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BSDigitalQ [2013-02-11 16:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Oooo, me likey. And not just for those beauuuuuutiful curves.

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mzjoe [2012-12-31 15:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Great outfit! And I actually dig the pose - it's exaggerated, but obviously intended.

On the anatomy, her hands are a little too small, and her right 'cheek' is bigger than the left.

Work on your line work, vary the line widths. The outline is exactly the same everywhere - let it be more organic, sometimes thinner, sometimes thicker. The black lines in the hair are distracting - let your coloring do more of the work with texture and hair strands.

Overall you're on the right path, just keep working on technique! She's a great looking character, I'd love to take a stab at her myself!

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ArtimasStudio [2012-12-29 18:22:37 +0000 UTC]

nice work!

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Timmy-22222001 [2012-12-28 16:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Hats off on your excellent work here SDMcCarty and kudos included on the lady of choice, definitely would not mind at all fighting a bunny as sexy as her, yowza!

Good work on the nice backshot though and heck done a picture or two like this before and had trouble getting the anatomy right, amazing how your mind can bend and twist and yet never seems to realize the obvious. ^O^

Anycase that's not the case here, you've done marvelously the way you drawn this bunny and a very curvy one at that! Speaking of her curves, fine show on the way you layer up your own lines showing some good anatomy and a need to detail something like the curve of her spine to even the muscles that appear on the arms or around the shoulder, good on you.

Her pose is most interesting indeed and like the way she has almost a carefree sort of attitude on the way she's leaning back and has that calm expression on her face, very pretty. That too and nicely done on the way the way her costume looks and even the way the lines that curve around it seem to bend and sway with the movement of her body, now that's some talented work.

As for the colors too a great work on them for their very pink and cute looking nature SDMcCarty. Like the fact she has a very rich and flowing thing for her hair, give her look a much prettier feel and damn extra points on the you even thread the hair out to make it look that much smoother. o0o

Nice attention to some the lighting, on the way its shines on the tip of the suit and gives a sense of direction as the darkness on the opposite side makes areas like her booty or back of her arms seem darker and more realistic.

Hats off to you here SDMcCarty, this in one outstanding bunny to look at. *applauses*

Later,

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super-illustrator0 [2012-12-28 02:46:36 +0000 UTC]

My critique is straightforward... dive into some galleries of women with thick bootays.
You'll get a good sense of how to draw proportions there, 'cause they're incorrect here.

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