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“She is taking her time isn’t she?” Most of the others ignored Ariana’s comments whilst she was chewing on her gum. The young lady had her arms crossed as she was tapping her foot repeatedly on the ground. She had been chewing on the same piece for about two days now, however, she had a special gum that she’d reveal once Sasha made her entrance. Ariana was wearing a tight, ocean-like blue tracksuit that was tightly secured to her body. The bottoms of her attire clutched tightly around her curves while her top was pressed against her breasts. As well as that, she had a long white strip that went down both the sides of her attire. She wiggled her leg for a moment as her white sneakers rubbed against the ground. Ariana then looked around at her competitors. Whilst she was looking at the other women, she let down her zipper, just so she could have more room to breath. The jumpsuit would show off her competitive streak which she knew Sasha would appreciate.

The young lady yawned for a bit before she went back to chewing her gum. “You know, that chewing gets really annoying after a while”. Ariana ignored Selena’s comments for a moment as she was more focused on blowing a bubble. “What’s it to you ?”. She turned and looked at the bratty pop star for a second. “Well, how about you stop chewing like a cow for just a second”. Ariana laughed for a moment as she shook her head. “You’re one to talk. Calling people cows with the size of that pudgy gut”. Selena gawked in shock for a moment. “Excuse me”. She turned away from Selena and back to the door. “You heard me”. Selena looked down at her small, tiny stomach for a second. “Bitch” she mumbled under her breath.

Selena was wearing a striped red and white shirt that covered her torso. It wasn’t tight really, in fact, it was the opposite compared to Ariana’s. Quite loose. The shirt really didn’t show a lot of skin as other attires. The opposite could be said about the rest of her attire. She was wearing the smallest white shorts probably ever made. They covered her curves but left her legs exposed in the cold weather, this was the reason why she was shaking so much. In an odd fashion choice, her socks resembled her top eerily. Striped with red and white all the way to the end. Though, she knew that the weird colours and stripes would probably please Sasha very well. Her black boots were also on show too.

While those two were arguing, Jessica looked over at them and simply shrugged. She didn’t bother looking at them. In her eyes, they were beneath her in every way.  Clearly showing her wealth, she was wearing a large fur coat that had been exported all the way from Shenzhen. The animal had been killed for her, specifically for this tour. It was the finest of white furs that had been available on the market. Wearing a luscious pink shirt and a large white skirt was also done for the same reason. Jessica felt that Sasha would connect with her better if she showed off her wealth. She as well had also worn some black shoes like Selena. However, she kept her legs warm through her white leggings. “Makin me of all people, wait, how rude. I make more money than she does and this is how she treats me? Disgraceful”.  Scarlett yawned, “Quit your moaning and whining”. Jessica turned around to her for a moment and gawked. “Who gave you permission to talk?”. She shrugged her shoulders, Scarlett wasn’t bothered. “None of that matters, besides, you’re taking my spotlight away”. Jessica laughed sarcastically for a few moments. “Spotlight? you idiot, we already went through it”. Scarlett didn’t bother looking at her. “The spotlight is always on me, even when there isn’t one. This face needs to be on camera twenty-four-seven”. Jessica gave her a look of confusion before turning around. “Attention whore” she mumbled under her breath.

Scarlett was wearing an elegant black dress that caught everyone’s attention. It was clear that she wanted to be the most highlighted thing about this tour. The dress seemed to cover her entire body but the top of her torso. Her breasts clung to the dress as her shoulders and neck were exposed to the cold weather. As well as that Scarlett was wearing diamond-encrusted shoes. The shine would attract people’s attention. The young woman hoped that the glamour and glitter would impress Sasha in order to help her win the prize….and to get the cameras on her.

“Ladies, why do we have to fight? Let’s just enjoy the tour”. Scarlett shrugged her shoulders. “Why? I don’t even like candy….it's a waste of time”. Jessica then violently turned around to her. “Then why did you even bother going on this tour, you moron?” Scarlett shrugged her shoulders. “For the spotlight”. Jessica shook her head in disgust. “What are you even doing here? Get back in the crowd peasant”. Katy looked over at Jessica. “I’m not a peasant, I earned my way into this factory”. Jessica put her hand in front of Katy’s face. “You’re not worth my time, peasant, begone you, filthy poor pleb”.

Katy, in fairness, did stand out from the others. She wasn’t wearing an elaborate attire like everyone else. She was just wearing a pair of brown jeans that really showed off her lack of money, compared to the others. Ever since her career had gone downhill due to her lack of support from fans due to the mistakes she made, she had lost a lot of money. This was why she was wearing “normal” people’s clothes. She wore some white shoes and a basic yellow shirt with a purple outline on it. “I don’t think it’s nice of you to…” Katy was interrupted by a loud explosion as a large red carpet rolled across the ground. Streamers and fireworks were shot into the air as the media began to take pictures.

The doors opened slowly as more light entered the dark factory. The abundance of lights and colours inside of the factory lit up. A silhouette stood there for a second, holding onto a cane of sorts. It was Sasha Wonka. She stepped out and looked at the cameras for a second before smiling, then she looked down at her guests. “Thank you, thank you…..welcome…...welcome all, I hope that this will simply be the greatest day of your entire life…..if not then my job hasn’t been completed…...and if there is anything that a Wonka does is complete a job that’s assigned to them…..anyways ladies, please bring me your golden tickets”. The women rushed off each other, all of them pushing away Katy and each other to get to the top of the door. Jessica was the first there. “My name’s Jessica”. Sasha looked at her and her coat for a moment. “It’s a pleasure Jessica and you look exquisite in that coat of yours”. Jessica smiled as Sasha took the ticket off of her. “I’ve got fifteen at home”. She nodded as Jessica walked away.

“I’m Selena Gomez”. Sasha looked at her attire for a second. “Welcome Selena, my darling, I must say your fashion sense is quite my taste”. Selena nodded as Sasha took her ticket. Ariana made sure to switch the different pieces of gum, revealing a gold gum in her mouth. “Ariana Grande’s the name”. Sasha turned to her as she took her ticket. “Ariana, a pleasure to meet and see you - and in good shape as well”. Ariana looked up at him. “Where’s all the gum?”. “In due time, darling”. Scarlett pushed past her and handed her ticket. “It’s Scarlett Johansson”.

“Scarlett…..” Sasha was about to say something before Scarlett looked away at the cameras. “Are all of these cameras looking at me”. Sasha held the ticket in her hand, puzzled for a moment. “Pleasure to see you come……..and go. You missed one right there”. She immediately turned and looked at the camera. Katy walked up and looked at Sasha. “Katy Perry”. Sasha smiled as she took up the ticket. “Katy, I read about you on the internet, how nice to see you still here”. Sasha took all of the tickets and held out the door while her guests were entering the factory.

Whilst she was looking into the crowd, someone caught her eye. Catherine was in the crowd, staring at her with her arms crossed. The two’s eyes met as Sasha’s smile turned to a look of anger. She stared for a few more seconds before winking at her and closing the door. “Now ladies, we have very little to see and a lot of time…….wait….scratch that for a second….reverse it. Anyways, welcome to the factory… However, before we enter, I need all of you to do something for me”. They all turned around to her. “Sign a legally binding contract”. Four of the women stared at her for a second. “I need my lawyers to look at the contract before I sign it”. Sasha shook her head at Jessica’s comments. “No time, I’m afraid”. Jessica shook her head. “Then I’m not signing it”. Sasha smiled as she twirled her cane around.

“That’s fine, then you can just leave the factory, but the question is which way? Through the doors or the turret”. She stared at the factory owner for a moment with a look of confusion. “Wait, what?”. She walked up to the contract. “What, nothing at all……..anyway, here is the contract, do sign it so we can progress”. The five women walked up towards the contract. “Why do we need to sign a contract anyway?”. Sasha looked over for a moment to Selena, as Ariana nodded her head whilst chewing her gum. “Well, my darling, it’s to prevent any of you from being injured and suing me”. They continued to stare at her. “So there are things in this factory that could injure us ?”. Sasha laughed for a second. “Little surprises at every step but nothing dangerous of course”. She tapped her feet twice as a door with a large bomb in the next room was closed by the oompas.

The five women looked at the contract. “You two first Selena and Ariana”. The two women ran up and grabbed pens as they began to read and sign it. “Fires, what fires”. Sasha shrugged her shoulders. “Nothing important”. Selena signed anyways while Ariana continued to read. “Floods, how can this place be flooded?”. She looked at her watch for a second. “Flooded with greed but all of you like decent people, so there should be nothing to worry about”. Ariana signed anyways. “Good, Jessica and Scarlett, you two next”.

Both women walked up and began to read. “Frost? You are joking right”. Sasha laughed. “Not at all, Frost is a very serious danger that can affect a lot of clumsy people”. “But it’s the middle of summer”. Sasha looked over at her. “You never know when it can strike”. Jessica signed it as she walked down. “What’s all of the little information on the end, it’s too hard to read”. Sasha yawned for a second. “If you have any problems, dial the information, thank you, bye”. Scarlett who was puzzled just signed the contract. “And you Katy”. Katy ran up and signed away, not even looking. “ Nicely handled Katy”.

“Delightful, everyone’s signed, then let’s head on”. Sasha walked to the end of the door and placed her key inside of the lock. All she had to do was twist the door four times to unlock the door. She twisted it five times instead. This would alert the oompas in the control room to prepare the chocolate room. “Apologies...butterfingers…...one of those would be nice now”. Sasha opened the door as the four women pushed her into the door. Katy walked in afterwards. However, there was no exit, only one entry. The six women were squashed together in a tiny room as they all began to shout and scream.“Someone’s pressing against me, a poor person’s touching me !!!”.

Jessica cried out as Katy was squashed against her. Ariana was frantically chewing her gum. “It’s all Selena’s fault, she’s too fat !!!”. Selena turned around and got a glimpse of Ariana. “Shut up slut !!!!”. Katy was crushed between Scarlett and Jessica as she cried for help. “God damn it, you’re taking all of my spotlight”. Sasha was crushed in the corner between Ariana and Selena. She stayed calm and used her cane to press the forty-eight button. “This is going to be a long tour”.

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After the doors were shut, the media had left the entrance to Sasha’s factory. Most going on a lunch break before they’d head back to the end of the tour to interview the guests after their experience in the factory. However, only two people still remained. Catherine sat there, still looking at the factory with a look of disgust. “I don't trust her, Simmons, I can’t look at the factory the same way you do”. He sat down beside her. “Well, it’s because you think she’s a psychopath of some sorts while I think she’s just a rich candy owner”. She stood up and looked down at him. “She’s more than what you guys think, Honestly”. He stood up and walked away. “Provide the evidence and then I’ll believe you, then we can discuss what to do to her, now come on, we have an investigation to do”. Catherine looked at him for a second as she scratched her head before she eventually caught up to him.

“Just drift your focus away from the candy maker and onto the person whose kidnapping all of these people”. She sighed for a moment. “Look, you figure out this problem and find all of these missing people, then it’s a guarantee that you’ll get another term in office”. Catherine placed her hands in her jacket pockets as she slightly nodded. “I guess so”. Simmons smiled at her and nodded. “Exactly, see now we are making progress”. Catherine nodded, though it seemed she drifted her attention away from Sasha, she was only saying words to please him. Her main focus would be finding out what exactly was going on in that factory. The two continued to walk as they looked around the streets. “Remember when we chased down that criminal down this street?” Catherine looked over to him. “Of course, I do, why wouldn’t I?”. Simmons pointed to the end of the street.

“Remember you tackled him to the ground?” She nodded her head as they walked towards it. “Yeah, what about it?”. He looked over to the edge of the street. “That was a pretty badass moment”. She just gave him a thumbs up. “You were just on the car and you jumped off and tackled him right into that corner”. Simmons pointed over to the corner as Catherine looked over. She was about to say something before she saw something. A small paper boat with the name Ben written on it. “Simmons, you idiotic memories may have just found us our next clue”. Catherine pulled out some gloves and walked over to the boat. “What are you looking at Smith?” Catherine continued to stare at the boat before turning around to Simmons. “Pass me a plastic bag and tweezers”. He looked at her for a few moments. “What am I a fucking parrot or something?”. He passed her the equipment as he walked up to her.

“Hold open the bag”. Simmons held the bag out for her without hesitation. Catherine picked up the boat with the tweezers and drop the boat into the bag. She violently grabbed the bag out of his hand and closed it shut. “So what’s your obsession with paper boats?”. Catherine shook her head for a second as she stared at the boat. “Remember, case thirty-two”. He stood there and began to think for a moment. “Yeah, that was Benjamin Franklot…..what about him?” She pointed to the name on the boat. “What’s it say?”. Simmons walked over and looked at it. “Benjamin…...ohh I see now”. Catherine nodded her head. “Exactly, The Franklots said that he left the house after he went to test out his paper boat in the lakes. Clearly, the kidnapper took him while he was doing so”. He nodded for a second, “Well, of course, he did”. She soured on him for a second. “Shut up Simmons”. She looked right back down at the bag.

“Get an agent down here to send it to the research lab, we don’t have a lot of time”. Simmons nodded. “Finally something we can agree on”. Catherine sighed as she looked at him for a second. She clutched her head for a moment, she had a small pain inside of her head. “Are you alright Smith?” Simmons walked over to her and touched her back. “It’s fine, nothing but a stupid headache”. He looked at her for a second as she regained her stance. “You haven’t had much sleep, have you, Smith?” She shrugged her shoulders. “Yeah, so what? I can do my job without any sleep at all?” He shook his head for a moment. “No, you can’t. Why don’t you go take a nap or go to a place where you can go to sleep?

Catherine shook her head for a moment before another chronic bit of pain hit her skull. “You definitely need to go to sleep, Why don’t you go to the library? Everyone over there goes to sleep with ease”. She turned to him for a second. “Simmons, that may just be the dumbest thing you have ever said in your life”. He frowned for a second. “Take this and bring it to the Franklots in an hour. We’ll have a discussion with them”. He nodded as he took the bag and walked away. Catherine began to walk to the library as she could only keep thinking about how close it was to the actual factory.

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“There’s no way out !!!!” Sasha yawned as she heard Scarlett’s cries. “If I don’t get out here, I’m going to scream !!!”. She looked around in the elevator for a while as her guests screamed for help. “Please don’t Jessica, I’d like to not be deaf at a young age”. All the guests moaned and groaned as they pressed against each other. “It’s all because of that fat ass, if she wasn’t so big, we’d all have room !!!”. Sasha turned around to Ariana, who somehow, was still managing to chew her gum and shout at the same time. “Wonka, why can’t you shut her mouth with the constant annoyance of chewing gum !!!” Sasha turned to Selena this time. “Now, now Questions are only answered via my mailbox and through interviews, besides I think we are here”. The five women looked at her in shock and stopped screaming.

“That’s impossible, it’s the same way that we entered”. Sasha shook her head at Katy’s comment as she pushed past them all to make her way to the door. “Is it really though?” She touched the door with her cane and the door opened. Everyone stepped outside as they looked around the room. “It’s different…..but that was just a room…...what is this some sort of fun house?”. Sasha tapped her cane off of the ground before turning to Ariana. “Having fun are we?” She giggled as the gum chewer looked at her, both puzzled and confused. “Yeah, fuck this I’m outta here”. She turned to Scarlett and waved her off. “Nonsense, there is no backwards in this tour, only forwards, we have to make it through the entire tour to reach the exit”.

Sasha continued to walk towards a small door. However, as many of the guests noticed, the further Sasha would walk, the smaller the room would get. “Sasha, you’re getting smaller” “Or the room’s getting bigger”. Sasha was crouching down as she looked over to her guests. “Our first stop is the chocolate room, all we have to do is get through this door”. The crowd gawked at Sasha as she smiled at them. “I’m not squeezing through that tiny door”. Ariana popped another bubble as she looked over to Selena. “Yeah, how’s fat ass going to squeeze through that door”. Selena stared at Ariana with a look of pure anger, she was sick and tired of hearing how Ariana disrespected her. “I’m not a fat ass, you fucking skinny bitch !!!”. Sasha stared awkwardly at the two of them for a few moments.

“Take it as a compliment Miss Gomez, fat ass is a compliment these days”. She gawked at her for a moment. “Look, Sasha, you are nuts if you think any of us can fit through that door”. She smiled for a moment as she looked to Jessica. “Well, then Miss Alba, I’m nuts. My darlings, you are about to enter the gates of heaven, the world of what only people can dream off, everything is editable and anything can become a reality in this room”. Selena rubbed her stomach. “I am getting kind of hungry”. Ariana yawned for a second before chewing her gum again. “Course, you are fatty”. Selena ignored her comments this time. “It’s good to enter here with an empty stomach……..I’ll make sure to fill it up…...anyways the combination”. Sasha filled out a small flute from her pocket and played it for a few seconds before the doors opened up.

As the doors opened, all of the guests stared in shock as they looked at what was in front of them. Everything Sasha had just said was right, There was chocolate everywhere. Large cylinders wrapped around the room as the chocolate could be visibly seen rushing around faster than any of the guests could blink. Every sort of candy that was made was inside of the room. Luscious cream bonbons, ropes of liquorice, armies of gummy bears, candy fruits inside of fruits were only a few of the amazing items that were available inside of the room. The golden walls oozed chocolate and the waterfalls threw the chocolate into the gargantuan river. The river was probably as big as a public swimming pool

The guests could only feast their eyes on the mountains of fudge, caramel and sugar that were around the room. Even inside of the room were large chocolate sculptures of actual people. It was easy to say that a majority of them were highly impressed by what they actually saw. The top of the roof lightly rained small jelly beans as they slowly fell to the ground. Sasha looked at the room and took a long breath. “Take a breath…….make a wish…….count to three…..” The guests were still in utter shock at what they actually saw. “So, when can we have some”. Sasha turned around. “Oh, whenever you want, I wasn’t stopping any of you”. Each one of the women ran across the room and began to attack the sweets, however, Selena was still in shock at what she saw.

“My darling, Selena, go enjoy yourself……...fill up that stomach of yours……...until you have to be rolled out of her”. Selena looked at her for a second, confused at what she had heard. “What did you say?” Sasha gulped for a moment as she looked down at Selena’s shirt. “I meant, eat as much food as you please”.  She shook her head as she looked at the room. “Not at all, I have a figure to maintain, besides If I eat too much chocolate, I get a chocolate craving and I’ll literally keep eating everything in the room. It’s a horrible thing and I promised myself I wouldn’t let it happen. Took me months to lose the weight”. Sasha smiled slightly for a second.

“I see what a shameful thing that must be, especially if it were to happen in this room”. Sasha looked over and picked up a small ball of chocolate. “Take a bite then darling and I’ll leave you be”. Selena shook her head again. Sasha walked over and wrapped her arm around her shoulder. “Miss Gomez, you are just suffering from bad memories, this is just a small piece of chocolate that won’t trigger anything at all”.  Selena looked away for a moment as she tried to think about what to do. “If you eat it, I’ll make sure Miss Grande walks away a fatty from this room”. Selena turned around and began to devour the chocolate, to Sasha’s delight. Within seconds, she had devoured the ball. However, she was feeling rather sick, starving of course. She needed to fill herself with food. “Oh….excuse me”.

Selena ran over to the chocolate bonbons and began to shovel them into her mouth. One by one they were eaten as the hot, gooey chocolate smudged across her face. Sasha smiled as she sat down and watched as Selena continued to pork out on the candies in front of her. “Sasha one…...Guests zero”. She was shoving everything down her neck at this point, sometimes not even taking a bite into the pieces. Clearly, the tainted chocolate had triggered her reaction. Selena wasn’t in control, her body was. “Mhmm…...chocolate…….more”. With each bonbon, she swallowed she could feel the air in the gaps in her attire leave as her body gaining weight by the second.

Meanwhile, while Selena was gorging on the bonbon, Jessica was sucking on the lollipops as she noticed Ariana trying to rip down a gummy bear from the tree. She slowly walked over to her and helped her rip the bear from the tree. “Stay away from the bear, Alba, it’s all mine”. Jessica stepped away for a few seconds. “It’s all yours Ariana, I don’t want it”. Ariana confused stared at her before taking a bite of the bear. “Then why did you help me then?”. Jessica put on a fake smile as she looked down at Ariana before sitting beside her. “Well, I came to her to talk business….I mean a rich woman like myself knows all about businesses…..” Ariana moved her hand in a way that told Jessica to speed it up.

“Anyways, the main point is that you and me, we are the two best out of the guests here”. Ariana looked around and nodded her head slightly. “I suppose you could say that”. Jessica nodded her head quickly. “Selena is just a fatass…….Scarlett is an attention whore and Katy’s a peasant….but you…...you're a champion…….and I’m rich……...therefore it makes us the elite…..” Ariana nodded her head. “Damn right I am”. Jessica nodded her head. “Good, then why not work together in getting rid of the other three women till it’s down to us two, then the best woman can win”. Ariana chewed her gum before blowing a bubble. “Sure”. The two shook hands as they both smiled. “Let’s be friends” “Best friends”.

However, their meeting was interrupted by the sounds of Selena ripping the ground up and shoving it down her neck. The green icing that once resembled the grass was drooling down her face and sloping back onto her attire as she forced more soft chocolate into her mouth. She moaned for a moment as she rubbed her stomach for a second. Selena had actually developed a pot belly that was extremely bloated. However, she continued to leave a trail of destruction as she stood up and looked over at the chocolate sculptures. She licked the chocolate off of her lips as she stumbled over towards it. Selena grabbed the hand and ripped it off before rubbing it across her face. The warm and creamy chocolate taste was filling her mind as she moaned pleasurably at the chocolate before shoving the hand in her mouth.

Selena chewed with all of her might before swallowing the hand whole. However, she still wasn’t full and with that jumped onto the chocolate body, causing it to collapse. Her new extra weight had been causing her slight problems now. She was shoving the entire chocolate body in her mouth, almost like her mouth was a vacuum for chocolate and really any sort of sweet. Soon enough, she patted her stomach before burping loudly. Her shorts were pressed tightly against her giant stomach as she took another deep breath. Her thighs and arms had become a lot fatter and rounder as a double chin was starting to appear. However, she had no time to waste, she had more chocolate to eat.

Whilst the destruction was going on, Scarlett was looking around, trying to make herself the centre of attention. However, nobody was paying her attention, not even Katy was sitting in a corner eating a small rope of liquorice. “Scarlett’s over here, just in case anyone was wondering”. She stomped her feet and crossed her arms for a second. “I see you, Scarlett”. She turned around and saw Jessica standing there. “What do you want, my spotlight?” Jessica shook her head. “Not at all, after our previous talk, I realized that you deserve the spotlight”. She looked at the rich woman for a second before nodding her head. “Of course I do, at least someone is smart enough to actually notice that”. Jessica nodded as she stood beside Scarlett. “Of course, besides these women are nothing compared to us. Selena is fat, Katy is poor and Ariana chews like a cow, she’s useless”.

Scarlett nodded with each word that escaped Jessica’s mouth. “We are the best here, I’m rich and you have the spotlight, it makes us great”. Scarlett laughed for a moment, “No doubt it does”. Jessica smiled at what she was hearing. “Indeed, that’s why we should get rid of these three losers, so you can have all the spotlight and I can have the money. It benefits us both”. Scarlett stood there for a few seconds and began to think before looking back at Jessica. “You got a deal, besides money is nothing compared to the spotlight”. Jessica winked at her as she walked away.

As she was walking away the sounds of chocolate flying around could be heard as Selena continued to devour the chocolate sculptures that were around the room. Jessica walked past and looked down at Selena who was rolling around in the melted chocolate whilst eating the grass off of the ground. “Your an absolute disgusting waste of a human”. Selena looked up and waved her off before she shoved a large chunk of chocolate in her mouth. She had completely changed from how she looked at the start of the tour. A once skinny girl was now a giant fattened blob. Her shirt was being stretched at every seam against her skin. Her shorts looked ready to pop at about any second.

Jessica’s face was just filled with utter and pure disgust at what she actually saw. She couldn’t believe how fat Selena had managed to become in the short time. This caused her to stay away from sweets for the time being. The young lady couldn’t imagine being as revolutionary as her. Selena burped as she reached for more chocolate, however, she couldn’t find anymore. She was still hungry though, it was then that she had to eat other stuff. She stormed over towards the gummy bears and began to rip them apart. The young lady hadn’t realized that Ariana was staring at her in shock. For once she wasn’t chewing her gum, she was just staring at her with her hand covering her mouth. Ariana had made fat jokes towards Selena throughout the tour but she really didn’t think that she’d end up like that.

“Wow…...the piggy turned into an elephant quickly”. Selena turned around and stared at Ariana for a few moments. She was disgusted at the fattened mess that lay before her. But she paid little attention to her as she went back to eating the food as her waistline continued to expand outwards. “I really do hope that there’s a gym in here because fatty, boy do you need it. In fact, I actually feel fatter being in your presence that’s how fat you are”. Selena gulped down the last bite of the gummy bear before turning to Ariana. She noticed one thing……..Ariana was holding a gummy bear. “Mine……...feed……..me”. She looked at her in shock as Selena began to walk towards her. “Ugh, stay away from me you hippo”. Selena grabbed onto the bear and began to try to rip it away from Ariana who still had her hands on it. “Let go you fatty, it’s mine !!!”. With one large pull, Selena grabbed the bear as Ariana tumbled backwards into a giant peach, splitting it in half as the juice covered her backside. “You fat cunt. You ruined my attire !!!” Selena shrugged as she continued to eat the bear as she waddled around to her next area.

As Selena was walking by, she heard the sounds of choking. Scarlett was trying to keep herself from vomiting after taking a look at Selena. “Oh god…...what on earth actually happen to you? You look hideous”. Selena waved her away as she finished off her gummy bear as the buttons on her attire began to pull away slowly. The top of her shirt began to ride upwards as more of her gigantic stomach was being exposed. “Need…….more…..food…...give…..it….” She burped before looking around and grabbing a line of liquorice as she began to suck it down with general ease. The fatty was using so much of her energy to eat more candy that she was actually sweating heavily. The only exercise she was getting was from eating more candy.

Selena fell to her knees as she pulled the rope towards her as she continued to gulp it down. With each gulp, the fatter her face became as Scarlett was utterly repulsed by what she actually saw. “This is disgraceful, this fatty is taking up all of my spotlight. How dare that bitch?” Scarlett walked over to her and pointed at her. “You hideous creature, stop eating at once, you’re taking away the spotlight from others……..like me…….but most importantly me”. Selena shook her head as the first button popped off of her shorts, hitting Scarlett in the eye as she finished the liquorice. “You fat asshole !!”.

The young lady ran off to grab more food before she stopped in her tracks as she saw something that annoyed her. Katy was over in the corner having a small snack. In Selena’s eyes, Katy was eating all of her food. Selena waddled over towards Katy was turned around. She was sucking on a lollipop before dropping it as it hit the ground with a thud. “Oh my….Selena are you alright?” She moaned for a second before looking down at Selena. “Stop…...eating…...my food”. Katy stared at her for a moment. She was confused at what she saw. “But this isn’t your food, it's for everyone to have and enjoy”. Selena was tired of her comments as she pushed her aside and began to eat all of the lollipops.

Katy grabbed onto her and was able to pull her back, “Don’t you think you should be sharing the food with everyone else?”. Selena grunted before pushing Katy away, causing her to fall over and hit her head off of the ground. “This…..is…..all…..mine”. Selena took a large bite from the ground as the chocolate was smeared all of her attire. Once she raised her head, she was something amazing…...something that took her breath. It would be her next victim. Surely, this would be the thing to fill her cravings. “Fudge…..mountain”. She managed to lift herself to her feet before she leapt into the side of the mountain and began her feast.

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“My head…..it’s absolutely killing me……”. Catherine stumbled into the library as she looked over to the librarian. “How can I help you today President Smith”. She looked at her for a moment before shaking her head. “Is there a room I can stay in for a few moments”. She looked at the rooms available in her computer for a few seconds before nodding her head. “Of course, there’s one available near the history section”. Catherine took a deep breath. “Thanks”. She nodded as she watched Catherine walk away. The library was empty as practically everyone went back to their houses or were celebrating the reopening of the Wonka factory. The young lady began to walk up the steps as she looked for the sign for the history section sign. “I’ve been here loads of times, why can’t I find it?” Catherine spent a lot of time in the library on her off hours.

All she did in here was look at the documents surrounding her family's death. When she was a little kid, she could remember the event clearly but the fear of it caused her to forget, however with each nightmare, it started to become more vivid for her. Catherine claimed that eventually, she would find out the killer through her nightmares. She rubbed her eyes for a second before finding the sign. The young woman began to walk to the section. Section S23F. That was the section that she constantly visited. The answers to her killer were there, all she had to do was figure out how to place the right pieces in the puzzle. Catherine stared at the documents for a few moments before pulling them down from the shelf. She stared at them for a few seconds before walking over to the door.

She threw the files on the table before sitting down. Catherine always skipped the first page. It was too gruesome to look at. She couldn’t look at the decaying corpses of her family. Catherine flicked to the second page and looked closely at the pictures. The first picture was the destroyed remains of her house. She could point to every room that was in the house, remember each detail of everyone’s room. The calm neighbourhood that was shaken by a terrible accident was what the title said. Everyone believed it was an accident but she knew for a fact that it wasn’t, then again nobody at the time would listen to a little girl. Catherine flicked to the next page and looked at the picture in the newspaper. However, something was wrong, she could barely see it, in fact, it was quite blurry.

Her vision was getting more blurred by the second as she tried to lift her hand. She had little to no strength at all in her hands. Catherine knew that she was falling asleep and tried to fight it, however, she couldn’t. Her eyes flickered for a few moments as she tried to keep her focus on the picture. Nonetheless, it didn’t work as she closed her eyes. Once she reopened them, she wasn’t in the library at all but was rather in the cold, wet grass. Catherine took a deep breath before looking up. She was back in her neighbourhood that she grew up in. The frightened lady looked around at the back of her house for a few moments. She looked up to the top of her room and saw a figure. Someone crying out for help. “Mother……..mom……” Catherine tried to run towards the door but as she wiped the water from her eyes, she was about to run into a fire.

Catherine stopped herself in her tracks and frantically crawled back towards the back as she breathed heavily. “Nooo…..stop it…...please…...jump…..I’ll catch you !!!”. She ran over to the hose and tried to turn it on as she repeatedly twisted the knob with all of her force. “Come on you son of a bitch, work, work damnit!!!”. The screams started to occur as they exploded throughout the neighbourhood. The cried for help caused her to drop the hose and cover her ears. All she could do was cover her ears as she dropped to her knees. “Stop it……...stop crying!!”. She fell to the ground as the tears flew down her face as she looked at her house as it slowly began to melt towards the ground.

All she did was reach out to the house as the noise could only be increased with each second as Catherine covered her ears harder. “Shut up….shut up…...shut the fuck up!!!!!”. However, her attention was drifted over to a small hole in the wall opening up. A small girl, covered in blood and bruises was crawling out of the room. Catherine realized who it was. The child was her. The young girl crawled to the end of the fence as she cried out for her mother. “Catherine, stop, it’s me, stop, come here!!!”. She ran over to the little girl and crouched in front of her. Catherine tried to talk to the girl but she was unresponsive to her. The girl didn’t even recognise her. Her eyes were focused on something else.

Something looming in the background. A dark figure in the background stood there, admiring its work. Catherine unknowingly was still trying to talk to the girl until she heard the girl scream and then vanish into thin dust. She stared at the dust in her hand before it blew away. Catherine turned around and saw the figure staring at her directly. “You bastard...you killed them…...you killed them all!!!!”. Catherine tried to pick herself up but ended up falling on the ground. She stared at the figure before it smiled and lunged at her causing her to scream. “Miss Smith….Miss Smith”. Catherine woke up and pushed the librarian away from her. She was breathing heavily as she looked around her. She was back in the library. The terrified lady felt a vibration in her pocket before picking up the phone. “Yeah…….they agreed…….I’ll be there shortly……”. Catherine stood up and looked at the files before rushing out of the library.

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A loud burp could be heard as Selena crawled from the remains of fudge mountain. At this point, she was an utter mess. The fatass was covered from head to toe in chocolate stains and other sweets. She crawled across the grass as she forced chunks of chocolate into her mouth, almost like a pig would to its food. Selena lifted herself up by dragging bits of caramel mountain into her mouth as she gulped down the mountain. With the rate that she was going, the chocolate room would be extinct in a few moments. “More…...not….full…...yet”. She moaned for a few seconds as she continued to gobble up pieces of caramel that leaning out from the mountain. The young lady looked at a massive piece that stuck out of the mountain. “Hmm….large”. Selena ripped the piece out before taking a massive bite out of it. She moaned again for a second before the scent of chocolate hit her nose. Without hesitation, Selena turned around and saw the chocolate river. “Mhmmm….chocolate”. She waddled her way over towards the chocolate river and stared at it as she licked her lips. What she didn’t notice was the white line that ran near the edge of the river.

“What a disgusting, filthy river”. Jessica clearly agreed with Scarlett’s comments as she took a glance at the river. “It’s clearly shit…..you’ve wasted your watershed Sasha….it’s polluted”. Sasha walked over and looked at the river. “It’s chocolate”. Jessica looked at her for a second. “That’s chocolate?!!” “That’s chocolate?!!” Ariana pushed past Katy and looked into the river. “A chocolate river?” Sasha nodded as she looked down at the chocolate itself. “Sixty gallons an hour comes down from the waterfalls and into the river. It mixes the chocolate around. Small bit of advice, if you’re going to make chocolate, use a waterfall, works perfectly everytime”. Whilst Sasha was explaining the river, Katy noticed something odd. “Look over there, their little men”. The group looked over to the oompa loompas as they were clearly working hard.

“Now, now, Miss Perry, there’s both men and women here….no need to trigger any sexism talks here…..as well as that little is a bit derogatory to them”. “I haven’t seen someone that orange since my last visit at Long Island”. Sasha turned around and smiled. “Exactly, copies and pretenders of my oompa loompas”. Scarlett looked at him for a moment and shook her head. “Oompa loompas ?” Sasha nodded her head. “Yes from Loompaland”. “I’ve never heard that place, I did Geography for years”. Sasha smiled as she twirled her cane. “Oh, then you must know about the terrible creatures that live there, nasty place it is”.

Jessica looked over at them and smiled for a few seconds. “I want an oompa loompa now, how much does one cost?”. Sasha turned around for a few moments. “All questions must be submitted in writing, Miss Alba”. She stared at him for a few moments before stomping her feet. Sasha also caught in the blink of her eye Selena drinking heavily from the chocolate river. Selena was slurping down the chocolate with all of her remaining force. She wasn’t even taking time to breathe, Chocolate was her main concern at this point. “Look at Selena”. The rest of the group turned around and looked at Selena as she was drinking the chocolate like a vacuum. “Don’t worry, she can’t eat all of that”. Ariana laughed at Jessica’s comments. “You think so, really, just take a look at her”.

Sasha watched as she waited for the end of the grass to break, but it never did. She looked closer to suddenly realize that Selena was behind the line. “Shit” she mumbled to herself. She realized that she had to act afraid and caring of the woman at this point. “Eh..Selena, don’t do that... My chocolate mustn't be contaminated with human hands. Selena wasn’t listening, she was just continuing to shovel chocolate down her mouth. Sasha hurried over to where Selena was standing as the rest of the group followed her. “You’re contaminating my entire river, stop it this instant”. Sasha pulled Selena back for a moment as she stared at the candy woman and the rest of the group. “More...chocolate”. “Congrats Wonka, you’ve got yourself a whale”. Sasha shook her head. “Nonsense, I’ve fifteen in my water room”. Selena stood up and burped for a moment before she looked at her arms. They were starting to turn a dark brown colour. All of the guests stood and watched as the hue continued to cover every white cell on her skin. “Why’s she turning brown?”. The guests stayed back as Sasha looked on, pretending to be scared. “You know the tale you are what you eat?”. Sasha nodded her head at Scarlett’s comments.

Selena took another glance as her entire arms had turned brown. She still wasn’t bothered by this as she continued to lick the chocolate around her lips. Within a few seconds, her chest and face had turned the same colour as the clueless fatty continued to eat more food, grabbing onto candy canes and much more, shoving them in her mouth as her body changed colour. The hue began to fall down her giant stomach, covering it within a few short seconds. Selena got back on her knees and began to drink more of the chocolate. The group watched as her fatty thighs turned a dark shade of brown as she drank more and more of the liquid. Soon enough, her entire body was brown. She burped again before drinking more of the chocolate. Sasha saw her opportunity and ran to the river’s edge, stopping before “accidentally” kneeing Selena in the ass. This caused her to go over the line and with that, the line broke sending her crashing into the river. “Free Willy’s gone overboard”. Sasha didn’t even bother to listen to Scarlett’s comments. “My chocolate…..my chocolate”. Katy looked over to Sasha for a second.

“Help her Sasha. Please do something”. Selena popped her head up from the river as she tried to swim back towards the grass. “Help, police, murder”. Those were the words that the oompas needed to hear as they pressed the switch to start the pipe up. Every time Selena would move her hands, something weird would happen, they’d end up fatter, with each passing second. Nobody noticed this but Sasha herself. Katy looked over and grabbed a lollipop and held it out to Selena. “Here, take this”. Selena looked up and ate the lollipop as her fingers were now like giant balloons, only this time they were filled with chocolate.She could feel her hands and feet getting fatter by the second as her shoes exploded off and drifted up to the top of the river.

“What’s happening to her?” Jessica turned to Scarlett for a moment. “She’s probably drowning”. Ariana nodded in agreeance. “She can’t even swim”. Katy turned to Sasha and looked at her. “Dive in and save her”. She shook her head. “It’s too late the pipe’s got her”. The guests stared at the pipe as it entered the chocolate rivers. Selena could feel a slight pressure in her arms for a moment. She couldn’t move her feet due to how fat and full of chocolate they were, in fact, she looked at her hands and saw that they had expanded into a fattened mess. Her fattened arms continued to fill up with chocolate as she drew closer and closer towards the pipe. She moaned as the chocolate continued to fill up space, causing her arms to slowly round out. The poor fatty continued to suck down more chocolate as she tried to swim to the grass. Her arms started to develop fat rolls as the layers of fat started to pile up on each other, almost resembling a stack of pancakes at this point. “Need….more….chocolate” She moaned as her arms started to droop further down in the river as the fat in her arms continued to fill up. Selena whimpered for a moment as she felt a sharp pain in her thighs as they started to press against each other.

The young lady could feel her fattened thighs begin to spread outwards as she found it harder to move them in the river. The porker’s thighs started to develop heavy parts of cellulite as she continued to drink more chocolate. Soon enough, her thighs started to pile on top of each other. Each layer of fat had gallons of chocolate inside of them as her thighs would soon just resemble large layers of fat that had been stacked on each other. Selena had far exceeded the term “thunder thighs” at this point. Her eyes grew wide as she started to move away from the group. A small tidal wave came from behind her for a second as the group watched it. “Fatty just farted in the river”. Sasha just put her hands on her face, pretending to be annoyed but she was trying to cover her smile.

Selena could feel a large pressure in her buttocks as she tried to reach around and feel that area. However, with the size of her arms and hands, it was impossible. All she could really do was moan and whimper as her shorts were being compressed by her growing butt. Each cheek was getting fatter and rounder by the second as it caused the shorts to rip from every angle. The added pressure caused her to grip her teeth until the shorts ripped apart. Soon they’d follow her shoes and socks up the pipe. However, the pressure wasn’t over for Selena as she was still wearing a pair of panties that were being stretched to their limit by her expanding ass. Suddenly, they ripped off, causing Selena’s ass to rise up for a second as it was big enough to be almost considered a lifeboat at this point.

“The suction’s got her now”. Jessica turned to Sasha for a moment. “What suction?”. Sasha pointed over to the pipe. “Watch the pipe, she’s going to down here for a while”. Ariana laughed for a slight moment. “She can’t even swim”. Sasha filed her nails for a moment, not even looking at Selena. “Well, there isn’t a better time to learn then now”. Selena moaned as her ass continued to get fatter by the second. The pain was immense but all she could think about was gulping down more chocolate. Her butt continued to grow and grow until she felt the chocolate move to another part of her body. It moved past her stomach and into her breasts area. Sasha knew what was next and covered her ears. Selena let out a cry of pain and started asking for help as the others looked on in fear. “Is she getting bigger?”. Sasha turned to Ariana and nodded her head. “How does someone get that fat and still continue to get even bigger?” Nobody had an answer for Jessica. However, her train of thought was broken as Selena screamed again.

Her breasts were gigantic enough already but they were causing her shirt to cover her face, causing her to choke on the chocolate. The pressure of the chocolate in her breasts caused her to pull off her shirt as it floated down and up the pipe. However, her breasts were still growing, covering her vision at this point. Soon enough all she could see was two brown balls and a chocolate bra that was causing her a lot of pain. Selena begged for help as the tears flew down her face. She was in clear pain, that was until her bra exploded off into the river and went up the pipe. “She’s getting fatter by the second”. Jessica looked over to Sasha. “Shouldn’t we get out of before she blows”. Sasha shrugged her shoulders as Selena’s breasts now resembled two giant beach balls at this point.

Selena was trying to gasp for air but was finding it quite hard as her breasts pressed against her fat face. She could feel the vibrations get closer and her breasts continued to fill up with chocolate. Selena could feel the liquid swirl and slosh all around her body. Suddenly, Selena felt a weird feeling in her stomach. “I….feel…….really…...full”. With that, she disappeared and shot up the pipe. However, she wouldn’t get too far as she was stuck in the pipe. “Help...me….Sasha”. The group looked up at the giant pipe as the chocolate was stuck under Selena’s fattened body. “She’s blocked up the entire pipe”. Ariana peaked her head over Scarlett’s shoulders. “Someone call a plumber”. Jessica turned and looked at Sasha. “Well, what now?” Sasha for the first time looked at Selena after cleaning her nails. “Oh, that’s a shame. The terrific pressure will get her out of there in no time”.

The young fatty moaned as she could feel the chocolate in her body begin to swirl around. Within a few seconds, her stomach began to push outwards. Selena wiggled her fingers but it was no use. Her ass and breasts were pressed tightly against the pipe and her arms and thighs were too fat for her to move. All she could do was withstand the torture. “I’m….too…..full”. She moaned as her large gut continued to push outwards, going from the shape of a large pregnant stomach to one that was just filled with pure fattened chocolate. She moaned and whimpered from all of the pressure all around her body. The young lady could feel her stomach begin to slouch downwards as it pressed against the glass of the pipe. The chocolate underneath her began to rumble and bubble up under her naked body, in fact, some of it was managing to fill her up. “Help…..me…..someone…...this…...hurts…...too...much…….too…..much…….chocolate”.

She moaned against as her stomach started to round out as within seconds it resembled a semi-circle. Her skin was being stretched to its absolute limits. Scarlett stomped her feet. She was pissed that the attention wasn’t on her but rather on Selena. “Who cares about her, why not look at a gorgeous person like me?” Ariana who started chewing her gum turned around to Scarlett. “Nobody cares about you, attention whore. I want to see fat ass explode”. Jessica looked around and nodded in agreeance. However, Sasha kept her eyes on Selena. Her stomach had started to slide down the pipe, taking any space it possibly could as it could. Selena cried out for help again as the chocolate continued to inflate her. Her stomach rested tightly on her mountainous thighs before it began to cover her lower region. “I wonder how long it’ll take to push her up”. Sasha continued to stare at the tube, smiling. “The suspense is terrible, I do hope it’ll last”. Katy shook her head. “This is terrible”. Sasha ignored her as she kept her eyes on Selena. Selena’s body actually started to round out as her stomach and backfat had gotten so large that they started to merge as one all until they made a giant sphere. Selena was a ball of chocolate with a few body limits. Selena moaned as she wiggled what she could around.

She let out a scream as she felt the chocolate in her body begin to pull her arms and legs into her body. Selena tried to look around but thanks to her blimp breasts all she could a brown colour. Selena didn’t want any more chocolate in her but she was sure going to get it. She cried for help as she felt her arms sucked deep into her body. She wiggled her hands for a bit before the same process happened to her feet and hands. Suddenly, the bolts began to explode from the pipe as chocolate squeezed out from the tiny cracks in the holes. Selena could feel her body begin to move up closer. She wasn’t sure whether or not the chocolate was pushing her up or she was getting bigger.

Selena cried for help as the chocolate pushed her body up the pipe as it began to take more space in the pipe. She was growing so large that she was actually pushing the chocolate back into the river. Sasha was amazed at first but waited for the eventual shot. Her body was being squashed by all of the sides of the tube as her cylindrical body continued to inflate with chocolate. “She’s huge !!!”. Ariana laughed before blowing a bubble. “She’ll never get out of there”. Jessica turned to her. “Ever see the force that pushes a bullet out of a gun, that’s what’s going to happen to her”. “Or she’ll pop”. Selena felt extremely full, almost to the point where she felt like she was about to throw up. She could feel the chocolate run up her neck and fill up her cheeks. The young lady tried to swallow it but it continued to expand her cheeks. Her face fattened up even more and her double chin expanded with more chocolate, causing her to moan in pain.

Soon enough, her head began to sink into her body as she started to muffle and moan. Sasha could only smile as she watched onwards. The rest of the group was terrified of the rivets and nuts that were exploding off as the chocolate shot all around the chocolate room. Selena’s head eventually sank into her body as her body continued to fill up with chocolate. Another few seconds passed as her body continued to grow until she eventually stopped. Her body was filled with chocolate and pressure and she was in considerable pain. She was a nineteen-foot chocolate ball. The poor fatty moaned as she felt the chocolate swash against the bottom of her spherical body.

Sasha pulled out a flute and waited for a few moments before an oompa loompa walked over to her. “What the hell is that?” Sasha turned to Ariana for a moment. “It’s a flute, available in every candymaker’s log book. Anyways, can you take Miss Gomez to the squeezing room after she leaves the pipe. You’ll know what room to find her in”.

“Oompa Loompa, do-ba-dee-doo, I’ve got a perfect puzzle for you. Oompa Loompa, do-ba-dee-dee, If you are wise you’ll listen to me”. Selena moaned as the pressure was building up under her as she started to wiggle her hands. She just wanted this to be done and over with.

“What do you get when you guzzle down sweets? Eating as much as an elephant eats. What are you at getting terribly fat? What do you think will come of that? I don’t like the look of it”. She could feel a slight pain in her rear as a small bit of chocolate was starting to escape as it started slowly pushing her up.

“Oompa Loompa do-ba-dee-da, Given good manners you will go far. You will live in happiness too, Like the oompa loompa do-ba-dee-doo.Do-ba-dee-doo”. Selena let out one final moan before her body shot up the pipe and around the room before leaving the room along with the other gallons of chocolate.

“She’s gone, she’ll be marshmallows within seconds”. Sasha shook her head at Ariana. “Impossible, that pipe leads to the fudge room”. “That’s horrible”. Sasha shook her head at Katy. “I warned her not to”. Sasha turned to one of the oompas. “Make sure to look for a round chocolate covered ball in the fudge room, she’s liable to be poured into the boiler if not”. She shook her head for a moment. “That’s horrible, she could be burned alive”. The rest of the group didn’t bother with her. “Who cares”. The three women followed Sasha as Katy stood there in shock before rejoining the rest of the group.

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Comments: 72

SBBeauregarde In reply to ??? [2017-11-05 12:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you glad u liked it

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SithEmperor [2017-10-15 04:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Sasha and Katy are the only women in this story that aren't giving me brain cancer.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to SithEmperor [2017-10-15 09:16:50 +0000 UTC]

Then the characters are working perfectly. What did you think of the story in this chapter ?

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SithEmperor In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-15 09:31:20 +0000 UTC]

It was good.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to SithEmperor [2017-10-15 10:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Good, thoughts on the inflation?

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SithEmperor In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-15 18:48:15 +0000 UTC]

It was good.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to SithEmperor [2017-10-15 18:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Great, any suggestions on how i can make the story any better?

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SithEmperor In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-16 00:38:04 +0000 UTC]

It's your story. As long as grammar is good, I see nothing wrong.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to SithEmperor [2017-10-16 00:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Great

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blueskyys [2017-10-07 02:43:55 +0000 UTC]

really great chapter, details were extremely well done, jessica seems to be making a slight alliance with the others to pit them against each other (how could that possibly go wrong ) and pretty interested to see how Catherine will tie into this or if she'll end up in sasha's production line lol

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SBBeauregarde In reply to blueskyys [2017-10-07 08:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Yeah clearly Jessica's using her brains. I wonder as well haha. Great, she's very important to the story. What did you think of the characters in this chapter ?

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blueskyys In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-07 16:34:32 +0000 UTC]

really good selena played the role well, unfortunately for her she got more rolls

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SBBeauregarde In reply to blueskyys [2017-10-07 16:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Great. Oh, that's a great joke, a binge that went too far, what did you think of the plot in this chapter?

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bakuganbrawl [2017-10-02 07:57:40 +0000 UTC]

Man, this has got me keen for the next part, keep up the good work bro

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SBBeauregarde In reply to bakuganbrawl [2017-10-02 09:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic. What do you think of the characters ?

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bakuganbrawl In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 12:25:45 +0000 UTC]

All the characters work well and im interested to see what happens with the deals that were made between ariana, scarlett and jessica plus sasha being a complete nutcase got a good laugh out of me

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SBBeauregarde In reply to bakuganbrawl [2017-10-02 14:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Great, glad you like all of the shenagagins between them all. Thoughts on the inflation ?

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bakuganbrawl In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-03 08:47:50 +0000 UTC]

For a lack of a better word, it was fuckin brilliant, the level of detail about selena’s inflation was top notch stuff

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SBBeauregarde In reply to bakuganbrawl [2017-10-03 08:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic. Any suggestions on things you'd like to see or that I should fix

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bakuganbrawl In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-03 09:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Nope as of right now everything is golden

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SBBeauregarde In reply to bakuganbrawl [2017-10-03 10:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Great

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HypnoTFguy [2017-10-02 04:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful story

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SBBeauregarde In reply to HypnoTFguy [2017-10-02 07:45:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Thoughts on the characters ?

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HypnoTFguy In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 16:44:26 +0000 UTC]

I think they are well crafted

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SBBeauregarde In reply to HypnoTFguy [2017-10-02 16:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Cool, what do you think of the overall plot so far?

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buddy82498 [2017-10-02 01:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome stuff here

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SBBeauregarde In reply to buddy82498 [2017-10-02 07:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks thoughts on the characters?

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buddy82498 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 13:21:48 +0000 UTC]

I like that a lot of them are rather bratty like in the movies and book

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SBBeauregarde In reply to buddy82498 [2017-10-02 14:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Great and how about the inflation ?

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buddy82498 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 15:06:55 +0000 UTC]

It was pretty good, it was a little tough to visualize since she was in the pipe but it kept saying how she was a ball and I got a bit confused but it was still pretty nice

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SBBeauregarde In reply to buddy82498 [2017-10-02 16:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I see well she was fat and some body parts caused her to be stuck, however as she expanded and became more round, it caused her entire body to be pushed against the pipe, rather than just her body parts. Any suggestions on anything you'd like to see ?

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buddy82498 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 16:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Just keep doing what you're doing

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SBBeauregarde In reply to buddy82498 [2017-10-02 16:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Will do, thanks.

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EastCoastVisualizer [2017-10-02 01:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Trult a delicously deviant delight to read!

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SBBeauregarde In reply to EastCoastVisualizer [2017-10-02 07:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, thoughts on the characters ?

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EastCoastVisualizer In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 08:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Can definitely say that Selena's character was intriguing to read about.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to EastCoastVisualizer [2017-10-02 09:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic. How about the plot ?

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EastCoastVisualizer In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 18:48:54 +0000 UTC]

A bit on the more voracious-monster side, which isnt really my thing. I'm not too big on the idea of someone just eating eating eating nonstop. But when it finally came to the falling into the river, there you had my attention.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to EastCoastVisualizer [2017-10-02 20:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Alright that's a fair point. What do you think of the inflation?

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EastCoastVisualizer In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-03 15:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Enjoyable and well detailed.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to EastCoastVisualizer [2017-10-03 15:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Great any suggestions on anything you'd like to see ?

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EastCoastVisualizer In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-04 09:17:29 +0000 UTC]

Actual photos of Selena in the river and getting sucked up the pipe.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to EastCoastVisualizer [2017-10-04 11:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Ha

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thedoctor66 [2017-10-01 21:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done. I loved Selena's gluttonous rampage as well as the inflation scene in the pipe. Ariana's constant degrading and fat shaming of Selena was enjoyable as was Jessica's manipulation and flattery of the other contestants; interested to see where that's headed. Scarlett I could kind of take or leave, but all in all this story was excellent. Keep it up. 

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SBBeauregarde In reply to thedoctor66 [2017-10-01 21:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Excellent. I'm glad you enjoyed the inflation/stuffing and the characters interactions. What about the others characters ?

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thedoctor66 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-02 03:11:36 +0000 UTC]

It's very weird to see Katy Perry as the sweet innocent one, but I think you're pulling it off pretty well. Catherine's subplot remains intriguing, and Sasha is as loopy and sadistic as ever, which is exactly how I like her!

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SBBeauregarde In reply to thedoctor66 [2017-10-02 07:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Great stuff. Finally someone mentions Catherine haha. Yeah Sashas nuts. Thoughts on the inflation?

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Frankenbeanz254 [2017-10-01 19:24:16 +0000 UTC]

damn that was detailed. great job.

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SBBeauregarde In reply to Frankenbeanz254 [2017-10-01 19:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Great what did you think of the story in this chapter?

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Frankenbeanz254 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2017-10-01 19:30:10 +0000 UTC]

well it so detailed it great all around

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