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Published: 2014-08-27 21:41:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Amongst glistening dew,Under the sky of June,
In the early morning,
Where I last saw you.
The moon is above me,
The sun will soon rise,
And I’ll have to part,
My final goodbyes.
So with a parting sigh of a lover,
And with the ease of no other,
I leave this dear white lily,
For you.
Far away I will wander,
And my existence you might ponder,
If you go to the ocean’s waters,
There you’ll see me.
I will rest on the beach,
Where the water cannot breach,
My thoughts that rest on you.
From my loving thoughts,
Of you.
Comments: 4
ScorpianAkio [2014-10-13 03:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Woot, sounds pretty nice. how long did it take for you to come up with this?
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SablexScriptor In reply to ScorpianAkio [2014-10-13 10:07:46 +0000 UTC]
About thirty seconds. *Sheepish smile* I go line by line, and just let it all melt itself together.
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ScorpianAkio In reply to SablexScriptor [2014-10-13 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]
sweet, I could never do something like that ^^
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SablexScriptor In reply to ScorpianAkio [2014-10-14 23:15:37 +0000 UTC]
I just write like I think. My thoughts sort of scatter, but always work in short, fragmented phrases and lines of poetry.
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