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Published: 2017-08-10 19:48:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 293038; Favourites: 891; Downloads: 547
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Trying out some new stuff, and committing to a projectRelated content
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I agree with musicmaster the first panel looks great. the speed lines as background works with the action but I would have done something more static for the other panels.
Peter parker face look great. the only down I would have would be I think
his(her) expression matches the thought bubbles more then the word bubbles.
its been a bit so I looked at the earlier pages to catch up and you can see a clear improvement. I noticed one continuity error in spider-mans costume the previous page it was way more torn then in the new one. For the record this is not a problem with me I think this looks far better. if it was me I would have left more of his costume. that way if time god hits him with more magic mojo powers you can see more change.
I'm looking forward to what happens next keep up the good work.
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Yeah the costume change I s the price of moving forward with the comic. There are a ton of issues with the previous pages that I wish I hadn't done, but those have been the same reasons that I haven't finished this comic in the first place
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All of the characters, a shading, and dialogue work very well for the comic-book style and are very fitting.
The dialogue and thought bubbles don't take away from the art of the characters and makes if feel like a real comic.
The first panel is by far the best, the feeling of movement with the background and She-Hulks attack meld perfectly. That being said, the backgrounds in the rest of the panels look like they should convey motion, but there is no motion happening since She-Hulk, Spider-(wo)Man, and the god of time are all standing still.
Perhaps a more static backgrounds for the later panels similar to the ones on page 6 and 7 would be more appropriate for the panels where "I can't move."
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Awesome tip! I need all the help I can get, especially with backgrounds! Thanks a ton dude!
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funny how I've been anxiously waiting for the nest parts to be uploaded and it ends up coming out on my Birthday
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Well! Happy birthday! More coming in a few!
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Not bad at all I would say the root thing that stop her from moving should be a bit larger so we can see it a bit easyer I didn't even notice at first. Other than that It great...
SORRY FOR THE BAD ENGLISH
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You write English very well, I understood everything you wrote.
Good point, I'll try to correct in the next pages
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Well thx for the reply 
Any way I say Sorry for the bad english because sometime I get comment about my english and I don't like geting those.
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Good to see this back, and it's certainly enjoyable, but just gonna ask if those "arker" and "femal" tags are intentional.
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No I upload from my iPad, and it's a pain. I just don't care enough to go through the 10 mins it would take to correct it
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Yeah, makes sense. Like I said good work on the actual thing.
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