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Published: 2014-08-04 10:44:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description ~Ugly Little Butterflies~





The wind spreads the seeds all around
sends them shuffling around
like dead maggots in the dirt

The bleeding heart that found the rum
forgot all about the bottom of the glass

waiting is all that matters
and washes away
what bled through earlier today






Ugly Little Butterflies © J-Goth/Amanda P.
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Comments: 7

FoolSightBlind [2014-08-04 13:16:58 +0000 UTC]

its a cliche'... but being able to express it can help... i hope it does... wish you the best in battle

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Script-Interactive In reply to FoolSightBlind [2014-08-04 14:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, kindly. Your support helps a lot. How did you feel about the poem?

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FoolSightBlind In reply to Script-Interactive [2014-08-04 14:02:27 +0000 UTC]

I liked that it was clean and concise, didnt try dressing it up, just straight emotion

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Script-Interactive In reply to FoolSightBlind [2014-08-04 14:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I ask because that's the energy I'm running on and I know people can see it by reading it but hopefully what's to come will be more positive and interesting. 

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FoolSightBlind In reply to Script-Interactive [2014-08-04 14:28:53 +0000 UTC]

For you, i hope its more positive as relectyion of you getting past stuff, for us as reader, positive or negative, your writing is art

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Script-Interactive In reply to FoolSightBlind [2014-08-06 00:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I appreciate your kind words.

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FoolSightBlind In reply to Script-Interactive [2014-08-06 02:39:17 +0000 UTC]

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