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samecool11 — A Writer Writes
Published: 2005-11-22 01:08:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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With the click of the pen and a flash of an idea, he's off. The unsteady pattern of words flow. He starts at the left, moves to the right and when out of room he goes down a line and back to the left. Down the page his creation flows. Flowing letter by letter, word by word, sentence by sentence, another paragraph done. Finally, a pause. Stuck on a thought or at a loss for words. It doesn't matter. In the next second he's off again. When he finishes, well, he'll never truly be done.Related content
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I would say, "the unsteady pattern of words begin to flow", and with the description of the lines, I would save words with a "when out of room he repeats the process; down the page his creation goes, flowing letter by letter..." (etc). To me, this little piece is nice, but there are too many sentences. Try piecing sentences together with punctuation, that oughtta help for future reference. 
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"Flowing letter by letter, word by word, sentence by sentence, another paragraph done."
I would advise sticking the word "is" between "Paragraph" and "done," otherwise the sentence is not quite complete.
Loverly style, btw.
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Realluy good if this is just an exercise! You can do a lot here with the right tweaking into a nice mini-story. Alot od words get repeated but I don't know if that is intentional- down, off, flow
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well, i just sorta write, unless it's a serious story. most writings of mine aren't, sadly.
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