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this is something really basic i just put together as i went along. based it round an advertisement for a new range being launched by "discipline" (again its fake). mainly concentrated on the typography herecomments and feedback would be appreciated on this one as would be nice to see how people react to it
*note: also, i no funk rush uses this colour scheme, i think its cool so used it
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Comments: 64
incognitoWolfe [2006-11-06 20:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely laid out... great use of white space and CMYK colors Very Swiss Design like.
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DanielDytrych [2006-10-17 12:26:30 +0000 UTC]
Helvetica is the king of fonts. I really like this. If helvetica wasn't here, I wouldn't like no way near as much.
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Solarpitch [2006-05-17 23:50:07 +0000 UTC]
Hey . . I like this. Its very basic but works very well . . . I might try my own soon and you can check mine out
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Scazza In reply to Solarpitch [2006-05-18 00:52:45 +0000 UTC]
thanks, if you do, let me know and i will check it out
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riseTM [2006-04-13 17:16:27 +0000 UTC]
This is great. I need to do more type work. That one thing i'm lacking...
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PeNr1 [2006-03-24 10:01:25 +0000 UTC]
Really cool, but I see 3 spelling mistakes in a minute .
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epbs [2006-03-05 23:01:49 +0000 UTC]
this looks alot like a poster by the bahaus. thats spelt wrong lol. very cool layout. x
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Scazza In reply to epbs [2006-03-06 00:15:20 +0000 UTC]
yea, should start proof readin my work, bad habbits hehe
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spookit [2006-01-19 13:45:50 +0000 UTC]
I love the use of the cmyk colours here. What really bothers me though are two things:
1: the uncomfortable space on the edges with the large use of postproduction. Its not a small enough space to be cropped, but its not large enough to flow I feel and it creates some bad tension on the sides.
2: the heavy lines with the stars throws the symetry (sp?) off a little, making the top left sides heavier than the rest of the piece.
Aside from the face that its Helvetica (I loathe this font ) its a good piece. I like the flow and the layout. Nice job.
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spookit In reply to Scazza [2006-01-20 18:15:36 +0000 UTC]
np. im practicing too. lol. we do crits alot in class now. >.<
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alexbipbip [2006-01-19 13:12:56 +0000 UTC]
oh this is great!!!!!!!
i love the way u use typography!
love it
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lemontea [2006-01-19 04:20:38 +0000 UTC]
Awesome typography and I really like those trendy colours.
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Scazza In reply to lemontea [2006-01-19 11:17:57 +0000 UTC]
thanks 'lemontea, appreciate it
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phrantyx [2006-01-19 01:25:01 +0000 UTC]
Love the mirror image of the text, it has some real-life flair to it, rather than just putting a whole typography there.
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Scazza In reply to phrantyx [2006-01-19 11:19:42 +0000 UTC]
thanking you for the kind words D
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untitledSG [2006-01-19 00:34:54 +0000 UTC]
really like....really like the treatment of the type setting and also the hiearchy created by the use of 2 completly different typefaces
also like the colours/ lack of!
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Scazza In reply to feel-numb [2006-01-18 22:47:09 +0000 UTC]
haha, i should really brush up on reading my work once its finished lol.
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smashmethod [2006-01-18 20:55:00 +0000 UTC]
Looks good. The CMYK scheme works well. You wouldn't happen to remember the name of the font in which "discipline" is written in, would you?
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Scazza In reply to smashmethod [2006-01-18 22:46:01 +0000 UTC]
i believe its called "Baskerville".
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smashmethod In reply to Scazza [2006-01-18 23:39:31 +0000 UTC]
Baskerville is a super-old school angular serif. Like this: [link]
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Scazza In reply to smashmethod [2006-01-19 00:04:32 +0000 UTC]
opps, justchecked and its called "Beckett Regular"
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lemontea In reply to Scazza [2006-01-19 04:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Rock on! I totally love that font.
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taejo [2006-01-18 19:59:24 +0000 UTC]
Really cool. It's not often you see a bit of good typography.
One thing:the d in the big dost-drocuction doesn't line up exactly with the line that comes out of it (if you know what I mean). Looks unintentional. Is it?
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spritek [2006-01-18 18:54:35 +0000 UTC]
I prefer the bottom part, and I'm not sure about putting "both" together: something strange
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Scazza In reply to spritek [2006-01-18 19:05:02 +0000 UTC]
yea, i prefer the bottom too, but the top was way too blank to leave it so i decided it needed to be have something there.
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