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SassySlinky — BlueCatRiolu PageDoll
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Published: 2017-11-02 02:06:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2993; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 2
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Drawn forI hope you like it! My shading is kinda garbage, if you'd like me to redo it, I gladly will
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Wow where to start! They look absolutely adorable! I love your style sm , anyways onto the critiques <3
Anatomy: To start , the front right leg looks a liiiiitle to long and the line on the hind leg where the leg meets the butt looks way to sharp even if its supposed to be fur. The tail is to long , normally tails only reach to the neck and maybe a bit farther , The torso & back look to thin. For the face i can see you went for the more chibi style of things but for the mouth is a little messed up but im sure you can fix that next time c; ALSO just a side note i LOVE those little paw pads you added QuQ
Lineart: The lineart for the most part is fairly clean if a little to pixely
Shading: The shading dOES NOT suck , it only need's a little bit of work! It looks like its coming from the top right and the bottom left at the same time. I cant help you to much in this aspect but i do suggest looking at real pictures for references and also placing sort of a simple sun thing from wherever the light is coming from and delete it after , personally if i do that the shading just automatically falls into place.
Coloring: The coloring is well done and simple! the mouth with that gradient does look a little off , but otherwise i love it!
Overall i really like this simple piece of art! they look really sweet in how you portrayed them!
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Hey, uh.. if your alive, mind if i ask you a question about this pagedoll?
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Awwww it's so pretty! And the lines and shading look so clean! >w<
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