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Runningstream990 ā The Uprising chpt 1
Published: 2012-11-20 01:54:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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First chapter of my storydon't be too harsh guys I'm not a professional writter
and this is just the beginning, it'll get better I promise ouo
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yaaaaaay~~ >u< I was scared my writting skills weren't gonna be good enough ;;
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They're fine~
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yaaaaaaay~ 
I used to write horribly but someone once taught me how to write and it was hard trying to remember when to use paragraphs and stuff ;; XDDD
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Oh gosh when I write I just stuff it all in one big clumo.
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lol I just wanna say something really fast
I CAN TYPE!~!
I DONT ALWATS TYPE LIKE THIS
I LIkE WAfFLes beCAuase thye're realiyy gooD
I can type good ;u;
yeah, you're supposed to put in paragrapsha dn stuffs and when someone is saying somethig you usually make tht a new paragraph i think xDD
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dude shanna I put on some lip gloss (i thought it was chap stick) and OMG IT SMELLED SOOOO GOOD IT WAS WATERMELONS
SO I LICKED IT OFF MY LIPS
AND OMFG
IT DOESN'T TASTE LIKE WATERMELONS
IT WAS SO BAD
I CAN'T GET IT OUT OF MY MOUTH UGH
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AHAHAHAHAHA XDDDD
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it was horrible I had to brush my teeth to get it out XDDDDD
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Poor Audrey. XD
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I threw away that lip gloss it made me sad.
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*pats your back*
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-sobs into your shoulder-
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HOW COULD ANYONE BE HARSH WHILE TALKING ABOUT YOUR WRITING SKILLS? :'D
YOU'RE AWESOME >u<
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i feel like there are some grammar errors and paragraph issues XDD but eh
thank you very much >u<
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I DON'T SEE ANY :'D
I SEE AMAZINGNESS
YOU'RE WELCOME C:
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owefoihqro ;u; yaaaaaay!!
I feel like Lily was really harsh the Pheanem in this chapter ;; xD
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Oh gosh xD
She was a bit harsh..yes xD
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yeaah she can do that XDD
she was like that when they were married too.
their oldest daugher is like twice as bad as her mother is.
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she's a real pain in the ass.
Audderz despises her.
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but Audderz's has a hard time with kids her own age
BECAUSE SHE DOESN'T AGE.
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....
BECAUSE SHE'S MAGICAL
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something like that...
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OO
I LOVE
I ROVE
XD
VERY MUCH SO
CONTINUES
NEED MORE
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you'll get more don't worry~!
I'll try and write another chapter tomorrow~!!
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oiehroih :"D I'm so glad you like it~!
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I feel like Lily was kinda harsh to poor little phea ;;
OH
AND THAT CAT.
the cat is a major imput into the chapter that'll make sence later one~ >u>
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POOR POOR LITTLE PHEA :C
HORY SHET
KITTY
WITH RED EYES
xD
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yeah... and he got guilted into coughing up money for his ex wife... (btw Alex is his son in case that wasn't clear)
... who else has red eyes? >u> i'm gonna see ifyou can figure this out~
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Yeah, I knew that c:
Phea has red eyes.. hmm.. xD
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what did I say about Pheanem
what kind of Demon is he?
c:
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Oh.. I think you said shapeshifter.. xD
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mhmm
did you put the peices together yet?
who is the cat?
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PHEA
YOU BAD DEMON KITTY CAT
XD
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YES1
SO THATS WHY THE CAT JUMJPED OUT OF THE WINDOW CUZ HES LIKE "OH SHIT MY EXWIVES HERE BETTER MAKE AN ESCAPE AND TURN INTO A HUMAN."
so the winow seemed like the best option...
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AH
THAT MAKES SENSE NOW
XD
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YEAAAH :"D I'M SO SMARTTTICLE
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GURRRL I NEED MOAR STORY-NESS
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WELL I'M LAZY GIVE ME A FEW DAYS
EXPECT IRREGULAR UPDATES CUZ IM NOT NORMAL
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UGGU
FINE
xD
It's okay, take as many millenniums as you wish c:
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