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DemonWitchCat [2011-09-11 15:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Aw, poor Jareth! ^^ He did sorta like Toby.... :3

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sesshomaruluver101 [2010-10-21 07:37:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh Jareth. You still fail. Epically. 8D

I really like your expressions. I'm getting a lot of emotions on each page.

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CatKittyPretty [2010-10-20 20:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I'm sorry to say this Jareth, but something is wrong with your brain at the moment.

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Figarro-Luv [2010-10-20 01:43:36 +0000 UTC]

that last sentence... kinda sounds wrong..... sry

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Poisonisnotgoodforu [2010-10-20 01:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh Jareth, poor Jareth!! XD

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Ana-Shadow-Wolf [2010-10-19 07:30:31 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

Jareth FORGIVES her? Wait, shouldn't he be the one saying 'I'm sorry'? XD

He neveeer changes!

Loving this so much!

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PBCrackers [2010-10-19 05:11:19 +0000 UTC]

It wouldn't help to use a pen for inking. Honestly, you can just use a regular pen if you don't have a Pigma or a nib.

Also, where are the backgrounds? No backgrounds can sometimes confuse the reader. Backgrounds give a setting, a place. I see you've created a door; but that's it.

And why haven't you erased any of your guidelines? Overall, visible guidelines make for very sloppy work.

And I would suggest using readable font too. It's very simple; if you have a PC you can just open up Paint and use the text tool. I'm not sure about a MAC, but you can easily download a free image program such as Gimp and use the text tool there.

And if you're doing a manga/comic, then you should really use a ruler for straighter lines.

The shading is okay, but it's sloppy. I would much rather you shade in pen or leave it white and shade it on the computer later.

Overall, the drawings are good, but your comic/manga cannot stand on drawings alone. I think that you should take this off of dA, fix it, then re-upload it.

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