-24 06:03:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Xon died. In the Comic Rayne is supposed to explain what had happen.
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Cyanea-Lamarckii In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-04-24 06:06:58 +0000 UTC]
I see then I will have to wait to know well he was a nice guy -.- even if he was annoying
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Cyanea-Lamarckii [2012-04-24 06:16:58 +0000 UTC]
He was even if he was retarded, and everyone wanted to get rid of him xD
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Cyanea-Lamarckii In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-04-24 06:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Awww Poor little guy wish to hug him now -.-
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Cyanea-Lamarckii [2012-04-24 06:45:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah he does. He happens to die brutally too even if he was innocent.
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Cyanea-Lamarckii In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-04-24 06:57:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh that's horrible poor little guy
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Cyanea-Lamarckii [2012-04-24 06:59:47 +0000 UTC]
It's gonna be even more horrible once Rayne explains and I draw the visual flashbacks, which is going to show what exactly happened.
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Cyanea-Lamarckii In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-04-24 09:58:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh cool I am eager to see read it
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IZluver87 [2012-02-22 22:14:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow! This looks amazing! I love the intense shadowing! Cant wait to see ur comic! XD
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ZontarZon [2012-02-12 18:04:02 +0000 UTC]
But will there be a written version? 8D
I really like the concept. Though there's one thing I can't seem to shake off; I could have sworn Rayne is a mute. Is she? I can't exactly remember...
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to ZontarZon [2012-02-12 19:40:30 +0000 UTC]
Yeah she is. However she knows how to write, and she carries a tablet sort of device with her all the time. Though when fighting, or in tense situations she usually doesn't have time to take it out, or write.
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De-PAKed [2012-02-10 17:51:34 +0000 UTC]
Xon dies? WHY XON, WHYYYY?!?!
I love the collars, I'm going to have to watch DeadLocked now.
I really love the lighting and shadows, they look really cool.
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to De-PAKed [2012-02-10 19:02:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, and it was partly Rayne's fault for Xon dying.
I haven't watched deadlocked in a long time, but I believe it was pretty good. I hardly remember everything besides the collars, and the main character being framed
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De-PAKed In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-12 19:22:02 +0000 UTC]
Will we see how he dies? Or is that for another comic?
... If the main character being framed was a plot twist, I won't be pleased. I do not like spoilers! If it wasn't, sounds cool.
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to De-PAKed [2012-02-12 20:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, his death is for another comic
Throughout the comic the characters will mention Xon several times though.
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De-PAKed In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-13 18:04:19 +0000 UTC]
... How many comics do you have planned?
He was the glue that bound every rebel together... (sorry, I couldn't resist.)
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to De-PAKed [2012-02-13 18:11:36 +0000 UTC]
Probably 3 or 4. It depends with how long this comic takes to make.
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De-PAKed In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-13 18:25:50 +0000 UTC]
... Now that is a lot of comic pages, I wish you luck in doing them. I think you might need them.
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lordxeras [2012-02-10 02:14:42 +0000 UTC]
very intriguing concept, the whole "enemy of my enemy" thing.
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NecroTea [2012-02-09 19:52:09 +0000 UTC]
Oooh this looks so interesting and full of win
Can't wait to read it, it's also nice to hear that you will take your time to make it
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to NecroTea [2012-02-10 01:38:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, this comic should look much better, and make much more sense than that last rushed thing
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Doughnutzify [2012-02-09 17:47:06 +0000 UTC]
I cant wait... *inspiration to finally start making comics hurr hurr :3*
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Spaffi [2012-02-09 17:28:20 +0000 UTC]
woah that looks awesome D8 i especially like the lights combinations, just awesome x3
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Spaffi [2012-02-09 17:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, right now my drawing teacher is teaching us about silhouettes, and how shadows are cast. How the light source hits a object, and to learn to use it as a advantage when drawing.
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-09 18:43:52 +0000 UTC]
aaww cool Ôo you study art? i think i already know but i just wanna know if i'm right XD
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Spaffi In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-10 00:56:38 +0000 UTC]
aw cool x3 i wanna do the same, my sis already studies it, i wanna go to that university NOW XDD
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DarkQueen43 [2012-02-09 13:45:42 +0000 UTC]
Hmm Interesting. and collars that explode? ..hmm there's a same type of thing in fallout 3 exploding collars in paradise falls=
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to much to explain really so i'll not rant.
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hmm look forward to read
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to DarkQueen43 [2012-02-09 17:36:16 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, I guess they were used again but still hardly.
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to MagicBirb [2012-02-09 17:37:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
Yeah he does unfortunately
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Asriel20Asi [2012-02-09 17:38:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
He was young too!
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Ma-Junior [2012-02-09 17:39:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm not looking forward to writing the script since I'm not in the mood, but I might as well force myself.
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Ma-Junior In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-09 18:41:32 +0000 UTC]
Well I don't know about the forcing part, it might go better if yer in the mood. XD
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PanzerDamen [2012-02-09 05:24:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm really loving this idea! Can't wait to read the comics!
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to PanzerDamen [2012-02-09 05:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I already have all of it thought out. Now I just have to write the script
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PanzerDamen In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-09 05:33:16 +0000 UTC]
Well good luck! It sounds like it's going to be really awesome! A good combination of action and comedy.
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to PanzerDamen [2012-02-09 05:36:13 +0000 UTC]
A nice combination of action/adventure, comedy, and some dramatic parts.
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PanzerDamen In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-09 05:38:08 +0000 UTC]
Sounds good! Can't wait!
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RoboticMasterMind In reply to Miss-DNL [2012-02-09 04:51:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, it's also supposed to be hilarious at some points XD
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Miss-DNL In reply to RoboticMasterMind [2012-02-09 04:52:22 +0000 UTC]
that's always good helps lighten the mood X3
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RiskellionGamble [2012-02-09 04:29:40 +0000 UTC]
O3O This. Is. Awesome. there are no other words that can describe it.
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