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Sasanqua — A Single Tear
Published: 2005-12-29 08:08:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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                                                                        I
                                                                        -
                                                                        I!
                                                                     (ME!)
                                                                     I.......
                                                                   Feel....!!
                                                                 Damn Angry
                                                            For ALL that you've
                                                          Done to me. I...feel.....
                                                       Betrayed, wounded, lifeless,
                                                     And cut. Cut to my heart, with
                                                     a giant knife. The blood seeps.
                                                      I WILL NOT CRY!!!!! I will not
                                                       Cry over you. I will not cry
                                                         for you. I will cry for her,
                                                            But only a little, only
                                                                A single, lone
                                                                      Tear.



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Comments: 6

dark-fire [2006-01-17 02:31:16 +0000 UTC]

nice work man i really like the shape n how u captured so much emotion with not many words. really nice

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Sasanqua In reply to dark-fire [2006-01-18 06:13:40 +0000 UTC]

Why thanks my dear

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airmonkeys [2005-12-30 12:26:19 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful . its great how u got it too look like a tear. and the emotional content is concise and straight to thte point. me like.

i hope that didnt sound like a stupid coment. gar

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Sasanqua In reply to airmonkeys [2006-01-05 02:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks gorgeous!

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despisetolive [2005-12-29 14:49:18 +0000 UTC]

It's wonderful and a great little poem. And I really like how you shaped it too.

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Sasanqua In reply to despisetolive [2006-01-05 02:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon!

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