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RobotSnowman — I'm Leaving by-nc-nd
Published: 2011-07-25 03:04:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 51; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description You don't understand, do you
How hard I work
To try to make something out of the pair of us
Something decent

You don't understand what I do
I do out of love
Maybe it would be clearer
If I showed you a darker side of me

Is that what you want?
To hear every bitter thought
Every barbed word tipped with venom?
I thought not

See how I've couched my thorns in patience,
My claws in control?
All for you and me
So we can leave this hell someday

No, I don't think you'll get anywhere without me
Not as you are, anyway
Not anywhere good
You're helpless, you'll starve

But you don't see--oh no,
To you I'm a villain
Even though I'm only looking out for you
You don't want me--so I'm leaving

Let's see how well you do
On your own
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Comments: 3

aecgal [2011-08-02 21:18:14 +0000 UTC]

I have read most of your poems, and I love them!! The adjectives, and how the words flow, is spectacular! I also love how you end with simple lines that tie the whole thing together! Bravo!

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RobotSnowman In reply to aecgal [2011-08-02 22:17:31 +0000 UTC]

*warm fuzzy feeling*

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aecgal In reply to RobotSnowman [2011-08-02 22:22:34 +0000 UTC]

lol, nice, but i really like it!

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