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Published: 2009-02-28 08:57:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 28422; Favourites: 135; Downloads: 443
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Description An old short story.Not very clear,even not quite understandable.But at least I had something submitted.Get the fullview if you want to have a look
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Comments: 7

sexykeepr [2015-09-04 11:27:00 +0000 UTC]

best!

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apz5212849 [2010-07-05 15:01:29 +0000 UTC]

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root001 In reply to apz5212849 [2010-07-07 07:38:31 +0000 UTC]

You are right.ζ˜―ηš„

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TheAnoraknophobe [2009-02-28 17:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice expressions and good sequencing. The sad look from the other maid as the first is led away is very telling. (Sure the maid's clumsy, but what do you expect when you make your hired help do their work in heels? Tsk! ^.^ )

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root001 In reply to TheAnoraknophobe [2009-03-01 01:36:32 +0000 UTC]

You get the point..

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Amaniwolf [2009-02-28 12:24:12 +0000 UTC]

The sequences are very well done!

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root001 In reply to Amaniwolf [2009-03-01 01:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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