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ScarletDevil1503 — Kiss
Published: 2012-06-22 18:59:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 17372; Favourites: 908; Downloads: 222
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Description Knees bend, hands shake,
Lips part, hearts break,
Blood pumps, thoughts fly,
Bodies melt, worries die,
Heads swim, fingers touch,
Tongues rub, clothes bunch.

Butterflies, adrenaline,
Testosterone and estrogen,
We fit like a glove, so...
Kiss me again, love?
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Comments: 415

stichesBodyBagTtags [2016-03-11 01:05:59 +0000 UTC]

that is so great and hot

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Infinityfreehugzz [2014-06-10 04:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Lov it. Tamaki rocks

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InsatiableAddict [2013-06-28 15:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Great little piece.

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Heihechi [2013-06-17 16:48:36 +0000 UTC]

Great imagery, and use of sensual detail!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Heihechi [2013-06-17 21:32:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Heihechi In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2013-06-17 21:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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Mpuffle [2013-04-09 13:17:21 +0000 UTC]

blushingtamakiplz

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Mpuffle In reply to Mpuffle [2013-04-09 13:17:45 +0000 UTC]

That's the best name for a gif ever xD

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vampiress-chic7 [2012-12-25 10:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Drop the so... or more it to next line. It messes with four rhyme scheme. But I love it!!!

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hotshot1147 [2012-10-11 10:15:09 +0000 UTC]

nice, I liked the way you used those biological terms

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Lonely0Soul [2012-07-29 07:16:19 +0000 UTC]

O wow nicely done. You got people feeling it.

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Bluegoldstar12345 [2012-07-22 04:36:36 +0000 UTC]

prrrr...I love this it is so...SPICY

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Bluegoldstar12345 [2012-07-23 14:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thank you.

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Bluegoldstar12345 In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-07-23 21:13:09 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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soaked-paperhearts [2012-07-20 04:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Your poem flows impeccably! love it!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to soaked-paperhearts [2012-07-20 15:04:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you think so! Thank you.

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Chungphantomhive [2012-07-16 17:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Cute ^.^

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Chungphantomhive [2012-07-20 15:03:50 +0000 UTC]

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KMusicDreamer [2012-07-16 16:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Oooh. Beautiful! Perfect.

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to KMusicDreamer [2012-07-20 15:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you!

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KMusicDreamer In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-07-20 22:52:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. It's true.

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misshayleeelizabeth [2012-07-16 02:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow this one is good too. It describes how a first kiss would be like LOL.

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to misshayleeelizabeth [2012-07-16 14:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm glad you like it.

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Djbones98 [2012-07-14 21:18:38 +0000 UTC]

oh i love this, awsomely accurate

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Djbones98 [2012-07-15 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]

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Aifos96 [2012-07-10 07:17:50 +0000 UTC]

aaaah, so awesome!!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Aifos96 [2012-07-11 23:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Aifos96 In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-07-12 15:21:28 +0000 UTC]

np!

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Sigma-Echo-Seven [2012-07-09 04:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Excellent rhythm!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Sigma-Echo-Seven [2012-07-09 15:36:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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squibblyquill [2012-07-07 16:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow nicely done.

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to squibblyquill [2012-07-07 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TiaTitan [2012-07-07 01:28:36 +0000 UTC]

So so cute! I love it

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to TiaTitan [2012-07-07 15:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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suchiMANGOLASSI [2012-07-04 08:57:09 +0000 UTC]

this is so sweet!!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to suchiMANGOLASSI [2012-07-06 13:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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I-TsarevichAlexei13 [2012-06-29 15:11:17 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely lovely! I love the way it flows

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I-TsarevichAlexei13 [2012-06-29 15:10:50 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely lovely! I love the way it flows

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to I-TsarevichAlexei13 [2012-07-01 23:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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I-TsarevichAlexei13 In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-07-20 19:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Your so very welcome dear!!!

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Mizwoman [2012-06-29 14:58:18 +0000 UTC]

i did that not too long ago
xDDD

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Mizwoman [2012-07-01 23:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, me too.

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Mizwoman In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-07-01 23:51:35 +0000 UTC]

xDD

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Pinopika [2012-06-29 03:43:50 +0000 UTC]

soo cute!1!
i love it!!!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to Pinopika [2012-06-29 13:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Pinopika In reply to ScarletDevil1503 [2012-06-30 21:30:35 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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PoeticLeo21 [2012-06-29 00:08:00 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful.

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to PoeticLeo21 [2012-06-29 00:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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BulletsEmbrace [2012-06-28 20:12:58 +0000 UTC]

So sweet!!

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ScarletDevil1503 In reply to BulletsEmbrace [2012-06-28 21:05:25 +0000 UTC]

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