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Ha ha, time travel humor.
Prepare yourself, Trunks, things are about to get hairy for you.
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"Humor" is a bit out of Place, to say.
Honestly.
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Haha, time to dispel some notions about your father Trunks!
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Wow!! this is great work!! Too bad i sticked to stick comics XD I'm too lazy to draw LOL
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Yes she can >.>
Everyone makes mistakes sometimes, especially when you need them to
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I suppose...when are you gonna finish this?
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Have you read all the pages I published, or did you stop at this one?
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There are 8 more pages after this one (for now), if you wanna read them ^^
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Okay, except for the first page of chapter 3, I had already read all of that. But I am glad you're posting the rest.
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Since your comment was on that page, I thought you hadn't read the rest (:
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Ah, good point. Well, can't wait for the rest!
Maybe Trunks kills Vegeta and disappears! But then if he never existed, he could never go back in time and screw things up, so everything goes back to normal! YAAAAAAAAAY
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Even if he killed Vegeta in this timeline, Trunks wouldn't disappear, he'd just create an alternate universe!
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Yeah, an alternate universe where everyone is super weak and no one ever goes Super Saiyan, making their deaths by the Androids just that much more inevitable. And no Vegeta means no Trunks to go back and attempt to fix a different timeline! Nice going, Trunks!
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Really like those close ups of trunks. The shading in the lineart is done rather well.
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Hi SelphieSK,
This is the 1st time i set my eye on your page. Your story manga was amazing! even its not finished yet and the compositions drawing in boxes was great.
But sumthing bother me, its about your taste of choosing your drawing pen's eye size. It's not critic, but just wanted to give you some points to make better quality for your drawings. Like examples when the time Trunks set foot at some town [link] . I cant barely see any perspective. The town is like in the same position as he is, i meant it flat like pan cakes. LOL. my advise is for further subject used more fine pen, if the subject is near used more thicker size pen. ok?
Anyway, i know your giving your best at your drawing. Keep it up. I will watch you and all of your manga fan.
GOOD LUCK!!!!! d(>_<)b
p.s: Please update more quickly :-P
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Hi!
The town's looking like pancakes... LOL! Yummy!
I'm drawing with a 0.2 mm liner actually, which is already quite fine. I don't have anything finer than that, even though I'm planing on getting some. Your point stands though, even though personally, I don't see a problem with the perspective in that page. I guess if I had used a finer line, it would have looked better...
I'll keep that in mind though! Thanks for your comment because otherwise, I would never have noticed that!
PS: I update as fast as I can!
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Hi again,
I tot 0.1 is the finer ones? haha. Get yourself to Stationary store and get some!
Well maybe your point of view can't see it, but i can..LOL. Try the 0.1 drawing pen. It will look much better, I can guaranty it! using 0.2 line is ok with the character it's very suitable.
Go! Go! Ganbate Kudasai!
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trunks piss your dad off and go super saiyan whats funny is that in dragonball online trunks goes back in time with the players who take the time machine quest and you can fight nappa and vegeta
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Really?! (about Dragon Ball online) Well and here I thought I was being original
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no he doesn't actually talk to them but he takes the layers back to that time and many others to stop the time breakers go on youtube theres loads of videos
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If I were Trunks I'd be like, "Well crap." and get back in the pod set for home.
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And ruin my plot? Hell no! xD
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LOLs, I guess your right.
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AW... Poor Trunks, but awesome work! *U* Rock on! Can't wait for more! I LOVE your comic!
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Photoshop, and occasionally Manga Studio.
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Okay, I think it's a really good story, I look forward to reading more!
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"Vegeta, what does the scouter say about his power level?"
Boy, won't they be surprised when they meet him.
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Funny that you'd quote that line since I'm sooo goin' to use it
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OMG! I wanna see more! >W< This is awesome!
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very much like the orginal, but it confused me that you read it the regular way
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Since the text is in English, I don't really see the point of using the Japanese reading direction
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me neither, but i've read the books that way
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Maybe I'll add a little arrow at the top of the pages, to make sure people don't get confused
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I'm sure they'll figure out at some point
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Or maybe they won't, and rant about the story not making any sense
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