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One of the coldest nights of the year and that could be heard across the misty area was the sound of a glass smashing against the ground. That smash came from none other than a bottle of alcohol that was thrown from the rooftops. On that same rooftop sat four young and beautiful women staring out into the darkness. All four with bright futures ahead of them and all without a thought or fear of danger.
The youngest of them being Hannah at the age of nineteen, who was the one that decided to throw the whiskey bottle onto the ground. She was easily the most vigilant of the four, with a lust for chaos and disaster, once she didn’t get caught. If she did, she’d get her daddy to bail her out of it. Hannah was an average height with long golden blonde hair that grew all the way down to her backside. Her teeth were perfectly clean and her eyes were a delight to look at. The young woman was quite thin though. Her legs and arms were almost pencil-like. Suitable for a model but other than that, it was quite unappealing. As well as that, her breasts and ass were pretty much flat as a pancake. There were no redeeming qualities to her at all. Everyone thought she was an utter bitch due to her self-confidence and riches. The latter being the only reason why people even hang out with her. Hannah was the type of girl that thought that since she was rich and Caucasian that it meant that everyone should worship her. If Hannah could create chaos at any chance, then she would do so.
Whilst chaos sounded fun, Jasmine clearly disagreed with her for the most part. She was all for rebelling against the norm but the whole chaos part was just not in her system. Jasmine was slightly taller than Hannah but had some redeeming qualities about her. She had nice shoulder length hair that would change hair every day or so. She loved her hair dye, to say the least. The young lady had nice hazel eyes and an incredible smile. Unlike, Hannah, she had some meat on her bones. It was a little bit but it made her look at least human. Her legs and arms had some nice weight to them. Whilst she did have a decent pair of breasts, she had a great ass that's for sure. Jasmine was sort of the prankster between the four women, always pulling pranks on someone once they were harmless. Jasmine didn’t drink as much as Hannah but she still drank a decent amount of alcohol. The great thing about Jasmine was that you could offer her a challenge and rarely would she ever say no to it. As well as that, Jasmine was caucasian like Hannah was, otherwise Hannah would have stayed away from her.
Jasmine was certainly up for any challenge but the same couldn’t be said for Kira. Beautiful in her own right but she would usually chicken out of any dares. The young lady didn’t want to take any risks at all. Kira played it save all of the time. That was until she drank some alcohol then she’d become another Jasmine. Kira had long black hair that grew to around the back of her neck and had lovely green iris’ in her eyes. She was one of the older girls at twenty. Her smile was quite nice and she was caucasian like the others. Kira was the only one who wore glasses but it didn’t really matter to anyone. Kira had a different body than her friends. She was quite chubby. Thick legs and thick arms. However, with that extra weight being there meant that she had a great set of breasts and ass. The young lady’s greatest ability was to eat and it was something that could help out the group in terms of cash. Anytime there was an eating contest, then the group would look to her to collect the reward. Every single time to their amazement, she’d come back with the cash reward and still at the same size.
All three women had their flaws and positives about them but there was nothing flawless about Olivia. She was perfect in every single aspect. It was like taking all of the positives from the other three women and putting them all into one woman. She had beautiful blue iris’ and an excellent smile that was brightened by her beautiful white teeth. Her long caramel like hair flew all the way down to her lower back. She had a great thickness in all of the right areas. Olivia had a great pair of juicy legs that connected to her massive ass. Soft, warm and jiggly were the best words to describe it. As well as that, the young woman had some nice round breasts that were a delight to look at. All of these features simply made her the leader of the group, even if Hannah tried to make it out to be that she was. The young woman was the oldest at twenty years old. Olivia had this bubbly personality. She could seduce any man she wanted but also had a great social game. She was lazy sometimes but when she put her mind to it, she could do anything. All four women were sitting on the rooftop, looking for a way to pass the time. They had spent most of the time sitting on the rooftop watching Hannah get drunk before she’d hurl a bottle of alcohol down into the ground.
“So...bored out here.” Kira looked over at Hannah who looked totally dazed. “Why not just move somewhere else, somewhere like a house instead of the mist”. The dazed woman waved her off in disgust. “Meh..boring, do something funny Kira”. Jasmine yawned for a moment before she saw something that caught her eye. She patted Olivia on the shoulder and pointed right at it. “How about over there?” The others looked over as the mist cleared to reveal a large wooden warehouse of sorts. Instantly, Kira’s warning signs went off as she shook her head. “Not a chance...forget about it….” Jasmine turned and chuckled at Kira for a moment. “C’mon, it’s just a warehouse, it’ll be empty”. Kira still shook her head. “I dare all of us to stay inside of the warehouse for five minutes”. Olivia and Jasmine chuckled at Hannah’s suggestion.
“Sure, but what’s in it for us?” Hannah in response to Olivia pulled out some cash from her pocket. Both women agreed as they sat up alongside Hannah. Kira, on the other hand, remained sitting down. “Come, get up Kira”. Kira shook her head which annoyed Hannah. “I said get up fatty”. “Whoa, watch your mouth, Hannah”. She stared right at Olivia who stood in front of her. “Whatever, she’s just too chicken”. Kira’ eyes darted up as she looked at Kira. “What did you say?” Hannah drunkenly stumbled over to her and smiled at her. “I said, she’s too chicken”. Kira nodded her head as she stood up. “Fine then, let’s do this stupid dare then”. Hannah chuckled as she pushed past everyone and started to climb down the ladder. “Bets on how much she’ll fall down that ladder?” Olivia and Kira began to make their bets as they watched Hannah. “Five”. “Ten”. Jasmine nodded as she started climbing down the ladder. Unluckily for her, Hannah somehow managed to get down the ladder without falling over. “Damn it, guess I’ll be paying you two”. Kira climbed down the ladder next as Olivia followed them. Right as Kira got off the ladder, one of the hinges popped right off which caused the ladder to crackle. Olivia’s eyes darted over as she watched the ladder slowly began to fall over. It buckled once more as the young woman began to lose her grip. Soon enough, Olivia was hanging by one arm as her friends watched on in horror.
The young woman managed to lift her other arm onto the ladder whilst it continued to bend and crackle. Without hesitation, Olivia began to swing back and forth before she leapt and wrapped her body around the pipe as she safety slide down to the ground. “Are you alright Olivia?” Olivia nodded in response as Kira was checking her face for any cuts or bruises. “I’m alright for the moment”. Jasmine nodded as she looked over at the ladder. “I’ll tell you that was a close one right there, you were about to become dead meat”. Olivia nodded in response. “Yeah, too close”. Hannah, in the meanwhile, had stumbled over to the warehouse. “I’ve seen better losers”. The three women turned around to see Hannah standing outside of the warehouse. Whilst the three were walking over to her, Kira saw something weird. Her eyes must have been playing a trick on her. She swore that she saw a large dark figure rolling his fingers in the mirror. However, once she cleaned her glasses, it was gone. “Did you guys see that?” “See what Kira?” The young lady gulped before she responded to Olivia. “I saw someone in the warehouse”. Jasmine chuckled for a second. “Relax, your mind is playing tricks on you. Look, we will just do this dumb dare for the rich hoe and then we can go home”. They all nodded their heads before they heard a smash.
Each woman turned around to see Hannah throwing bricks through the window of the warehouse. “Hannah, are you fucking serious!!!” The drunk ignored Olivia as she continued to throw bricks as she chuckled to herself. Olivia rushed over and grabbed the young woman on the shoulder before Hannah pushed her away. Jasmine ran over alongside Kira and restrained her before she freed herself. “Fuck off hoes, trying to steal my money and looks”. Kira looked at her in confusion for a moment. “She’s drunk”. Olivia nodded at Jasmine’s response. The young woman stumbled around for a few more seconds before she flipped them off. That was until she fell backwards and through the door to the warehouse. All three women stood there and looked at one another for a moment as they tried to figure out what to do. “Guess, you girls owe my fifteen dollars then”. Both women rolled their eyes as they went over and began to check on Hannah’s collapsed corpse. “She’s clearly passed out”. Kira nodded as she looked down at Hannah. “Let me just check”. Kira smacked her across the face a few times. “Kira, stop it, you’ll give her brain damage!!!” Jasmine chuckled as she looked down at her. “You’d have to have one first to get brain damage”.
Kira chuckled as she stared down at the young lady before she got a great idea in her head. “Since she’s knocked out, how about we just leave her here and then we can go home?” The others shook their head. “And have her daddy come after us? Not a chance”. “Besides, we’d lose out on some potential cash from her”. Kira groaned as she stood up. “Then what do we do with her?” Jasmine began to think for a moment as Olivia regained her stance. “Well, we have to go into the warehouse and wait there until she regains her conscious”. That idea instantly scared Kira off as she started to shake her head. “No way, it’s too scary and dark in there, besides we should be home already”. Jasmine shrugged her shoulders as she looked over at Kira. “We are adults here, we can go whenever we want to”. Olivia nodded her head. “That’s true besides, we can just find a light inside of her anyways. There has to be some sort of light of fire here”. Kira gulped for a moment as she looked back down at Hannah. “I seriously wonder why we even hang out with her in the first place”. Jasmine tapped Kira on the shoulder and pointed to the cash in her hand which caused Kira to reluctantly nod her head in response.
“We need some light in here anyway”. Olivia and Kira lifted Hannah off of the ground whilst Jasmine entered the warehouse. It was incredibly dark inside of the warehouse and they had to figure out a way to keep the light so they could stay inside. “How about we just keep the door open?” Jasmine nodded in response as Olivia and Kira entered the warehouse. Eventually, all of the women sat down and looked over at one another. “So, we just wait here until Hannah wakes up then?” Olivia nodded to Kira as she covered her nose. The stench of alcohol was incredibly dirty as it came off of Hannah. Suddenly, the door shut closed as the three women started to freak out. Kira immediately started to scream before Olivia placed her hand on her mouth to shut her up. “Quiet….We don’t want to alert anyone”. Kira nodded in response as Olivia raised her hand. Without hesitation, she raised her arm out in order to try to find Jasmine. Slowly, Olivia felt around the area whilst holding onto Kira’s arm. She felt something which frightened her for a bit but she calmed herself down. That was until someone grabbed her arm as she screamed. The hand let go as the sound of laughter could be heard. Suddenly, a lighter was lit as both ladies saw Jasmine’s smirk emerge in front of the fire.
“Relax there, girls. You just about shit yourself there”. Neither of them was impressed by the prank which caused Jasmine to shrug her shoulders in response. “Regardless of that, I found a light switch”. The two girls looked over as Jasmine flicked a switch which caused a few lights to splutter. After a few seconds, a large amount of light blasted into the room causing the three women to cover their eyes. However, once they opened them back up, they saw something simply incredible. This wasn’t just an ordinary warehouse. This was a candy warehouse. Inside of the warehouse were bags upon bags of different types of candies. Each woman looked on in shock and awe as they walked around the warehouse, touching the bags with their own hands to confirm their beliefs. “It's just all candy…...so much of it……..” “I couldn’t even imagine anyone actually eating all of this in one go”. Kira walked over beside the two star-struck women and placed her arms on their shoulders. “It’s like we went to heaven and this is what awaits us”. The three women were in such awe that they literally had walked over Hannah’s unconscious corpse. “It’s like this story I heard about on the news”. Olivia turned to Jasmine and gave her a look of confusion. “What story would that be then?” Jasmine chuckled for a moment. “You mean, you haven’t heard the story of the candy man?” “I’ve seen all of the movies, even the crappy third one”. Jasmine shook her head as she looked over at Kira.
“No, not that one, besides nobody mentions the third one. It’s a different candy man”. Olivia crossed her arms as she looked over to her bestie. “Then do tell us the story then, you might as well since we’ll be here for a while”. Jasmine gulped as she sat down on the table. “Three years ago back in the state of Ohio, these young teenagers kept going missing. Adults would say that they’d walk into this candy shop that was run by a man that only went by the name of the candy man. Nobody knew his name and he never opened his shop past midnight. However, one night a teenager tried to rob the shop and ended up killing the candy man. They say he haunted the teenager until he committed suicide in the candy shop. Ever since that day, anyone who entered the shop past midnight would be killed”. Kira shook her head as she listened. “Sounds like one of those scary myths”. Olivia nodded her head to agree but it was clear that Jasmine wasn’t done. “Yeah, what’s even scarier is that they say that he used the victims in the actual candy itself”. Both women shook their heads in disgust. “That’s rather disgusting, you’ve probably put me off of candy forever now”. “That makes no sense, if he’s dead, then how can he still run the shop?” Jasmine shook her shoulders as she looked over at Kira. “I have no clue, it was just a myth that I was told”.
Right as the story ended, all three women could hear some noises around the warehouse. They slowly turned around to see that Hannah was making her way back to her feet. It took her a minute to regain her stance but she stood around and looked at the warehouse. “Ugh….you losers took me to a candy shop…..why….to get her fatter….”. Kira pouted for a moment as Hannah pushed past them. “Look, Hannah we did the dare, so let’s go home now”. The bossy bitch ignored Olivia as she continued to walk onwards. “Hannah, where are you even going?” Hannah smirked for a moment as she looked back at the three women. “I’m totally robbing this place, look at all this food”. Kira instantly thought of the myth and began to shake her head, “Nope, I’m out of here, good luck”. Jasmine clearly agreed as they started to make their way to the door. However, Olivia was determined to get Hannah out of the warehouse. “Hannah, stop, you are going to far”. The young lady ignored her as she continued to walk out of the room and down a large hallway. “Guys, help me please”. Her two friends stopped for a moment and ran back to Olivia, mainly to get her out of here. Eventually, all four women were inside of the hallway as they continually called out for Hannah who was ignoring them, clearly, she was still drunk and not thinking straight.
“Hannah, this is so stupid, you’ll be arrested”. She ignored Olivia as she continued to stumble down the hallway. The three women watched on as they all noticed something weird. Though Hannah was drunk, she was two times as far away from them as they were from her. It was almost like the hallway was stretching them away from Hannah. “God, just stop, you stupid bitch”. Olivia and Kira looked at Jasmine who had the courage to utter those words to Hannah. The brat quickly stopped as she turned around and looked back at Jasmine. “You trashy hoe, I know for a fact, you didn’t say that to me”. Whilst Hannah was shouting at Jasmine, Olivia saw something appear around the corner. It was a dark figure standing behind Hannah. Kira noticed it too once she saw a hand appear before a number of large and sharp objects came out of the sleeve. Both women tapped Jasmine on her shoulder to alert her. Once she saw the figure, she started to breathe heavily as all three women started to slowly walk backwards in order to alert Hannah. “That's right losers, back away and let the rich girl that matters do the work”. Whilst Hannah was shouting at them, the figure behind them raised out his hand and began to scrap the walls as he walked closer to her. All of this caused Kira to scream but Hannah was too drunk to notice any of the noise. “Whatever, I’ll be back with a shit ton of money”.
The young lady turned around to see the dark figure stand in front of her. The rich brat was frozen in fear as the three women began to shake as they watched on. “What is that thing?” Jasmine quickly responded to Olivia as the sweat dripped down her face. “The candy man”. As soon as she said those words, the figure grabbed Hannah by the throat and lifted her into the air. The drunk began to waved her feet in the air as she tried to pull apart his arms. Suddenly, the walls began to melt away as the matter began to push against the women. Each lady shrieked in fear as they decided to make a run for it. Hannah continued to reach out as her eyes widened in fear once the figure reached down and grabbed something. It was a large hose. She screamed as he shoved the hose down her neck causing her to choke. As for the rest of the women, they were screaming as they ran their way down the hallway whilst the walls were collapsing and closing in on each other. “The fucking door keeps moving away!!” Jasmine was right as the door kept moving further and further away from each other. Their fear was only heightened once they heard Hannah’s scream. Eventually, Kira reached out for the door which started to move closer to them. Luckily for them, it caused them to exit through the door before Olivia locked it shut and rejoined her two friends. “What the actual fuck was that thing?” “I thought it was a fucking myth, not fucking real!!!” Whilst Olivia and Jasmine were arguing with each other, Kira stood there frozen with fear as she stared at the window.
This continued until a large blast was heard splattering against the windows. Kira screamed as she ran back to Olivia and Jasmine. All three women looked at the windows which were now covered in some sort of thick liquid. It looked like chocolate but they knew that it was clear blood. This was only made clearer to them once they saw a bunch of guts slide down the window. Another bang was heard once a hand was thrown against the window. Each woman screamed as they knew that it was Hannah’s hand. Kira and Olivia ran to the door as they tried with all of their might to try and open it but it wouldn’t budge at all. “Get this fucking door open!!” Jasmine was trying to do the other thing by breaking the window but it wouldn’t break at all. Suddenly, the door to the hallway began to crack before it fell to the ground. There stood the candy man as each woman screamed in fear. Without hesitation, he threw a large hook right at Jasmine. Luckily for her, she dropped to her back and watched as the hook broke right through the glass. Without even thinking, she tried to climb out of the window. However, Kira noticed that the hook had a recoil as the pushed Jasmine to the ground as the hook started to recoil. Olivia dove into action as she pulled Kira out of the way, who just barely managed to miss the hook. The hook flew back under his sleeve as Jasmine jumped right through the window. Kira wasted no time as she climbed right out as well.
Olivia followed suit as she climbed out the window whilst Kira helped her out. However, she screamed in fear as she felt him grab the bottom of her leg. The young woman started to kick him right across the face whilst Kira continued to pull her out. “Jasmine, fucking do something quickly!!” The young woman went around and tried to look for a weapon until she saw a bottle of alcohol and remembered something. Jasmine reached into her pocket and grabbed her lighter before running over and grabbing the alcohol. “This is going to hurt”. The young woman took a drink from the bottle and looked at the candy man before lighting the fire and spraying him with alcohol. The quick flash of fire clearly burned him as he let go of Olivia’s leg but it also burned a slight bit of her leg as she screamed in pain. Kira pulled her friend to the ground before she lifted her on her back. Kira quickly followed Jasmine as they started to run. They ran and ran until they couldn’t anymore as they collapsed in a large forest area. Olivia was still groaning in pain from the blast of fire that cut her leg. “Holy fuck!!! Hannah’s fucking dead!!!” Jasmine looked over at Kira and shook her head. “Look, we all have to shut the fuck up about this night and never mention it again, otherwise we end up just like her!!” Before she could finish her sentence, a bag was wrapped around Jasmine’s head as she started to scream. The same would happen to Kira who tried to fight back as well. Olivia finally opened her eyes to see a hooded figure wrap a bag around her head as she screamed with fear.
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Darkness was all that they could see. None of them was sure whether they were alive or dead at this point. Maybe it was just a horrible dream? Maybe it was a stupid prank gone too far by Jasmine? Maybe they really were dead? Though they couldn’t see anything, they could sure feel everything. The sounds of the high speed were coming from some sort of vehicle. Clearly, all three women could tell that they were in some sort of car as they had seat belts wrapped around them or something that would keep them in place. None of them could move their hands or feet as their bodies shifted with each bump from the road. This was just some terrible nightmare at this point and all of the women wanted out at this point.
Suddenly, the car seemed to stop as a bunch of men were heard mumbling to one another before the slams of the doors startled all of the women. There was utter silence for the next few moments until the doors were opened once more. Three loud snaps could be heard as each woman could move their feet once more. One by one they were dragged out of the car. They heard the loud scream which obviously came from Olivia. Any pressure on that leg would ultimately lead to a lot of pain. She had to be carried in as the other two were dragged along and into some room. A number of loud noises and people talking could be heard once they were pushed through the doors. These noises seemed to have to startle each woman as they tried to wiggle free. However, they were met with quick jabs to the stomach which stopped them in their tracks. It was just best for them to cooperate with the people who had kidnapped them. Their legs were lifted up the stairs as they continued to walk alongside the men. They would eventually stop a few times as the doors were being unlocked so that they could continue their journey. They stopped once more before they were placed in these large chairs. All three women had their zip ties cut off before their masks were taken off. They were blinded by the light for a moment before they looked over at each other. “Where the fuck are we?”
“Y’all in my house now”. They looked up to see a large black man standing there in a nice suit. He had no hair at all but was incredibly tall. It was almost like he was a giant in a suit. The dude was covered in muscles, so much so that he had muscles on top of muscles. He had muscles where most people didn’t even have muscles. He had a stern and angry look on his face as he looked down at the three women. Everyone could see the sweat falling down his face as he looked on. It was very clear to them that he was intense but also very frightening. “Who are you and why did you kidnap us?” The man stood there and shook his head before slamming the table. “I saved y’all little asses, If I’d left you in that forest, y’all would be dead motherfuckin meat!!”. All three women looked at each other for a moment. “Thanks, but can you let us go?” “Hell naw, y’all gots to answer the questions”. Jasmine rolled her eyes as the man watched her. “You roll those pretty little eyes at me once more and imma bout to slap that hair dye right outta ya”. Kira stood up in response before he directed his finger at her. “Sit ya five dollar ass down before I make change!!” The young woman did so before Olivia looked up at him. “What questions do you have?”
His eyes darted over to Olivia as he stood in front of her. “Why were y’all inside of a warehouse?” Olivia gulped for a moment as she tried to think of an excuse. “Why do you need to know?” He was quite annoyed by Jasmine’s response but his eyes never left Olivia’s. “You better tell your troll friend over there to shut the fuck up cause she’s pissin me off”. Kira calmed down Jasmine who was pretty much ready to start a fight at this point. “We….we were doing…...a dare….yeah, a dare”. He shook his head in response. “A dare!!” All three women nodded their heads in response which caused him to shake his head in disgrace. “Which one of y’all dumb motherfuckers think it was a great idea to break into a fucking broken ass warehouse and sit there like a bunch of wackos?” All three women shook their heads as they tried to think of a way out of this. “What are ya? A bunch of bobbleheads, answer the goddamn question!!” Each woman shook in fear as the man continued to stare at them. Just as he was about to speak, he was interrupted. “That’s enough, Sargent Quinn, you’ve done your part”. The three women could hear the doors close behind them as someone walked in. That person happened to be Catherine Smith, the president. Quinn immediately nodded to the president and showed his respect. “Anything madam”. He quickly stood aside as Catherine walked past him and sat down on a chair in front of the three frightened women. “Let’s get down to business ladies”.
The three women looked at one another in confusion as Catherine stared at all of them. “What business are we even talking about?” The president smirked as she looked over at Jasmine. “Well, the business of how the three of you are going to help with the capturing of the candy man”. Kira was the first to shake her head as she listened to Catherine. “I’m not going back into the crazed hole!! We nearly got killed inside of there!!” Catherine shook her head at the women for a moment before Quinn stepped beside her. Before he could open his mouth, Catherine waved him off as she tried to keep everyone calm. “Okay then, I might have gone too far with that request. How about this? Which one of you can explain to me why you were inside of that warehouse?” There was dead silence for a few moments as Catherine eyed all three women, waiting to see which of them would crack first. “It was all part of a stupid dare we did”. She raised her eyebrow in response to Olivia. “So, what was the dare?” “To stay inside of the warehouse for five minutes”. Catherine nodded as she made sure that Quinn was writing all of the notes down on a computer that was nearby. “I see, so who made the dare then?” They gulped for a few seconds as they looked at one another.
“Is nobody going to answer my question? I mean, we are having such a great talk. I can just leave and Quinn will get all of the answers out of you. Either way, I’ll get the information I need for this case”. Without hesitation, Jasmine spluttered out a response. “Hannah, Hannah was the one who made the dare!!” She nodded her head as she gave the thumbs up to Quinn. “Hannah didn’t make it then”. Jasmine gave her a look of confusion for a few moments as she stared back at the president. “What do you mean she didn’t make it?”. Catherine leaned back in her chair for a moment. “Nobody leaves the candy man’s shop alive, that was until you three managed to escape, why else did you think you’d be here”. The three women shook their heads in confusion as Catherine continued to talk about the case. “You see, this is why we need the three of you for information. The three of you are the only survivors of the candy man, you three are the key to capturing him and putting him on trial”. “So then we can just give you the information and then you’ll just let us go?” Catherine turned to Kira and nodded in response. “Alright then, but why are you so interested in the candy man?” The president took out a bunch of files and placed them on the table. “Six years ago, I managed to expose the Wonka child murder scandal and the money inheritance scandal, even after breaking my arm and having my former officer, Simmons fall into a deep coma, I was still able to expose the scandal but was never able to capture Wonka herself”.
All three women remembered the scandal as it was on pretty much every single television station in the world. “Why couldn’t you catch her?” Catherine gulped out of self-pity before she looked back at the three women. “I could have done better. I broke my arm and watched her mock me behind her gates before she walked back into her factory. I laid there in the cold weather for hours before an ambulance came to pick me up. I spent the next day sitting in a hospital bed before I went with my crew back to the location but when we came back, there was no factory, there was no Wonka. All that remained was an open area. It was like someone made the entire factory disappear just like that” The three women watched as Catherine snapped her fingers. “At the end of it, I walked away, bitter and defeated. Three years later the land is finally taken up by a new place, a shop. It was a candy shop. My warning signs went off as we did a thorough investigation of the shop and warehouse but found nothing but candy. It was only a week later that the candy man myth started. The owner was found dead after a botched burglary and the thief would be found dead weeks later in the shop. I’ve never found any proof that this was real until now by finding you, three women”.
“So, you have your information, maybe then it’s time for us to just leave”. All three women went to stand up before Catherine shook her head. “Not exactly. You have to help us with this”. Olivia turned around as she shook her head. “We gave you the information, you said once this was done that you’d let us leave which we are doing right now”. The president clearly disagreed with them as she stood up and stared back at them. “Not exactly, we need you to get the proof, the hard evidence to put this man away for good”. “Doesn’t that sound like something the FBI should be doing?” Catherine nodded in response to Kira’s comments. “Yes, but you three have actually escaped from the candy shop. Nobody else has done so. You can leave if you want but you’ll be outlaws for the rest of your lives”. The three women looked at one another in horror. “You can’t do that, we haven’t done anything wrong or illegal ever?” Catherine raised her eyebrow as she looked over at Jasmine. “Is that so Jasmine Lynch, I do recall a certain botched prank that ended up getting a member of the teaching staff getting killed”. Jasmine started on in horror as she listened to Catherine. “And for you, Kira Virlan, I did see some files on the botched burglary that you tried to save when you shot the homeowner instead of the burglar which allowed him to steal the goods and get away”. Kira was gob-smacked as she listened to Catherine. “Which brings me to you, Olivia Ciorbrica, you were too busy talking to your boyfriend on the phone to notice that you placed too many pills in all of the patients at the retirement home and ended up killing seven of the patients there. The memory flashed back into her head as she shook her head in fear. Jasmine could remember the event, very vividly though.
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“Now this is going to be an awesome prank. One to close out the college year and one that they’ll remember me by”. Jasmine chuckled as she sat in the ventilation system. This would be her ultimate prank and would cement her as the greatest prankster in the college’s history. It might not be the best title but it would surely be one that she could look back on fondly, or so she thought at the time. The young woman had been planning this prank for the last ten months or so and had told absolutely nobody at the prank, everyone except Hannah. She used a small bit of Hannah’s money to actually buy the equipment and to get Hannah away from the prank. If anyone pranked Hannah, then they’d pretty much be in deep shit, other sued or jailed thanks to her rich daddy.
The equipment was rather simple. It involved a large amount of purified gravy falling through the ceiling and landing on the guests before Jasmine would sneak attack them all by covering them in shaving cream. The ultimate prank for sure, even better was that it was done at the graduation. Jasmine spent most of the money buying the packets of gravy. She had spent the last two weeks making the actual gravy before sliding it into the large bag. With that, she used Hannah’s personal crane to bring the bag to the ceiling before she’d eventually hang it up with a long pole that was attached to the ceiling. Jasmine pulled out her drone and watched the screen, attached to the top of the ceiling was a large amount of gravy being held inside of a bag. Once the songs were finished, she’d use the drone to cut the bag open which would open up and make the gravy collide with the windows on the ceiling. All of this would end up covering the guests. Luckily for Jasmine, the windows were tinted so it was hard to see anything that was in front of them. The young lady sat there as she waited and waited for the songs to finish up. Arguably, this was the most boring thing that she could do but the end result would be perfect or at least she thought it would be.
Eventually, after a few more bad songs with no energy, Jasmine saw her opportunity as the principal walked onto the stage and started his speech. The young woman giggled to herself as she began to fly the drone towards the bag. She smirked once more as she looked over at the crowd. “Goodnight and goodbye folks”. With those last words, Jasmine drove the drone through the rope as she watched the gravy fall out of the bag. As soon as it hit, the glass, it broke right through it as the guests looked up in fear and horror, only to be met with a bunch of stale gravy splashing them across the face. Jasmine chuckled for a few moments as all she could hear where the screams coming from people echoed inside the vent. People were getting sick on the ground, on their seats and on top of one another whilst others were falling and slipping inside of the gravy. Whilst the prank was funny, it was time for the second act as Jasmine pulled out her bag which had a number of cans of shaving cream. The young woman kicked through the vent and jumped down as she looked among the carnage. Without hesitation, she began to quickly run through the area and started to spray all of the guests with shaving cream. Jasmine bumped into one of her teachers and sprayed her with a whole can of cream. She could tell that she accidentally got it in her eyes as she stood there. “Sorry about that”. However, it didn’t stop her from spraying more people.
Jasmine continued to do this for a few more minutes before she eventually looked at the carnage that she had just created. “Now that’s comedy”. However, she looked over to see that the doors were wide open and that one of her teachers was stumbling around the area. Jasmine knew that the road was right near the entrance and it would be quite busy. “Mrs Peterwood, stop moving”. She didn’t hear Jasmine as she stood outside and waved her hands in the air, trying to find something to grab onto. Jasmine quickly tried to catch up to her but fell right on her face due to her slipping on the gravy. She continued to try to get back on her feet but she couldn’t as she would fall right back down to the ground. The teacher, on the other hand, was walking on the road as she tried to wipe the cream out of her eyes. Out of nowhere, a car came zooming around the corner and within a split second, collided with the teacher, sending her flying across the road. Jasmine watched on in horror as she could hear the sound of her body breaking once it met the ground. “Holy fuck….shit, I gotta get out of here”. As the chaos continued around her, the young woman crawled her way to the exit door and jumped out of it as she ran all the way back to her house.
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“So do you mind if we do the whole cinema thing, the next day. I’ve just got some assignments to do and such”. Olivia nodded to Kira in response. “Sure, that’s no problem at all, I’ll tell Jasmine then when I talk with her later on” Kira smiled in response. “Oh yeah, that sounds perfect”. Both women smiled as they sat down on Olivia’s bed. “So what are the big plans with you and Jonathan”. Olivia chuckled for a moment as she ran her fingers through her hair. “Nothing much, well not as much as we’d like to have”. Kira chuckled to herself as she listened to her friend. “What’s up. Is the sex not good anymore?” Olivia gave her friend a stern look before she giggled in response. “We haven't even had sex yet Kira, knock it off”. Kira nodded in response. “Then what’s the matter then?” Olivia shook her head before she laid down across the bed. “It’s just that we don’t see each other a lot of the time, I work constantly in the retirement home and he works at the restaurants nearly all the time”. “You just want your spooning buddy”. Olivia chuckled for a moment as she listened onwards. “Totally want my spooning buddy”. They both laughed at the ridiculousness of the saying before Olivia sat up. “What a stupid phrase to say”. Olivia agreed as she nodded in response.
“How did you even get all your assignments done so fast?” “How did you think I earned the name the assignment machine?” Kira sat there for a minute trying to think of what to say next. “Firstly, dumb nickname, secondly, I guess it’s because you did all of the assignments as soon as you got them”. Olivia nodded in response. “Exactly, more time to spend with friends and more time for me”. Kira chuckled in response to Olivia. “You sure love your me time”. “Every girl has to have their own me time, otherwise I’d crack up”. The two women chuckled once more before Kira looked back down at her watch. “Damn, it’s getting rather late don’t you think?” Olivia seemed to agree as she looked over at her clock. “Yeah, I suppose I might as well go now and do the assignments”. Olivia shrugged her shoulders. “If that’s what you want to do then go for it”. The young lady sat up and began to walk down the stairs. She quickly grabbed her shoes and began to put them on as Olivia came down the stairs. “Do you want a lift home?” Kira shook her head in response. “Nah, but thanks for the offer, I got to do some walking anyways”. “If you insist but if you want, you can always come back here and stay with me for the night”. Kira nodded as she put on the coat before turning around to Olivia. “Well, bye then”. “Good luck, I’m about to make some dinner anyways”. Kira nodded as she lightly closed the door behind her before she started to walk down the long road.
To be fair, Olivia lived in a nice neighbourhood and even though, she could stay in Olivia’s house and do the assignments online, Kira just felt a lot more comfortable doing them whilst lying in her own bed in her own house. It was quite dark outside which was a change from the sunny days they had gotten over the last few weeks. Usually, around this time, they’d be out in the sun and it would take forever for the sun to go in. Kira didn’t mind the dark so much as long as she had light. The light she had was her phone which she took out and began to look at. The young woman began to type on her phone. She was looking up the different prices in the cinema so that she could find the one that had the best value but also the one that had the best food for her particularly. Kira didn’t mind the movie so she decided that Jasmine and Olivia could figure that one out whilst she would enjoy the food. It was only then that the thoughts of food started to run through her mind. Kira started to think about what food Olivia would be having. Probably some healthy stuff knowing how good condition her body was. Or maybe she was one of those girls that ate junk food but somehow didn’t gain any weight. Those women were freaks of nature for sure.
Suddenly, her train of thoughts was interrupted by the sounds of shots banging against one of the houses. Kira stopped and looked over to the house next to her as the door opened up as a man wearing a hood ran out carrying two large bags with him. It wasn’t long before a young man came up behind him and tackled him to the ground. Kira watched on in horror as the two men wrestled around with each other before the burglar got the upper hand and pulled out his gun. However, the man jammed his elbow into the burglar’s kidney which caused the gun to fall to the ground. He kicked it away before the burglar tightened his headlock on the man. Kira was quite frightened until she ran over and grabbed the gun before aiming at the burglar. “Put the man down…..just give him…..the stuff and….and...go away”. The burglar wasn’t afraid and could sense her fear as he only tightened the grip. Kira began to shake the gun in her hand for a few moments as she watched the chaos in front of her. “I’ll shoot….don’t make me…” A loud scream could be heard as Kira panicked and activated the gun. She watched as the bullet pierced through the man’s head as he fell to the ground. Kira shrieked as she dropped the gun in fear. Whilst this was going on, the burglar grabbed the two bags and decided to run away whilst Kira stood there in fear. Without hesitation, she ran away as far as she could to the other side of the house and kept running. It was only then that she remembered Olivia’s offer and decided to run to her house. She calmed herself down and rang the doorbell. “Hey, Kira, what’s up?” Kira looked visibly shaken as she looked back at Olivia. “Can I stay over for the night?” Olivia gave her a weird look for a few moments before letting her in. “Sure, have some meatloaf, you look ghostly”.
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“Another day, another dollar”. Olivia sat in her chair whilst she was scrolling through her phone. The young woman was just scrolling through her phone, whilst looking at pictures of Johnathan. All of their pictures brought back memories to their first date, to the time that they spend at the beach to even their first theme park ride that they rode together. This was the type of stuff that would make her smile and would keep her going through the day. If she didn’t have these pictures then she’d surely just get bored for the job. It didn’t matter, she hated the job anyway. It took away from her own time and gave her shit wages but it was a job and one that kept her parents happy. It was like once everyone around her was happy then it was alright. Olivia wasn’t a mean person at all, she just didn’t like minding old people because it just reminded her about death, something that she was quite nervous about, even if it was a thing that nobody at her age should have even been thinking about.
Her scrolling was interrupted by the owner of the retirement home, who tapped her on the shoulder. “Ciorbrica, get back on duty, you have to go fill up the medication for the patients, do it quickly”. Olivia nodded as she watched her boss leave the room. “Whatever Jessica”. Her boss quickly returned and pointed at her. “And remember, don’t talk to your boyfriend whilst you’re putting the pills in, the dick can wait till later on, besides too many pills will cause an overdose and that’ll be all on you, not me”. Olivia nodded as she watched the young woman walked out of the room. Olivia stood there and mocked her for a bit before she groaned for a few moments. “I have to get a new job soon enough, but that requires too much work”. Olivia walked over and opened up the list and started to record the patient's names and started to write down the number of pills that each of them would need. The young woman slowly opened the pills cabinet and began to grab the bottles with the different amount of pills that were in each of them. She took a deep breath before placing the phone on the table as she went to work.
For the next twenty minutes or so, Olivia would place the right amount of pills in each of the patient’s pill cases before the phone started ringing. She slowly turned around to see that it was Johnathan. Her frown grew to a smile as she quickly looked around the room to make sure that her boss was nowhere near her before she picked up and started to answer. “Hey, hunny?” “Hey hun bun, how’s work?” Oliva groaned for a moment as she started to talk on the phone. “Boring, as usual, just putting the pills in the cases”. “Oh, alright. Should I call later then, considering the whole pills thing is dangerous and such?" Olivia chuckled for a moment as she listened to him. “No, not at all, besides I’ve got thirteen of them done and I’ve got seven left to do. I can talk and such”. “Alright then, so what’s the plan after work then? Oliva began to think as she just started to randomly throw pills into each of the seven empty cases, not even looking at which ones she was throwing in. “Well, how about we go out for a nice date then after this?” “That sounds perfect, the bill’s on me though”. The young woman chuckled as she continued to throw random pills in the cases. “Yeah, that sounds really cute, how about you bring a ring this time?” “Maybe hun, I can get you an onion ring”. She giggled loudly as she grabbed a handful of pills and threw them into the cases before shutting them. It was only then that she started to hear footsteps.
“Gotta go, bye hunny”. With that, Olivia turned off her phone and slid it down her bra. “Are you done yet with those pills?” Olivia quickly nodded her head in response as she looked over at her boss. “Yeah, I do”. “Good, then give them out to the patients. I'm just going to sleep with some headphones on to block out all of the noise”. Olivia nodded as she grabbed the pills and started to deliver them to the patients. It took a few moments for her to do so but she would get through all of them. Olivia handed over the last one to the patient who instantly drank them up with their tea. The young lady smiled for a moment and turned around. She only stopped once she heard a loud bang. Olivia turned around to see the old man lying on the ground, motionless. She quickly ran over to him and began to try to wake him up but it didn’t work. It was only then that she realized that she fucked up with the pills. The young lady was petrified as another bang was heard, followed by another bang. Olivia ran into a number of rooms to see dead body after dead body. Olivia quickly ran past her boss and headed out of the door. “Fuck, I gotta get out of her”. She leapt into her car and started the engine before zooming away down the road. Not once did she even think about looking back at the retirement home.
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“You got away with murder on the fact that there was no evidence linking you to the murder, whilst you got away with murder on the fact of a mistake and you got away with murder by moving to an entirely new state. You’re all criminals by my book”. The three girls shook their heads in disgust. “That was in the past!!” “Mine was accidental!!” “As was mine” Catherine shook her head as she listened to all three women complained. “Regardless, once you leave this building, you three are outlaws and we will catch you. You got someone killed because of your foolishness, you got someone killed because of your clumsiness and you got multiple people killed because of your laziness. You don’t have any choice or opinion on this matter. You have to help us”. The three women all sat down as did Catherine as they each tried to process the information that was going through their mind at the time. All of this was just a giant nightmare for them at this point. None of them wanted to be there. Every one of them just wanted to be in their homes and away from this mess. “I ignored the mistakes for too long and now I have to confront them and force you three to own up to your actions and face the consequences. There is only one way out of this though”.
“What are you trying to say?” Catherine leaned forward after she heard Jasmine’s response. “I’m saying there is a way to escape this whole thing”. “Well, might as well tell us then”. She smiled for a moment as she looked over at Olivia. “You three can help me get this cold hard evidence and this information out and we’ll I’ll forget about those three events and wipe them from the archives. You three can go back to living your normal lives”. Each woman looked at one another as they tried to think of a response. “That’s it, you’ll let us go with no charges”. Catherine nodded right at Kira. “No charges and you’ll have the candy man locked up forever, so you won’t have to live in fear”. The three women really had no other choice, they had to accept the deal or their lives were over and done with. “So you value catching the candy man over nine other lives then?” Without hesitation, Catherine nodded in response to Olivia. “I’ll go to any length to catch him. If I have to sacrifice a hundred lives to catch him then I’m willing to do that”. Jasmine shook her head in disgust. “So what you are saying is that you are willing to risk our lives to capture the candy man”. The president wasted no time in nodding her head. “I will absolutely do that, no costs or expense. I want to capture him, I need to capture him”.
“Elections must be coming up soon then”. The three girls giggled for a moment whilst Catherine joined in the giggling. She looked at all three women before slamming her table. The giggling quickly stopped thereafter. “This isn’t a joke!! I’m trying to capture a heavy, vicious and creative criminal in order to protect my country!! My reputation is on the line and it’s taken a massive hit ever since I lost Wonka!!” The three women looked at her in disgust. “Does it look like I’m taking this as a joke? Does it look like Sargent Quinn is taking this as a joke?“ The three women looked at Quinn to see the most intense look that they’ve ever seen on someone. However, they were still annoyed, particularly Jasmine who looked right at the president. “So, us three are the pawns then to fill back up your reputation”. Catherine shrugged her shoulders. “Not exactly, you guys are just people who are the key to fixing a massive problem. That’s how I see it”. “So we are basically hamsters then?” Catherine was quick to debunk Kira as she shook her head to disagree. “You three are the key to solving the case”. Olivia looked over to see Catherine and nodded. “Yeah, that sounds great. We can surely do this. Oh, wait, no we can’t because I can barely fucking walk!!” Olivia was quick to point out the large burn and cut mark across her leg as Catherine looked right at it.
“We can easily fix that. That’s just a little scratch compared to what I’ve seen and been through”. The three women just gave her looks of pure disgust. “You really love making this all about you”. “This isn’t about me, this is about four people coming together to take down something that can damage all of us and the country”. The three women clearly didn’t trust Catherine at all as they continued to disagree with anything that she said. Catherine would continue to threaten to use Quinn but she never did. She knew that in her heart, it would never work out properly. “Look, we can continue to disagree all night long but we are going to get this done, otherwise I’ll just put you all in jail. We all want this candy man behind bars, don’t we?” All three women nodded to agree with Catherine. “Fucking fabulous, then maybe we can work together and take down this bastard, now you can decide who is staying with me and who is going to jail tonight?” Catherine leaned back in her chair as she waited for their responses. For the next few minutes, the three women discussed on what to do but eventually, they’d come to a decision. “I’ll do it”. Catherine nodded as she looked right at Jasmine. “Smart choice”. “I’m in”. The president nodded once more at Olivia before she directed her eyes at Kira. “Good, so then, what’s it going to be?” Kira gulped for a moment as her hand started to shake. “Fuck it, I’m in”. Catherine smiled as she sat up and shook all of their hands. “You all made the right choice to join the right side”. “So when do we start?” Catherine turned around and looked right at Olivia. “When that leg heals up, for the moment, you’re with me”.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to aggroh [2018-07-21 00:17:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. What did you think of the plot?
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aggroh In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-21 00:33:25 +0000 UTC]
Progressed well, however I was a little confused by the kidnapping and stuff.
seems unique though, like a whole universe can be built from this.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to aggroh [2018-07-21 00:35:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice. Why was it confusing if you don't mind me asking? That's the aim haha. Thoughts on the characters?
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aggroh In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-21 00:36:44 +0000 UTC]
Just sudden bags and stuff. It jarred me but nothing big.
Pretty good characterwise. Solid archtypes
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SBBeauregarde In reply to aggroh [2018-07-21 00:40:17 +0000 UTC]
Alright then. Nice, thoughts on the horror aspects?
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SBBeauregarde In reply to aggroh [2018-07-21 01:07:15 +0000 UTC]
Nice, any suggestions or things you'd personally like to see?
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aggroh In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-21 01:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Hmm....
More mystery.
And, as if this is a shock
blueberries.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to aggroh [2018-07-21 01:47:29 +0000 UTC]
You may get both in the future...
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bluelove123456 [2018-07-19 02:39:04 +0000 UTC]
Putting this on the list! Looking forward to reading.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to bluelove123456 [2018-07-19 04:59:35 +0000 UTC]
Awesome. Hope to hear your feedback shortly.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Gendermorph [2018-07-10 11:46:31 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. What did you think of the plot?
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Gendermorph In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-10 12:18:10 +0000 UTC]
It was...interesting to say the least.
Its interesting to hear about what happened to Sasha and the factory, though, we don't know what happened. Where she is or even where the factory is for that matter.
Its the type of ''series story-arch'' that's easy to grasp and it draws people in with its mystery and unsolved questions.
I call it a ''series story-arch'' because it has a TV-series-esque vibe to it. At least for me.
The beginning when they're in the warehouse was creepy, and the change to the interrogation was a good way to end it.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Gendermorph [2018-07-10 13:09:25 +0000 UTC]
Good.
Yeah, just felt it would be a nice addition to put it in there.
That's what I was trying to achieve really.
Nice, I'm trying to make this as creepy and horror-like as possible so it'll become more creepy and scary as we go along. Thoughts on the characters?
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Gendermorph In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-10 14:48:26 +0000 UTC]
Fortunatly the charecters weren't all bitches, like in the Bella's Bad Year story. It was a nice change of pace, but if you'd continued that trend for your next story it would've gotten a little insufferable...in spite of how few charecters there are here.
With that said;
Heather was, well, a bitch. Though, it was a little difficult to tell if she was normally a bitch cause she was drunk for most of the story. Compared to the Bellas, she was tame by bitch standards, which i've got to admit I liked. Certain charecters can be bitches, but not extreme level like the Bellas, so i'm thankful that we got a ''diet-bitch.''
Kira was your typical fat girl, but an enjoyable one.
Olivia, honestly there wasn't a whole lot there, at least in this first chapter. Same for Jasmine. I just didn't notice a whole lot to make them stand apart, at least in this first chapter.
The one was most charecter was honestly Hannah, and she, well, didn't last long.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Gendermorph [2018-07-10 14:51:16 +0000 UTC]
Ha, that's fair. Hannah was a minor character so who cares for her anyways lol.
Good, just trying to make her sort of like the worried character.
I'll have to try and make Olivia and Jasmine stand out more in the next chapters.
Any suggestions on things I should do or things you'd like to see?
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Gendermorph In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-10 22:39:35 +0000 UTC]
The only thing that I took issue with was that there wasn’t description for Hannah’s expansion. Like, even a brief one saying whether she was inflating with water or air.
A minor nit-pick, but one i’d still like to mention.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Gendermorph [2018-07-10 23:28:21 +0000 UTC]
No worries. I can understand that. I did say that chocolate splattered against the window so it was meant to suggest she was filled with chocolate.
Fair to nit pick though, if helps
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Gendermorph In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-11 11:06:09 +0000 UTC]
Huh. Thought it was blood that splattered against the window. Must've not noticed the chocolate.
The rest of the story was actually quite good.
The scenes with the Candyman were quick, but that's what made it effective. Quick flashes that gave us something, but not much. Enough to make it creepy
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Gendermorph [2018-07-11 12:05:59 +0000 UTC]
It was a mixture of both really, so it would have been easy to miss it.
Thanks.
Good, I'll do more of that.
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Gendermorph In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-11 15:09:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanx
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter then
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IloMer [2018-07-10 06:11:42 +0000 UTC]
So, one complaint I do have about this is that it kinda feels like you just threw on those backstories just to make us less sympathetic to the characters. I mean, I don’t feel like anyone actually would be able to get away with those types of crimes, making them feel less thought out.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to IloMer [2018-07-10 11:46:12 +0000 UTC]
No worries. I put the crimes there to basically give them a reason as to why they had to do this for Catherine. Without those crimes they can walk away and not help her.
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IloMer In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-10 17:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I understand that, I just personally feel that the crimes (especially for Olivia) are a bit over-the-top. That's just me though. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the story and can't wait for more!
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SBBeauregarde In reply to IloMer [2018-07-10 18:46:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's fair enough. I'm glad you did like the story though.
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Fmore1231 [2018-07-10 00:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Why did I have the feeling the spoiled rich bitch was going to die first (well anyway now I cause you can say she’s daddies dead girl)
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Fmore1231 [2018-07-10 00:44:11 +0000 UTC]
It's horror, of course, the rich bitch dies first haha. What do you think of the plot of the story?
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Fmore1231 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-10 04:43:26 +0000 UTC]
Well I was expecting a good horror story/movie on here at one point.
mow this sounds weird to me but I was happy the rich one does first when I read the candy man was grabbing a hose I said to myself welp at least the bitchy one died first I wonder if anyone who will be the next one to die and how.
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Fmore1231 [2018-07-10 11:44:35 +0000 UTC]
You should from here on out. Thoughts on the characters?
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Fmore1231 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-10 21:24:10 +0000 UTC]
Well almost all of them were except for the rich bitch which rhymes
she deserved to die first in my opinion everyone else even the killer is more like able then that rich inch what ever her name was (see that is how unlikeable she is to me)
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SBBeauregarde In reply to Fmore1231 [2018-07-10 23:28:51 +0000 UTC]
Lol. Any suggestions on things you'd like to see?
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Fmore1231 In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-11 02:17:46 +0000 UTC]
I would say some more mini series other than that nothing to add to the candy man stories
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FizzyKink [2018-07-09 23:21:42 +0000 UTC]
so fair to say this has nothing to do with the Clive Barker film
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SBBeauregarde In reply to FizzyKink [2018-07-09 23:24:38 +0000 UTC]
No, nothing at all, completely different.
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FizzyKink In reply to SBBeauregarde [2018-07-09 23:26:46 +0000 UTC]
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SBBeauregarde In reply to FizzyKink [2018-07-09 23:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Dude, you really are weird....
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