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Published: 2012-05-10 08:27:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 7003; Favourites: 170; Downloads: 32
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has convinced me to draw Tak. After I had said I had never drawn Tak before. So when we saw Tak the hideous new girl on my livestream. I wanted to draw Tak on planet dirt realizing she wants revenge, and to plan a way to steal Zim's mission.So much detail!
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I think the overall quality of this artwork is astounding, and also sticks to the serious feelings Tak had endured in her exile on planet dirt. The mood is set and the emotion can easily be felt. You succeeded in creating a magnificent Irken sketch while sticking to JV's style.
However, with all your success there is a downside. Takes figure and proportion size appears a bit... "stretched out"... It doesn't appear to incorporate your style, so this may be assumed to be an error in the starting sketch. Planet dirt also seems to be slightly more clean than what was seen in the show.
But once again, your work is fantastic and I believe I will continue to see similar works as you improve in any areas you are weak in. Good luck in the future.
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Thanks for the critique!
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Its what I do. Your very welcome.
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Tak's Realization by RoboticMasterMind is a well-done piece of Tak on planet Dirt, and I can easily tell that there was a lot of effort put into the creation of this piece.
Robotic spared no expenses with doing the details in the background, and for that, I commend thee. It really does look dirty and disgusting on planet Dirt, and Robotic portrayed this very well.
Though I would have to say that I would like a bit more emotion out of Tak in this picture. This is obviously a very hard and maddening realization, and I would assume that Tak would look more angry or frustrated than anything else. (I just can't seem to imagine Tak being very sad. She's a violent girl, for sure!)
As for Tak's anatomy, I find no fault in the outfit at all. However, Tak's head seems to be a bit elongated vertically; shortening that should remedy it easily.
Now, for the part of the critique that Robotic probably predicted: SHADING. Oh my.
But I digress. Robotic is getting better at shading, gradually with every picture they do. I can tell the light source is coming from higher up, most likely from a moon or celestial bodies. However, The pipes seem to be shaded on random sides; try shading only one side of all pipes, the one facing away from the light source, and try reducing the shading on Tak's outfit to keep it at the same angle as the head.
Again, I really like this piece. I hope to see more like this one in the near future.
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Thank you for the critique. However Tak was sad on planet Dirt when I saw her expression the day I drew this picture, when she was being dumped to clean the planet. Reason why I gave her the more upset look to go with that scene a little. Though I admit I probably should had given her more body movement to express her emotions. As for the rest thanks
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The face really makes me want to feel sorry for Tak, which I do. Good job!
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Great job I only have one problem. It seems like she is a little sad, contrary to her norm. Still, two thumbs up.
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I thought this was after inter the forphles.
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She was seen a little sad in a scene when she was on planet Dirt. When she was wearing the janitors outfit to clean the planet. This was supposed to be like that scene except in a moment she will start scowling. Thank you thought
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Dang that is freakishly close to the actual art!
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I wish it was. I'm trying hard to mimic the actual style and backgrounds. But I still end up drawing everything darker than it's supposed to be
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I wish I could draw the actual charactersjdnd You've yet again amazed me. C: I really wish I saw the episode with TAK that was never shown because it's supposed to be all amazing and dark. C:
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They're not too difficult, especially Zim. It's those backgrounds that are evil horrible pains.
Then that IZ style, and cell shading with the lighting.
Anything Tak would be worthy of being seen.
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More people must draw the TAK! ...AND SKOODGE...AND...LARD? xDD
Yes! Backgrounds! So much paaaainndndhdhdhdh AND THE SHADING AND LIGHTING IS DJDJEJJFJFJFRJKHJDJHRFKRHFHJFEJHFR...
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I need to try drawing Lard Nar, and possibly more skoodge. But until then I must draw Tak, and mimi in both alien/disguise form more.
Some backgrounds I don't have problems with. It's the IZ backgrounds and it's weird lighting that is hard. The shading in the IZ bgs are sometimes a combo of soft and cell shading. Which is sorta confusing with certain objects and environments.
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Lololol...You could draw the cheesy Spongebob background! :'D
And NOW I WANNA DRAW SOEMJJDJDJDJ
My computer better not restart again like yesterday. I will go BABOOOOOM.
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Yes I can draw the cheesy girly flowery spongebob background
Save in between drawings. That will prevent lost of some work if it suddenly restarts.
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AND IT NEVER MOVES!!! 
And lolol I'll try but no guarentees that when I go to the bathroom and come back, it'll still be djdjfm XDDDD Oh, I hate my computer. xD
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Very awesome 
Ah well XP
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There was a couple of episodes I loved like this one, fry cook what came from the stars, Attack of the saucer morons, Hobo 13, backseat drivers from beyond, Halloween spectacular of doom, planet jackers, that mall episode and then the one with the hamster.
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I liked most of those too XP But I hated the Saucer Morons D: That one was sad for me >.<
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I found that episode hilarious. I was laughing the whole time, and I still do xD
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It made me cry D: That blobby guy in the ship ;~;
...well I was 5 when I cried about it. Now it just makes me heavily depressed XD
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Nah, attack of the saucer morons was when zim was captured and displayed at a alien convention thing by psycho scifi fans xD
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Oh... then I'm an idiot XD
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hahaha! i remember That livestream... She looks awesome btw
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good lord! the detail!!!
love the sky. its my fav part!
LOVE THIS PICTURE!!!
her head....its a lil big
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Thank you
Yeah, her head is supposed to be bigger. It's a attempt at IZ style.
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^^ awesome!
lol
ur welcome
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Cool Picture 
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I have succeeded
Tak looks like shes wondering why the hell is she cleaning a planet up thats is MEANT for dumping on
Seriously love how you have captured the mood here. Tak just looking at the mess around her. "What did she do to deserve this?....oh right..Zim" XD
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The realization hits her, more and more dirt and junk is going to keep on coming. And it's all Zim's fault that she's stuck to pointlessly clean it. After 50 years she wasn't going to wait any longer she will get her vengeance. In which she claimed wasn't revenge, but is still revenge.
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V nice
I still to this day wonder why Tak has a beauty spot...
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I really don't know either. It's kinda the same with why the bees have human derpy eyes in the show.
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Or the ham beast XD
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awesome she would be proud. This is your first time? You my friend have talent ^^
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It still looks a little weird to me, though I'm sorta proud of it.
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