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bearfighter [2014-01-12 20:30:26 +0000 UTC]

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This will be my first critique.

What strikes e first is the wetness of the image. Obviously there's water frozen in mid-splash. Then there is the colour, blue, with green in the fore- and background. The grass seems wet as well, perhaps the dew lingering.

The water in the air catches the light brilliantly and it seems that the jitter of grass sparkles in the sun, even the air is filled with wet sparks. The droplets could have been crystals, had they not been so obviously caught in mid-movement. They seem weightless, almost like they are rising towards the sun.

About the composition, it is solid and centered, quite a bit room for air above the mug, but perhaps a bit reserved. The colours play together very well, blue and green. But here as well the colour scheme, albeit tasteful, might be a bit reserved.

An interesting idea, executed perfectly.

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