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Published: 2012-09-20 01:47:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2194; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 11
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0okami-Rei [2013-04-07 15:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Your comics are really great!

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sapphireluna In reply to 0okami-Rei [2013-04-09 00:26:50 +0000 UTC]

oh boy thanks XD

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TempestuousInquiry [2012-10-08 15:22:44 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of an episode of Pokemon where a certain Gym Leader follows a certain trainer into the Viridian Forest... XD

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UnknownOO8 [2012-10-07 06:24:09 +0000 UTC]

I admire Zara's determination

Also, Dmitri, your introduction needs more work....

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CountDraggula [2012-09-25 03:41:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow it seems every time I recommend something, you fix it in the next page, oops.
I've noticed that some of your speech balloons are a bit small for some of the text, you might want to fix that, you've got plenty of space, I'm sure you can find interesting ways of re-arranging the art so that you can make the bubbles slightly bigger.

You kind of bleed over the margin of the panels a bit, you should take care to delete that unless you're going for some kind of effect.

I really like how you handled the forest in the first couple panels, it looks robust and lush, without having to resort to my approach, of over-killing it like a crazy person OTZ

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sapphireluna In reply to CountDraggula [2012-09-25 19:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for taking the time to help! Looks like I've still got lots to improve... Everything you said was helpful, so thanks.
I am using only Photoshop, with tones made into patterns.

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CountDraggula In reply to sapphireluna [2012-09-25 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]

we all do, I'm not an art school student of anything, so these are just simple observations that I've made, so take my criticism with a pinch of salt, but I can help when I can

Its actually kind of refreshing to have people that are open to crits, people in DA are not overly fond of them it seems.

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Holly--Jolly [2012-09-20 05:30:17 +0000 UTC]

The backgrounds look awesome~! I like thin trees in the back. ouo

And dear god that Spheal! OMG nobody give him a camera or he'll be snapping photos of everything LOL! XD

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TechnoShadowBlood [2012-09-20 02:57:14 +0000 UTC]

Spheal thinks he's sly xD

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Peanut-ButterNJelly [2012-09-20 02:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Stalker Spheal OwO

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Balisk [2012-09-20 01:53:59 +0000 UTC]

It looks like team Azure is about to have a stalker.

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ChiptheScraggy [2012-09-20 01:53:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow Sapph, you are really perfecting this type of style for your comics keep up the good work

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sapphireluna In reply to ChiptheScraggy [2012-09-20 01:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad to hear that

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