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Published: 2012-04-28 19:06:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1285; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 10
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So is selling some beautiful adopts. I saw this one and more or less had to have it(or at least try to have it). For her I had to draw the character and then she would choose who got it from the drawing. Sketched it last night and more or less colored it all morning. If I were to get this guy I would call her Lady Amherst and she would have yellow fire. Dunno why exactly she's flying in a desert, i guess its because drawing mesa's is fun.Ar'loc and this design are 's
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DeliriouStudios [2012-04-28 19:12:48 +0000 UTC]
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Firstly its a very good drawing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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The first thing i thought was off was the right back leg, not something I would imagine a dragon would do while banking e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Also, the outlines are very wavy and wobbly, I don't know if that's intentional or not? but if its not? id work on drawing straight smooth lines in the future!
And lastly, the background. I think the rocks on the horizon are fine, good detailing, but the clouds lack detail, some nightlights here and there where the sun is shining on them would just make the background pop a little e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Again, well done! and I hope my advice helps in your future drawings e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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saphariadragon In reply to DeliriouStudios [2012-04-28 19:17:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for critiquing
I was thinking that maybe its helping him turn? That and it looks cool but I see your point and its making me giggle XD
yeah, I know my line art is something I'm not particularly good at. Working on it.
The clouds were kind of quick jobs simply because clouds are a butt and I didn't feel like doing them that detailed.
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DeliriouStudios In reply to saphariadragon [2012-04-28 19:22:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I know what you mean about the clouds, after drawing the animal you just don't have the patience for the backgrounds. I get that to! And I see what you mean with the helping him turn part, but I don't think I would have put the leg at that angle. I would have put it at a similar perspective as the other leg but higher up, But that's just me
Again well done! and your welcome!!
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PreciousAngelWings [2012-05-07 17:18:14 +0000 UTC]
I coulda sworn i commented on this... Gr.... I think my browser got closed or something. anyways, this looke really col. i looove the angle and the colors and details in the feathers
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saphariadragon In reply to PreciousAngelWings [2012-05-27 21:52:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you I like playing with angles
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Policide [2012-04-28 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful! I love the sideways skew of the image. <3
The coloring is lovely as well. Great job.
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