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Description:"Ebony, a young and strong-willed Monsaru warrior has just completed her fifteen-year training at the national institution of Sarutia. Before she can claim her title in the elite military class she must travel on a journey of self-discovery and learn how to hone into her spiritual magic and her link to the deity, Sypherus. However, on the way she crosses paths with a mysterious character whose origins are from a tribe that had disappeared nearly three hundred years ago. Through some curious connection he begins to follow her in shadow, simultaneously fulfilling the deeds of a powerful Nekorian lord from the land of Aneko, a race in which the Monsarutians are currently at war with. In this world, the transfer of energy through the use of magic and electromagnetism keeps the planet of Sypher alive and the balance between positive and negative forces is crucial to the survival of the inhabitants and their deity. The cycle has become disrupted and darkness grows in the hearts of the people, their wickedness staining the purity of their god. Without the power of the lost tribe the planet is doomed to collapse, but could this mysterious stalker and his affiliation with Ebony hold the power to prevent the looming destruction?"
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This summary may change, so if you're confused I can enlighten you.
HA! It's coming folks, I've released my cover page for book one of my graphic novel Shadow's Mark. All that is left for me to do is get the website in a reasonable state (even if I don't like it) and get it up and running.
I can't say I'm entirely pleased with how this came out, I even drew it on paper first so I could perfect the anatomy but the characters are standing funny. Razor isn't that big in the novel, he's leaner and athletic but I was looking at a thicker body type when identifying the muscles. Unfortunately, this anatomy is better than what you'll see in the actual comic, but hey you're not paying for it so no worries, it's my headache. Another thing is that I designed everything in blue when the shadow actually glows purple and red. The blue just looked so much prettier... D; it's my addictive color.
I must say I feel kinda weird revealing my story finally after two years in the making. Such a shame I only have one chapter completed, I'm afraid it doesn't explain enough to get people into the characters. I tried making it as professional as I possibly could, so I went the extra mile to purchase books and fonts for it. The title font I designed in Illustrator.
Understand that the process of making this project has been a lot of hard work for both myself and my friends, so much credit to them for their generous amount of help.
I have been prowling about people's deviations checking for similarities to my version of anthro monkeys trying to create a recognizable difference, an obvious one being the eyes. Those white pupil bug-eyes had to go. Also to note, ALL metallic parts come off. These aren't robot monkeys in the slightest, please do not mistake them for it because my primates are called Monsarutians. I only kept the primate species because that's what Razor and Ebony are, I didn't want to turn them into anthro dogs or wolves... everyone does that.
Will I keep drawing Robot Monkey Raz and Ebs?
Maybe. I still love their original designs and may doodle them from time to time, but I'm probably going to switch over. I've been sitting on the srmthfg throne for a long time. XD Peter Pan needs to grow up now. If you're seriously going to stop enjoying Razor and Ebony because they aren't robot monkeys anymore I'm sorry you'll miss out on such a far better story than I ever wrote for their fandom. I still appreciate all the love they've gotten from you guys.
Can I try to draw their new designs/ How to Credit?
I have no problems with fanart just as long as under the deviation it says my name somewhere in the description. You spend two years on constant character redesign, storyboarding, and whatnot and see why I'm going to throw about my copyright. I'll calm down again once my project is underway and new people can find the originals without mistaking frauds.
Razor and Ebony's personalities have been slightly altered for the better. G-2 Ebony will kick your ass, she's a hard-core soldier. G-2 Razor is the same but he's not so "broken" as before where he seems practically invincible. Invincible characters are not cool at all. XD Over all they have more human problems and ambitions, which I think is easier for people to connect with.
Hope you enjoy!
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Photoshop CS5/ Illustrator CS5 and Wacom Intuos 3.
Shadow's Mark and all related characters are copyright to Anastasia Cherubin
Written by Anastasia and Daniel Fox, Editing by Lauren Ackerly.
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Comments: 56
lthawkins [2011-12-15 02:12:56 +0000 UTC]
I think it's gonna take me a while to get use to Razor's new eyes. Regardless, their new designs are hardcore. ^^ Razor looks like his build would allow him to keep both the strength and agility of an athlete, I don't think he's too big if you're worried about that. But it's your call. I may attempt him if I get a chance.
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Scyrel In reply to lthawkins [2011-12-15 05:10:30 +0000 UTC]
I had to get used to those eyes too. First time I drew them they creeped me out a little. XD
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Sohanna [2011-12-12 00:40:26 +0000 UTC]
What I love about Ebony in this picture is that, unlike most heroines, she looks exactly like you've described her in your summary, as in, not at all a Mary Sue. She looks like she's ready to kick butt. Razor looks as badass as ever. I'm looking forward to everything.
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Scyrel In reply to Sohanna [2011-12-12 02:11:06 +0000 UTC]
Ebony does have my attitude towards men and such, but yeah she's not me at all. XD
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Scyrel In reply to gingaxh [2011-12-12 02:10:22 +0000 UTC]
Eventually but not for a long time. With a new story I had to start them all over again, so the pair are back to hating each other. It's like the original story I had for their little monkey selves but told in much more detail.
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Dava-Hydan [2011-12-11 16:25:19 +0000 UTC]
The plot sounds very good and exciting!
Actually is more than good! Its something on MY TASTES!
I am very curious and am already into the story
Oh and gotta say: those letters are sooo damn kick ass!
-wants them too-
The designs?
They still keep many similaritys with ur anthro robot monkeys style but compared to the original Ciro Nieli one... NOT at all
I'm glad u decided to keep them monkeys though
I personally think at what u call Razor and Ebony G1 and G2
As totally different characaters
I won't even try to compare them too much
Well! Can't wait to read it and to see what u have prepared for us, ur little fan base
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Scyrel In reply to Dava-Hydan [2011-12-11 18:10:58 +0000 UTC]
When I drew the earlier anthro monkeys it was me itching to show their new designs, but I wasn't fully ready to reveal them yet. XD I'm glad they're not similar to the robot monkeys, I've been aiming for that for two years trying to still keep them primates but not their 3 foot selves. It was a hard break I'll admit, like an addiction. xP
They're my letters, my made up font!
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Dava-Hydan In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-11 19:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Haha I see
Well u really did a good job from my point of view and looks very interestig
Though I the story is a fantasy one with tribes and stuff
Ebonys clothing looks kinda modern
Like a sports suit or something!
Oh! And by ur description the story seems to be more around adventure side
How much will be romance?
Should we expect the story to be more romantic or more action?
Cannot wait for the badass ebony!
Let the bad ass ebony come O:
Oh! Yeahhh! XD that's why I want iiit O:
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Scyrel In reply to Dava-Hydan [2011-12-11 21:24:42 +0000 UTC]
Well yeah, they have tribes and such but there is a modern side to things. They don't have computers to our standards though, it's kinda unclear what specific time period because they are mixed with both modern tech and old style ways. Part of the reason is because the cat people have hit their industrial age and they have the more modern advances. It's where science and magic tend to draw the line. Magic people have more of a natural air about them while science has machines and raw materials.
It is a sports suit, made of spandex and underneath is a hard breast plate. I had them nude for a long time but changed it because of what people may think. Now soldiers, like Ebony, wear these lightweight and short outfits to prevent snaring, and free movement. Normal people have those clothes you'd find in the story Huckleberry Finn. Mid 1900s I think.
This story is actually more action. I've suffocated everyone with really cliche razony in the past so I restarted the pairing entirely and the two are back to hating each other. The romance is subtle throughout most of it and I have a third character who brings trouble to the two of them.
With other people helping me and giving input, it's really improved my thoughts on how I've been writing for my characters. I must say I'm kinda embarrassed with some of the things I've written.
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Dava-Hydan In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-13 20:19:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow! That surely sounds interesting! I truly enjoy the concept!
What about the society??
Do they have diffrent strong belives and/or morals that would stand out specifically?
True and not! The original razony was a more teenage fantasy story!
Something like twilight but actually good and well developed!
Which was very catchy!
now u are older and more mature!
So it is normal to have a more realistic love story!
I had a feeling there would be a 3rd character!
The eyes in the poster and/or the hand...
Outside help is good! It makes u see things different!
Besides! XD many things sound stupid when u say them out loud! Even though in head sound so good!
Emberassed?!
They were kinda soapy! Butttt u were a child and u had ur fantesie xD
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Scyrel In reply to Dava-Hydan [2011-12-13 20:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Society? Well there are a lot of other details I have left out of this narrative, but my editor was too busy to take a look at what I wrote so I gave it my best shot. Religiously everyone pays homage to one god. (that's because god actually showed himself), but Ebony and Razor have different goals if that's what you mean.
Third character doesn't show up till chapter 3 or 4 and my friend and I decided he shouldn't be part of the first cover. xD
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Dava-Hydan In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-16 17:52:33 +0000 UTC]
ohhh! u have an editor an stuff?
ohh~
a true team behind the magic
NO?! O:
darn~
im mostly curious about the new characters!
they are NEWWW! DAMN IT! xD
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Scyrel In reply to Dava-Hydan [2011-12-16 20:55:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the only solo job is the graphics part of it.
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DeceptiGal [2011-12-11 09:51:39 +0000 UTC]
I gotta say, I can't wait to see the first chapter! hope you get it up soon!
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love-within-u [2011-12-10 22:13:25 +0000 UTC]
I look at this and suddenly feel insignificant....hahaha
Awesome work
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RubyRose364 [2011-12-10 21:46:09 +0000 UTC]
OMG! THIS IS FREKEN AWSOME EVIL! XD hahah <3 and love thir slightly changed personalitys >W<
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EerieIdeal [2011-12-10 21:37:48 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done! I believe that you have more of my attention now. The summary and the story behind it make the comic sound like an interesting read. I also love how Razor and ebony's anthro-likeness has made them more into a species of your design (with the details we have come to love with their robotic simian selves). I also like that this is more revolving around Ebony and focused on her. And thatshe's more of a hard core fighter.
The image is pretty amazing. I am eagerly awaiting to read this. I didn't see any flaws anatomy wise. The blue kinda set the mood and was a great choice.
I must say, you have inspired me.
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Scyrel In reply to EerieIdeal [2011-12-10 21:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I'm glad you think it works. I actually chose blue because when I googled movie posters a lot of them were black and blue. The anatomy they have on this cover page is how I draw them now and will continue into the future chapters. So I am getting better as I go along through the story and hopefully by the end of all 14 chapters I'll be really good. XD
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EerieIdeal In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-10 22:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Lol, hopefully. I wish you the best of luck!
Also, I'm surprised that I like this like I do. I'm not a "furry" fan (clearly...robots are my forte). But something about the design and the concept just draws me in. Something different.
My friend would kill me if he hears about my liking for this comic. He despises furries. XP
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Scyrel In reply to EerieIdeal [2011-12-10 22:30:55 +0000 UTC]
XD I personally don't consider them furries, I'm not a furry either but I love animals. Honestly speaking he should suck it up and read it anyway because it's not a typical DA or Furaffinity comic. This comic is about judging a book's cover and how it's wrong. xD
Well, maybe give me a chance to get a few chapters up before dragging uninterested viewers in. XD
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EerieIdeal In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-10 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Lol. Probably a good idea.
Though he may or may not like it, I'll suggest it to him. The more people know about it the merrier, right?
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gingaxh [2011-12-10 21:08:46 +0000 UTC]
Cool but still dont get your story.
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"Scourge Rulez"
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Scyrel In reply to gingaxh [2011-12-10 22:08:22 +0000 UTC]
In the main story the planet Ebony and Razor live on is dying because dark energy is outweighing the good. The primates posses magic and the felines (nekorians) bear the skill of creating machines and the process of using these tools recycles energy. Ebony is just a soldier in training and will become a high class soldier once she completes her extra task, but the more she associates with Razor the more her eyes become open to truth about herself and the people around her.
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Elitemonkeys [2011-12-10 21:00:31 +0000 UTC]
Alas the old versions of them will be missed but the new versions are so bada** i cant wait to see more ^^
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Tauria-Love [2011-12-10 20:09:05 +0000 UTC]
This looks so cool! ^.^ I can't wait to actually start reading this! I like the new Razor and Ebony design; they look awesome.
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AmythistAngel07 [2011-12-10 16:48:00 +0000 UTC]
Holy... this is amazing. Just gobsmacking amazing. It's a wonderful way to take an idea you love and to expand it so that you can use it in different portfolios, possibly make monkey, etc. I really love this and look forward to more!
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Scyrel In reply to AmythistAngel07 [2011-12-10 22:12:14 +0000 UTC]
If it gets popular enough I'll look into merchandise. XD
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Scyrel In reply to Shiranai-Atsune [2011-12-10 22:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's half of my name. My middle name is Anastasia and my last name is Cherubin. I don't share my first name online. XD
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RecklessKaiser [2011-12-10 14:53:04 +0000 UTC]
It's happening, it's finally happening and now we'll able to see their story, specially their story now with this change you did to ther personalities!
I also think it's a good change you will move into something that will test your skills and this anthro style you're now drawing is actually something worth of your great drawing skills, Anastasia.
I can't wait to read your novel and give you some feedback, I'm sure I'll enjoy it!
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Scyrel In reply to MOONSTRUCKGURL [2011-12-10 22:11:43 +0000 UTC]
It's God's hand. XD The eyes belong to Razor's master. There are a couple subtle graphics in this cover page, can you find them? XD
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Scyrel In reply to MOONSTRUCKGURL [2011-12-11 02:44:27 +0000 UTC]
Well they both are in the background. xD I think I'll be the only one understanding the importance of every detail I've placed in this cover. The stone wall has both blood stains on it (very hard to see) and a symbol that is also seen as the "O" in Shadow.
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Starly98 [2011-12-10 12:13:52 +0000 UTC]
This is just TOO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for more
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ShelliStar [2011-12-10 11:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I like how they're G-2 XD
I will keep watching you, even if you change Razor and Ebs. No doubt I will miss the robot monkey versions, but! I understand its your choice, they're your characters. If people don't like that they can bugger off. I mean, when I changed my style I had some people being 'iffy' about it for some time before it died down XD
I say the cover looks fine and the summary for thev story sounds great to me <3 It actually gave me some little inspiration to write again, my problem is I dunno -what- XD
I love how the title ios written on the pic and Ebony and Razor's poses? Badass! I likes <3 Really nice job you have done so far hun, can't wait to see more <3
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Scyrel In reply to ShelliStar [2011-12-10 22:21:19 +0000 UTC]
Truth be told it took me about two years to break from the robot monkey design. XD My early anthro versions bear quite a few resemblances to their originals. The day I changed their eyes I felt all weird looking at them, but I had to get over it myself and accept the new changes. Now I love them like this, but I still love their 3-foot selves. XD For those who don't like it now, they may get over it later.
G-2 IS neat! XD Ponies...
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ShelliStar In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-11 14:10:58 +0000 UTC]
Ah well, ya had fun for that 2 years right? XD
Yeah, when you wanna change it takes time to get use to it yaself. Or sometimes you do one design, think its fine. Look at it again later and go 'Nah, could of done better' and redesign them again or more until ya happy <3
Oh yeah, people will get over it in the end, with the exception of few who may still ask. ( I still get people asking me -why- I don't draw my wolf character much, ugh XD )
God damn ponies! XD
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Scyrel In reply to ShelliStar [2011-12-11 16:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Well the other reason I won't be drawing them much is because I'll be taking a full load of classes so I probably won't be able to submit anything to DA for months. Same goes for chapter 2, which is a downright bummer. If I'm lucky I may finish the second chapter in August.
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ShelliStar In reply to Scyrel [2011-12-11 18:03:38 +0000 UTC]
Bloody hell, I wish ya good luck with all the workload hun <3
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o0Risa0o [2011-12-10 08:26:00 +0000 UTC]
actually, dark blue and purple is what's used to make shadows
Purple and blue are just some of the cooler(like cold) colors, and shadows are the ones that has no warm colors.
(I feel like Gibson giving a lecture)
I really love their revamp!
a more interesting story and a new look! love it!
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Scyrel In reply to o0Risa0o [2011-12-10 22:14:38 +0000 UTC]
Well yeah, but I'm just addicted to blue and it came out better in this than when I tried purple.
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shadow1alphalite [2011-12-10 07:23:24 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad that Razor and Ebony are still primates--to completely change their species would change who they are, I think. I'd like to see Razor leaner, yes, and besides that I'm wicked excited to see this story--safe to say the cover is a righteous hook!
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Eliyora [2011-12-10 07:07:12 +0000 UTC]
Whoa! This looks... whoa! I have been looking forward to your project since you first announced it, but now I'm sitting here going, "When'sitcomingoutwhen'sitcomingoutwhen'sitcomingout..." in my head. The summary sounds intriguing, to say the least, and I must admit, I like the idea of Ebs being a little more hardcore right off the bat. Monsarutians, huh? Nice name.
Overall, much love for this cover (even if you don't like it, I do) and much anticipation! If you were charging for it, I'd pay.
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