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Published: 2005-12-29 08:08:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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......................................................................................................................................................I
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I!
(ME!)
I.......
Feel....!!
Damn Angry
For ALL that you've
Done to me. I...feel.....
Betrayed, wounded, lifeless,
And cut. Cut to my heart, with
a giant knife. The blood seeps.
I WILL NOT CRY!!!!! I will not
Cry over you. I will not cry
for you. I will cry for her,
But only a little, only
A single, lone
Tear.
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Comments: 6
dark-fire [2006-01-17 02:31:16 +0000 UTC]
nice work man i really like the shape n how u captured so much emotion with not many words. really nice
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airmonkeys [2005-12-30 12:26:19 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful . its great how u got it too look like a tear. and the emotional content is concise and straight to thte point. me like.
i hope that didnt sound like a stupid coment. gar
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despisetolive [2005-12-29 14:49:18 +0000 UTC]
It's wonderful and a great little poem. And I really like how you shaped it too.
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