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Published: 2014-01-04 12:55:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3259; Favourites: 208; Downloads: 85
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im sorry for the LQ, i already am too lazy to resize it to smaller size me so tired
SO YEAH
I KNOW
LONG ABSENCE
here we present CYANO's debut project: Monochrome Conscience
a beautiful story about fate from =arurue
i am seriously doing this for long half of a year and i am so sorry if the style changes and you felt tricked by the cover //i know the cover's quality is so far from the inside please forgive me
the flash comic is heavily influenced by `yuumei 's flash comic and her tutorial
the quality is of course far below her works but i fancy her and hope this work might even get closer to the quality i try to find in myself
the music used in this flash comic:
Another - Track 7
Lost Oddysey - Sign of Hope
The Piano - The Promise
and i dont know what else to say
even though when i was planning things to say in this comment section a lot but i just went blank when im actually writing it now lol
i just hope you all, the readers, enjoy reading this
and so sorry if you have any error on this, im not really used using flash and my dear pc already lag a LOT
and im so sorry if the songs arent really matched with the setting
im really blind about music
and im BEGGING you guys, if you do have any critiques for this flash comic, please do tell me! that'll help me alot to be a better artist
thank youu <3Story (c) =arurue
Illustrations and flash (c) *scatteredsnow
now get back to hiatus and doing commissions
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Comments: 57
thank you for the critique!! and yes english isnt our main language but we'll make sure the next one will have a better grammar and is easier to be understood
thanks a lot! your critique help us alot~ :*
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Ok cool! Good luck, you are most welcome, and I'll keep my eyes open for more of your work in the future!
Also something that has helped me a lot with anatomy is posemaniacs.com, I highly recommend practicing with their 30 second drawings.
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firts of all , this flash comic is personally simply awesome. the concept is very deep and astonishing . the ending moves intensely the audience and it surprizes them.
tecnically the flash is highly well realized , it has no bugs or problems of any genres.
as for the drawings, they are realized with a good tecnique , really well shaded. i think that there s really a big contrast between the monochrome drawings and the colored one to give a strong and above all, a metaphorical effect. in fact , in my opinion all the work plays on this metaphor between color/monochrome and life/death. it may seems obvious , but it isn t at all.
there are sometimes very little anatomy imprecisions, but they re not evident at all so they totally don t ruin anything. moreover there s an huge concern to details; even if there are a lot of drawings , the author gives attencion to all them .
the character design is very cute. the protagonist are alone in all the narration but this fact stress what they rapresent. the girl perfectly portray an image of hope; she s the colors , the life , the salvation of the protagonist.In the other hand, He feels that he lack of something and that thing is her , the colors , the life.....
also the background are well realized and studied.
the narration is emotionant and not common at all. in my opinion it s really easy to be touched, mouved and even fell in love with this work.
the musics are really well chosen , they give a dramatic and deep effect from the beginning to the end.
i m really sorry for my bad english. i m italian but i put effort into this critique
i really hope the author will like it!
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omg you flatter me
thank you so much for the critique~ we'll work even harder to make this better and better <3 hope you'll enjoy our next flash comic
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OMG next comic???!!!!Β
i can t wait!! >7< lemme know moreeeeΒ
IM so happy you appreciated the critique!!
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Music is the same as the one in I Ain't Pinocchio Β o0o
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May I have the names of the music that you used... I found it simply relaxing and reassuringΒ Β
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This is a lovely concept and story! Yet, and I'm sorry, the grammar is a bit awkward. But I guess it's the idea that matters the most.Β
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That....that was absolutely B E A U T I F U L
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This is adorable!
first when the girl came I got like: OMG I HAVE PAINTED A DRAWING LIKE THAT, ONE BOY IN A WORLD OF BLACK AND WHITE AND A GIRL WHO CAST COLORS HERE LIKE A BLOOMING FLOWER C":
jierodkmredfm LOVELY!
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omg aaaaaa cerita sama gambarnya keren bangetttt ;;//7//;;
ga bosen meskipun dibaca berkali kali aaaaa //7//
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aaaaaaaaaaaaa //7// thank you kiraaa <3 //cipok
baca ampe 100 kali ya siapa tau dapet doorprize <3 /ga
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thank you! glad to see you like it
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thanks for reading!! and no dear you're more beautiful
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TrΓ¨s jolie histoire et une superbe morale , bravo! Les dessins sont jolis mΓͺme si parfois ils semblent rΓ©alisΓ©s bien plus hΓ’tivement que d'autres et la diffΓ©rence se ressent.
quant Γ la colorisation , elle est jolie mais pour moi, elle manque de douceur
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I--I dont know what you say in here
but--but since i saw there is a "bravo" in here i should say my thank you here
thank you so much <3
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oh ~~<3 , i'll try to say it in english okay ? I'll do my best >w< so here is what "i said" ("i wrote" is maybe most appropriated)
a very beautifull story fulled of emotions and a superb moral (i guess it's the same word as in french) , bravo! Β Drawings are cute but we can see the difference between the moments when you paid attention a lot and the moment when you did the draws fastly.
For the use of the colours , it's superb , but , to me , most sweetness for the blue , green and pink may be better
But of course , you did a magic work !
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I really enjoyed it. It felt like I was reading something importent about my life when I read it. So really good job at it you did something deserving a award in my humble opinnions.Β
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awww thank you so much <3 im really glad to know it was something important to you
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gaah,gambarnya bagus bangeet ;w; lagunya juga cocok sama jalan ceritanya~
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uuuuuu thank youuuu ///w/// ma---masa sih lagunya cocok-- //gapede /dibuang
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Oh my. This is really gorgeous and beautiful!
It's absolutely perfectly portrayal of 'choices' and 'fate'! You have really put a lot of heart into this ^^
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uuuu //w// thank youu <3 im glad you feel like that
and yes
a lot
of
hearts
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feelsnya dapet banget lho dari gambar maupun ceritanya~ good job~
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hehe thank youu~ <3 what do you love most about it?
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Hm I think I love most the story and how it was put into illustrations *-*
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omg xD thank youuuu!! <3 very happy you feel like that abot this amateur comic
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So Much Feels !!!! And the music... Just perfect !
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because
feels
are
everywhere /what
thank youuu~ i thought the music is out of place
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Ho no ! That's a beautifull flashcomic ! Β
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