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I really like your comic, it's had my gut wrenching from how badly Trunks is messing up the timeline without even knowing it! My one qualm has been Vegeta's been too aggressive - seems like an ironic statement, but bear with me. Vegeta back during the Saiyan saga wouldn't get his hands dirty until Nappa had convinced him he was useless. So it doesn't make sense that Vegeta keeps lashing out in this.
All the same, you're characterization is pretty accurate for most the characters and I'm looking forward to seeing what you're ultimately going to do with this timeline
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I understand where you're coming from (:
I must admit I was never a fan of Vegeta not acting and just standing there looking pretty, but Trunks being there and seeming to be at least on par with Nappa power-wise is the main reason why he didn't just stand back until Nappa proved to be useless.
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Please I hate cocky people let trunks lay an ass whooping ssj style on scouter vegeta
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Why would he do that? x) That would be awfully OOC ^^
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Well I wouldnt say a whooping more like a swift future gohan chop to knock vegeta out!
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Allez allez je devine la suite *sort ses cartes de tarot*
Je prédiiis que Trunks va dévier le kikoha d'un main!
Pour tout dire je n'avais même pas remarqué que Végéta n'avait pas sa 'jupe' et sa queue. ^^
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hmm... Perdu
lol "sa jupe" XD
Je sais pas comment j'ai fait pour les oublier, mais bon
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Naaan j'ai perduuuu! (avoue t'a changé la page quand tu as vu mon incroyable prédiction hein? hein? 
Et oui je n'en démordrais pas, l'armure de veggie évoque une jupe, c'est tout *court avant que les fans en furie ne la lynchent* XD
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Wow, I've been gone too long. I missed 4 pages.
I'm glad Trunks saved Gohan from getting killed. But poor Veji, He has no idea how outclassed he is (considering Freeza is the most powerful he knows). And Trunks (in reference to the previous page) has no idea how important this fight is, as this was the fight that put everything in motion.
Art wise, I love all the expressions on page 2 and the perspective on this page in the last panel looks really great. You get a real sense of distance there. Though I seem to be missing a tail and some armor XD Oh well.
Great work once again
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Thank you! I always love reading your comments, they're always so in-depth ^^
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Glad you like them ^^ I always try to say more then just 'great' or 'awesome'.
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Ahh I am a bit late to see this week 
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This fan manga Is amazing, you've got yourself a new fan
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Thank you very much!
I used to draw on paper but I went fully digital starting this page . A good graphic tablet certainly makes life easier
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C'est de mieux en mieux au niveau du dessin ! C'est vraiment beau !
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Your editing is really clean! Can't say much about the translation itself, as I don't speak Chinese x)
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thanks,but the word like ‘voosh’ is hard to edit.
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I love this fan fiction so far. Keep up the good work!
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Oh nooo...! What a terrible thing...! At least, I know Trunk is stronger than his dad, in this period of the life...! But same! That's a little stressing! Can't wait for the next!
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== SILLY NITPICK ALERT ==
So what happened to Vegeta's tail as well as the groin and side pads of his armor in the last panel? 
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I have no idea how I could forget to draw his armor pads and tail xD I guess I was too focused on trying to make the perspective work.
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No biggie considering the perspective was rendered great.
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His armor pads are actually there.
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I was referring to the lower ones around Vegeta's waist. Pretty sure he did not lose those ones until after his beam struggle with Goku in the original timeline.
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Oh those ones. I thought you meant the shoulder ones. Sorry.
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No need to apologize. Easy misinterpretation of my comment.
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Trunks, here is five steps for what you have to do: 1- Send this blast to the air or back to him, 2- KO Vegeta, 3- Put him inside his spaceship, 4- Program the ship to send him back to his base, 5- Have a nice chat with Goku.
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Oh, btw, nice page
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Oh Vegeta. If only you knew. Not even going to scratch him. Right now Trunks is the strongest being in the universe so I third sonicgirl018 statement
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Jes ens que "papa" va prendre une rouste dans pas longtemps... xD
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comment va il le repousser 
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