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Description    I love Blood.
   I really love it when it's dry. It's like paint, fragile, and flakes off so easily, yet can be painted on smoothly and easily. Yes, I love blood, perhaps it is wrong.
   Most people would say I'm a freak for loving blood so much. But, perhaps I am a freak. Perhaps I am not. Is it wrong to love something so beautful, and it is beautiful.
   Blood is such a deep, dark red. Like a fine ruby, but more devine, more powerful. Yet blood is so fragile, showing such strength, yet such weakness. It makes me want to see more of it, makes me want to watch it move slowly down a pale expanse. Red and white clash in a stunning way, that entrances me.
   Blood, it awakens my spirt and senses, drawing me from the world around me, and letting me glimpse into my true self. Blood, your own, or someone elses, triggers a type of powerful responce in people. It shows the monster inside yourself, inside the ones you think you know. And I know them, all of them. I know their thoughts, their true intents, their blood.
   Do not think of me as a freak. Think of me as a seer. One who reads blood, as another reads a palm. As another reads a crystal ball, or cards, or stars. I read blood, I read souls. And God.....
   ....I love it.
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Comments: 8

Dormant-Levi-Lullaby [2012-11-14 22:35:38 +0000 UTC]

Detail is perfect.

Topic is perfect.

Well, the whole poem is perfect, to me

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SablexScriptor In reply to Dormant-Levi-Lullaby [2012-11-14 22:36:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Dormant-Levi-Lullaby In reply to SablexScriptor [2012-11-14 22:39:20 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome~

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SablexScriptor In reply to Dormant-Levi-Lullaby [2012-11-14 22:42:46 +0000 UTC]

So, you've read most of my writing, i need your opinions.


What is the best part of my writing?
What is the worst?
What is my best topic so far?
How well is my Grammer?
And where would you want to see my wrinting in five years?

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Dormant-Levi-Lullaby In reply to SablexScriptor [2012-11-14 22:55:21 +0000 UTC]

1. The best part of your writings are the topics. You pick such a simple topic, but put it in such great detail.

2. The worst....? Uhm....You could try using stronger words. Like, to describe something, try to find a word that is better than the one you already used.

3. The best topic so far....? I don't really have one. I love all your writings/poems. They're all so perfect.

4. Your grammer, overall, is pretty good. Here and there are some errors, but, other than that, everything is pretty good.

5. In five years, I see your writings is maybe a book or two, but the books are very popular. Have you ever thought of becoming an author?



Hope these helped at least a bit

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SablexScriptor In reply to Dormant-Levi-Lullaby [2012-11-14 23:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes, That was very helpful!! Thanks!! i'll try to improve a bit more, and make it perfect!

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Dormant-Levi-Lullaby In reply to SablexScriptor [2012-11-14 23:07:45 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome

And, good luck in prefecting your writings/poems.

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SablexScriptor In reply to Dormant-Levi-Lullaby [2012-11-14 23:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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