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It's Hard To Break Bad Habits
Published: 2008-01-08 06:59:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 5273; Favourites: 166; Downloads: 32
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If I allow my tongue totouch the top of my teeth
to the bottom to utter a
"I Love you"
tonight, does it mean I
can't say it again?
I bite my nails
as I recoil, remembering
the bad habit, barely making
progress in this patience
plaguing, somber, far from serene
nightfall dream.
12:31am,
two minutes since we last
said our good-byes,
good-nights, good-wishes of
sleepfully peaceful mind shows.
Feels like an eternity since
we last spoke, while Eternity
waits by the door,
readying to again make my heart
long so long for you.
~she has always been
so successful in her
endeavors~
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Comments: 105
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How come my poems never get into the newest category?
D8
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Ummm.... I'm not really sure..... *shrugs*
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concrats to the DD!
i really like your poem...
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Thank you so much.
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THANK you! I love the title, too.
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this is really good..*faving* i like the full title the best. ^^
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Thank you so much!
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you're welcome!
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I love the full title... and the first stanza (particularly because of the "allow my tongue to/touch the top of my teeth/to the bottom"). But I also love the whole damn thing. Congrats on a DD well-deserved!
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Thank you thank you. Glad you liked that line, too.
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i hate goodbyes. it's a bad bad baad habit
i 
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It is, it is. And thank you! Glad you like it.
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Thank you thank you.
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This is really beautiful--I was surprised it was from a male's viewpoint (I checked your cool gallery) because I imagined a young, timid, insecure female expressing these feelings. I love it none the less....congrats on the DD!!!
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I think that's a good thing, right? lol
Thank you.
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I love reading the DD literature bits. They're always outstanding and facinating. I love the full title, really interesting. There's some nice descriptive imagery in here... feels like a warped love letter. Interesting.
I love this bit.
"plaguing, somber, far from serene
nightfall dream."
Mmm.
Congrats!
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Thank you so much! And glad this met with your expectations.
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i wish we stop measuring time ... i wish time to stop measuring our lives ...
and beautiful moment become eternal ...
but i wonder .. if we pause at one moment ... are we missing more beautiful moments to come?!
or one beautiful moments is enough to breed eternal moments ...
u've expressed abnormal human feelings abnormally ... definitely what you have is abnormal .. (:
i totally agree with the love letter issue above (;
congrats for the DD! (:
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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I found this by typing 'nail biting' into the search for some dumb journal thing. I love it! 
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Yes, you can feature it! Glad you enjoyed the piece, too.
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Congrats on the DD.
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its perfect,
i've always wished someone had written me a love letter, the ones i got were always childish or way over dramatic, i dont know, this poem just reminded me that i have always just wanted a love letter, that i could read over and over and over, etc .. and over again, till it wore old and the ink started to fade.
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Aww, so picture perfect. 
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your really should stop being so talented
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Thank you much, sir!
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sir? 
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