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Published: 2016-08-09 19:56:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 236; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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  This night was about eating peanuts. She was watching the screen of the TV, while her right hand was genuinely seeking any grab in the package that would friendly accept the invitation.
Deerie sighed, while turning her sight toward the window. It was quite soothing to hear the drops of the rain hitting the roof, while she felt safe on her sofa. But yet, she was still wondering whether the next day she could at least enjoy one nice walk under the sun!

She received a call. It was her boyfriend.
"Hey!", she said.
"Hey, sup?", he responded;
"Not much, just chilling with peanuts on hand, what about you?"
He too, was eating peanuts.

Well. Common points, common interests, you know the deal.
After a mere conversation with him, she estimated that sleeping would be cool (well, COOL... or just like, more adequate, considering she was kinda sleepy) So...

... she slept.

The wind kept pushing the trees outside, while their shadows were dancing over the wall of her bedroom. The trees did not sleep (or did they?), and the owls would still find a place where to shelter themselves. Some peeps would be fascinated by this night life the storm was creating. And Deerie was dreaming: a forest. Leafs were flying around her; in a sort of ruby colored setting where was echoing an autumn atmosphere (tbh, it kinda reflects a dream I had now I rethink about it, but it's not the same as hers...)
The path was opening; an amazing light was welcoming her. She strangely felt attracted to it... what would it be? As she approached, she...

*knock knock*

Eerr?? Aahh!! She jumped out of her bed. Must have just been a dream.

*knock knock knock*

... Or not?
She checked her phone: it was 3AM. Who was knocking on her door at such a hour? She hesitated, but anyway she left her bedroom, and approached the hall door.

"Who is it?", she asked.
But no answer.

She was about to go back to sleep, when...
*knock knock*

She sighed, and approached back the hall door both annoyingly and suspiciously. She opened slightly, within the grinding sound this made, but realized there was nobody. So she closed back, and within the quarter of second after doing so, she heard again these knocking sounds. She suddenly opened, but still nobody: just the sight of an empty hallway... with no dead angle.
She went confused now, but ended up thinking it was probably just a hallucination or maybe a noise that strangely sounded quite similar to the one of the hall door being knocked. Going back to sleep was kind of difficult though, as she felt perplexed. But she went back to her bedroom. The noises kept going a few times before stopping definitely.

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Comments: 11

DerEnKah [2017-01-21 15:01:02 +0000 UTC]

August 9th 2016
Holy shit...I'm slow as fuck.
But nevertheless a nice little creepy story about deer. x)
I wonder what was knocking.
Maybe it was.......
DA LUHCK!!! stalking her!

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Sameore In reply to DerEnKah [2017-02-01 03:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaa!!!

I wonder what I was having in mind back at the time too.

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LockRay [2016-08-10 10:12:47 +0000 UTC]

eyy :^) ey... ey

Good jerb Saem T-Rex/10 that was cool beans

PS explosions yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes explosions yes yes explosions explosions explosions yes explosions yes yes yes yes exlksojssdasoinsubaierubfin8q3749p0wj-=]-ew
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Sameore In reply to LockRay [2016-08-10 16:06:19 +0000 UTC]

LORLRLRORORORORLROORORLROLRL EXPLOSAURUUUUS!!!!
 

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LockRay [2016-08-10 10:11:53 +0000 UTC]

"Hey!", she said.
"Hey, sup?", he responded;
"Not much, just chilling with peanuts on hand, what about you?"

(dramatic pause)


He too, was eating peanuts.    

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Sameore In reply to LockRay [2016-08-10 16:02:11 +0000 UTC]

YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

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deerwinged [2016-08-10 10:07:01 +0000 UTC]

 kind of disturbing how I never found anyone outside the door, even though I heard repetitive knocking. . . Oh well, maybe it was just a hallucination, or just the wind  
Or, maybe..
A SKELETON O: 


coughs...

This is awesome, Sam!! :'D I love it! 
It's got drama, romance, suspense,  and eveeeeerything o: 11/10

YES, YES SAM, EXPLOSIONS 

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Sameore In reply to deerwinged [2016-08-10 16:05:25 +0000 UTC]

 THERE ARE NO SKELETONS INSIDE MY CLOSET!!!
 ... EXCEPT ME SOMETIMES.


Thank you, deerie. I'm glad you laik it...

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Aelzoth [2016-08-09 20:54:21 +0000 UTC]

PEANUTS!!!

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Sameore In reply to Aelzoth [2016-08-09 20:58:41 +0000 UTC]

I LIKE THIS!

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Aelzoth In reply to Sameore [2016-08-09 21:55:11 +0000 UTC]

HECK YEAH!

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