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StarsNextToMars [2017-05-12 16:45:54 +0000 UTC]

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The way the colors blend in and the splashes of color everywhere makes this seem very emotional, giving the image of falling.

Vision: Everything in this piece looks gentle and beautiful, like it's name. The style of the art is memorable and perfect for the vibe I think you're aiming for.

Originality: This slightly reminds me of an Adidas Commercial but again, Adidas commercials are known for being upbeat and with jumping people.

Technique: You have a very distinctive drawing style that makes me feel very relaxed.

Impact: It really made me feel something calm. Thank you for making this. IT really changed me.

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Ilyaev [2017-05-11 10:11:10 +0000 UTC]

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Hey! I think that I can help in a critique, so lets try eh?

Firstly The colours are really nice, the blue and pink are super harmonious and I enjoy that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> though I do feel as though the blobs of colours in the background, if you didn't name the title as sakura, I wouldn't know what it is? There needs to be some sort of explanation to the viewer without using a title as an explanation. Its fine to lead them, ofc, but it shouldn't have to be an explanation!

Secondly, and probably more of a whole, your edges are a bit weak. The edges on the face, the shadows for example, the hair just kind of, stopping.

I did a quiiick paint over
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What I did was, make the background a bit empty, the line of blossoms basically pull you into the character, rather than the bottom left which is what I looked at before. Fixed the edges around the side of the face, and just kind of filled the hair. I spent 4 minutes on this, but I think if you did the changes I did well, it'll be quite an interesting piece.

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